非谓语动词在写作中的运用-公开课

Non-finiteVerbsinWriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用•1)Itisapopularrealityshow(真人秀)inChina.•2)FiveStar-dadstaketheiryoungchildrenonanovernighttripwithoutthecompanyofmoms.•3)Ithaswonhighratings(收视)sinceitwasbroadcastonOct11.Sharing&GuessingDoyouknowwhatitis?WatchingthisTVshow,wehadalotoffun.Howmanyactorsarethereintheshow?Whoarethey?爸爸:郭涛儿子:郭子睿(石头)爸爸:田亮女儿:田雨橙(Cindy)爸爸:王岳伦女儿:王诗龄(Angela)爸爸:张亮儿子:张悦轩(天天)爸爸:林志颖儿子:小小志(Kimi)RECDoyouremembersomeunforgettablemoments?Task1：MakingsentencesaccordingtokeywordsUsenon-finitetodescribethesepictures(连词成句)正确运用分词作状语1)SeeingXiaoHuangtakenaway,Kimifeltheart—broken.1)Kimi,seeXiaoHuangtakenaway,feelheart-broken2)Givenmorechances,childrencanperformbetter.2)Iftheyaregivenmorechanceschildrencanperformbetter1)Beingsuchabravegirl,Cindyismyfavoritekidamongthemfive.1)Cindy,issuchabravegirl,ismyfavoritekidamongthemfive.3.doing和done作原因状语2)Cindy,encourage,byherfather,decidetoslideonsandherself.2)Encouragedbyherfather,Cindydecidedtoslideonsandherself.1)Standinginfrontofthebed,Angelawashavinglunch.1)Angela,standinfrontofthebed,havelunch.4.doing和done作伴随状语2)Angela,comfort,byherfather,stopcrying.2)Comfortedbyherfather,Angelastoppedcrying.1)TianTianshowedhisloveforhismother,sendingheraflower.2)Guidedbyhisfather,TianTianslidedonsand.1)TianTian,showhisloveforhismom,sendheraflower2)TianTian,guide,byhisfather,slideonsand5.doing和done作方式状语1)ShiToubrokehisarm,causinghimtouseonlyonehand.2)ShiTouhurriedtothekitchen,onlytofindthereisnowaterforcooking.1)ShiTou,breakhisarm,causehimtouseonlyonehand.2)ShiTou,hurrytothekitchen,findthereisnowaterforcooking.6.1)doing作结果状语，表自然而然的结果。2).todo作结果状语，表意料之外的结果。•Tobuildupabetterrelationshipwiththeirkids,fivestar-daddiesdecidedtojointheTVshow.•fivestar-daddies，buildupabetterrelationshipwiththeirkids,decidetojointheTVshow7.todo作目的状语。•YishangmingtianshangkeyongTask2：SentencePatternTransformation(句型转换)Usenon-finitetodescribethesepictures——OralPractice掌握使用非谓语动词简化句子的用法WhentheyhadabirthdaypartforKimi,kidsarehappyandexcited.________________________________,kidsarehappyandexcited.HavingabirthdaypartforKimiAslongasshesawacamel,Angelawouldtouchitimmediately.___________________________,Angelawouldtouchitimmediately.SeeingacamelTianTianwascriticizedbyhisfather.Sohelookedunhappy._________________________,TianTianlookedunhappy.CriticizedbyhisfatherKimiheldchopsticksandaplateinthehands.Hewasrunning.___________________________________________________,Kimiwasrunning.HoldingchopsticksandaplateinthehandsTheygotsomefoodfordinnerbycatchingfishinthelake._______________________________,theygotsomefoodfordinner.CatchingfishinthelakeLinZhiyingbroketheegg,_______________.LinZhiyingbroketheeggandmadeCindycry.makingCindycry______________________,KimiaskedAngelatohelphimtakecareofhissheep.______________________,KimiaskedAngelatohelphimtakecareofhissheep.KimihopedtoplaywithCindy,soKimiaskedAngelatohelphimtakecareofhissheep.HopingtoplaywithCindyToplaywithCindyGroupworkandSharing:•Sharewhatyouhavelearnedwithothers,andtrytomakeasummary.•1)Whencanweusenon-finiteverbs?•2)Whatkindofnon-finiteverbscanweusetomakesentences?Simple：写作时，需要表示时间关系，可以用v-ing(主动)和done(被动)作时间状语。Task3：Theuseofnon-finiteinwritingtask非谓语动词在写作中的应用分析题目，写句子Writingtask:《爸爸去哪儿》（Dad，WhereAreWeGoing)这个电视节目广受欢迎。这个节目走红有以下几个原因：1.因为五个孩子很可爱，所以招人喜爱。2.为了让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会。3.通过沟通，父亲和孩子们建立了亲密关系，值得大家学习。4.与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比，这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱。写作要求：非谓语doing，done，todo至少各一个。要点1.因为五个孩子很可爱，所以他们招人喜爱。________________,thefivekidsareadmiredbymanypeople.要点2.为了让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会。_________________________________________________,theshowprovidedthemmanychancestoexplore.BeinglovelyInordertoletthekidsgrowanddevelop要点3.父亲和孩子们通过沟通，建立了亲密关系，值得大家学习。______________________________,fathersandkidssetupacloserelationship.要点4.与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比，这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱。__________________________likesingingcompetitions,thiskindofshowaboutfamilyismorepopular.CommunicatingwitheachotherComparedwithothershowsTask4：Theuseofnon-finiteinwritingtask非谓语动词在写作中的应用分析题目，写文章Writeacompositionandshareitwithothers.写作内容：高考临近，为了让自己放松，我们班决定今天去春游。一大早我们就出发了，由一个有经验的爬山者带领着。我们说着笑着爬上山。当我们到达时，我们就开始烧烤了。我们吃着大餐欣赏美景。虽然累但是我们很开心。写作要求：根据以上内容，用5个句子写一篇日记。题目、开头和结尾已经给出。要根据实际情况多使用非谓语动词。OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclassdecidedtohaveaspringouting.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning,guidedbyanexperiencedclimber.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havingabigdinner,weenjoyedthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.OnepossibleversionHomework:Writeacompositionafterclassandshareitwithothersnexttime.(2008年广东省高考基础写作题)请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作要求：1)使用5个句子（含至少一个非谓语动词）2)结构准确，内容完整，结构连贯。Practicemakesperfect!写作中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句，没有主句Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm.Part2.写作中定语从句的主要作用：1.增加词数LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcert.Theconcertwaswonderful.LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcertwhichwaswonderful.Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,whicharethe