how to write a good composition

英语写作总复习文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改匀仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwascompletelyfreethen,soIwilltosay“yes”.IwillarriveinBristolataround8pminFridayevening.∧theam﹨onIrecentlymadeasurveyaboutdifferentviewsonthenewEnglishtextbookamongmyclassmates.Accordingtothesurvey,80%ofthestudentsarequitesatisfyingwithit,while15%dislikeitand5%keepsilently.Studentswholikeitsayitcontainsmuchknowledges,thatcanopentheireyes.However,manyinterestingpicturescanmaketheminterestedthebook.However,studentswhodislikeitcomplainthereistoomanynewwordsanddifficultsentences,makethetextsdifficulttounderstand.Inconclusion,thenewEnglishtextbookhadhelpedmoststudentsmakeagreatprogressinEnglishstudy.satisfied∧﹨silentknowledgewhichinaremakinghasBesidesHowtowriteagoodcompositionAboveall,weshouldavoidmakingsomemistakesinit.常见的语法错误分析1.However,otherstudentsagainsttheidea.2.Iamnotbeastudentwhoiscrazyaboutmusic.缺少谓语多了谓语∧are/argueTips:“句子结构不对,一处扣2分”.3.Therehavemanyreasonsforthat.Therebe句型are句子结构1.DuJiangyanIrrigationProject,whichisbuilt2000yearsago,isstillworkingnow.时态错误Tips:“时态语态误用为大错,一处扣2分”.was动词2.Theaccidentwashappenedin1999.语态错误V-ing作主语V-ed作状语To2.Facingwithsomedifficulties,wecanturntoourteachersandclassmates.3.Improvemyspokenlanguage,IdecidetospendmoretimeonEnglish.FacedPlayingtodo目的状语1.Playcomputergamestoomuchisbadforhealth∧非谓语动词1.Frommypointofview,travelingabroadcanimproveourknowledgesandopenoureyes.不可数名词无复数形式subjectsknowledge2.Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasEnglish,Chineseandsoon.可数名词需考虑单复数名词的数混淆1.Computerisplayingaimportantroleinourlife.冠词错用冠词多余a2.It’sabadmannerstostareatforeigners.3.MyhometownLinhaiisbeautifultownwithmanyplacesofinterest.∧an缺少冠词冠词误用1.It’sconvenientforustotravelabroadbecausethedevelopmentofeconomy.缺少介词介词多余3.Theclimateinthereisverymild.∧of2.Somestudentsobjecttheplan.∧to介词4.Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.To介词误用2.Itisdishonestandfoolishlytocheatintheexam.形容词副词混用原形比较级最高级1.IthinkusingtheInternetisconvenientthanmakingatelephonecall.foolishTips:并列结构形式的一致性moreconvenient形容词和副词1.ThestudentswhoarelazytheyhavenointerestIndoinghomework.代词多余1.Themajorityofthestudentssupporttheideaandafewobjecttoit.while2.TheSmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.their指代内容不一致连词代词动词形，名词数还要注意形和副代词格，句子整介词短语需关注习惯用法要记住冠词连词常关注summaryHowtopolish(润色)yourcompositionUsecomplicatedstructuresandadvancedvocabulariesinaproperway.一、怎样运用复杂结构：1.改变语态Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)___________thattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)Itissuggested2.使用不定式3.使用过去分词Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般)Heis____kind______helpme.(高级)Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般)________manystudents,shewalkedoutoftheroom.(高级)soastoFollowedby4.使用v-ing形式Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(一般)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers,_______48pupils.(高级)teachingHedidn’tturnup.Anditdisappointedeverybody.(一般)_____________everybody___hedidn’tturnup.(高级)5.使用名词性从句Itdisappointedthat6.使用状语从句Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(一般)Themealwas___nice____weallenjoyeditverymuch.(高级)sothat7.使用定语从句IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(一般)ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English….(高级)8.使用虚拟语气Becausemyteacherhelpsme,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.(一般)_____thehelpofmyteacher,I_______________greatprogressinEnglish.(高级)withoutwouldn’thavemade9.使用强调句、感叹句来增强语句的表现力ldidn’trealizetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwelluntilthen.(一般)用强调句______________then____IrealizedtheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.Itisgreatfuntoclimbthehill.(一般)用感叹句____greatfunitistoclimbthehill!Itwasnotuntilthatwhat10.使用并列句Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,____________hefelt.(高级)themoreexcited二．怎样运用高级词汇：1.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.(一般)Theplan________tobeafailure.(高级)2.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)ShewenttoAustria______________studyingmusic.(高级)turnedoutforthepurposeof3.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(一般)________thegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.(高级)4.Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)She_____________________pronouncingtheword.(高级)Thankstohastrouble/difficultyin三．学会使用恰当的关联词：1.表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),otherwise,inspiteof,despite,regardlessof(不管,不顾),although,though,while.3.表示对比关系onthecontrary;Insteadof;ononehand…ontheotherhand;foronething,foranotherthing.2.表示递进、强调关系besides,furthermore,what’smore,inaddition,moreover,worsestill,tomakematters/thingsworse,6.表示解释、说明关系7.表示结论namely(也就是),actually,infact,asamatteroffact,suchas,forexample/forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothisinshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion,4.表示因果关系asaresult/consequence(of),owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccountof(由于),so,therefore,because,since,as5.表示时间、顺序关系shortlyafterwards(不久之后),first,second…,then,next,finally,intheend,eventually.DiscussionHowcanwesucceedinourlife?UsefulexpressionsItisastrongwillthatleadstosuccess.Knowledgeplaysanimport