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欢迎来到环球雅思海口分校IELTSWRITINGCOURSE环球雅思基础写作课程By:NancyXUName:NancyExperience:Morethan6years’teachingonEnglish(inSichuanUniversityandNewOrientalSchoolin2004and2007respectively);richexperienceonIELTS&TOEFL(Ipassedthoseexamswithveryhighmarks,especiallyonWRITING.)E-mail:[e-mail]?4Whyarewesoworried?雅思写作:试题结构20ms/40msPart2Part1Task1:Thechartshowsstudentexpenditureoverathree-yearperiodintheUnitedKingdom.Task2:Somepeoplebelievetherangeoftechnologyavailabletoindividualstodayisincreasingthegapbetweenpoorpeopleandrichpeople.Othersthinkitishavinganoppositeeffect。Discussthesepointsofview.Whatisyouropinion?链接:《剑七》TEST2&4雅思写作:试题内容Task1Charts:A.FlowB.line;table;column/bar.Task2Arguments;DiscussionTask1:20分钟根据图表进行数据描述和分析，如流程图、剖面图、曲线图;(A)社会功能信函.(G)Task2:40分钟针对某一有争议说法&社会现象,写一篇议论性文章.(A&G)第一讲雅思写作概述1．1写作简介1234个小时篇文章分评分百字数英国/欧盟英语雅思最低要求:大本预科5分本科课程5.5或6分研究生课程和研究式课程为6.5或76.5分是研究生的英语资格分TA:TaskAchievement(任务完成)--1TR:TaskResponse(任务回应)--2CC:Coherence&Cohesion（内容连贯与篇章衔接）GRA:GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（语法范围与精确性)1.2IELTS写作新评分标准：LR:LexicalResource（词汇资源)语言能力思维能力ParagraphFrameworkTheTopicSentence(ifpossiblewithlinktopreviousparagraph)FollowedbyParagraphDevelopmentSentences(expansion/explanation/comment/illustration)FollowedbyTheendingSentence(ifpossiblewithlinktonextparagraph)EssayFrameworkEssayBody(reason/example)Topic1+supportingTopic2+supportingTopic3+supportingIntroduction(thesisstatement)Conclusion(thesisrestatement)确立论点原因（例证）重申论点TS1+SSTS2+SSTS3+SSTA:TaskAchievement--1TR:TaskResponse--2审题文章布局CC:Coherence&Cohesion（内容连贯与篇章衔接）使文章结构紧凑的连接词LR:LexicalResource（词汇资源)丰富并且正确的句式GRA:GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（语法范围与精确性)自我定位图示5分5分6分TF/TA结构CC内容LR词汇GRA语法7分15课时15课时词法段组建文章(话题,思路)排列组合1.3雅思写作课程设计基础阶段强化阶段连词成句句法连句成篇TheBibletoIELTSWriting策略总则----雅思写作圣经知己知彼,百战不殆---明确英汉思维模式差异重拾自信的来源---写作基于表达,而非翻译带着镣铐做最好的舞者---用最好的框架及内容,语言应对规定式作文笔记为王写和不写,差距不是一点点情感分段和逻辑分段中文:情感分段英文:逻辑分段文章中心思想是读者体会还是作者交代中文:自己体会英文:作者交代引言段是开门见山还是层层拨开中文:层层拨开英文:开门见山每段有没有主题句以及位置中文:不一定英文:段首线性段落或螺旋式段落中文:螺旋式段落英文:线性段落人证与法证中文:人证英文:事实,数据,普通人的事例段内连贯(过渡词汇/词义重复)中文:意合英文:形合段落和段落之间(形和意)林语堂吾国与吾民结尾部分是概括还是训导语言运用差异：。。。基础阶段:语言能力（针对评分标准GRA&LR）学习目标：写出大于等于9个单词的句子和8个字母的单词写出大于等于18个单词的句子特色和要求:所有的知识点都属IELTS写作考点；所有的话题都源于IELTS真题题库；所有例句摘自IELTS范文原文&考生真实原创英国原版期刊《Economist》《Times》等基础阶段:语言能力（针对评分标准GRA&LR）学习目标：写出大于等于9个单词的句子和8个字母的单词写出大于等于18个单词的句子特色和要求:所有的知识点都属IELTS写作考点；所有的话题都源于IELTS真题题库；所有例句摘自IELTS范文原文&考生真实原创英国原版期刊《Economist》《Times》等基础阶段：第二讲雅思写作必备语法总汇Contents:2.1构建≥9个单词的简单句2.2掌握8个字母的单词2.3轻松驾驭≥18个单词的复杂句2.1简单句的写作思路2.1.1五种基本句子结构主语＋不及物动词（S+Vi）主语＋及物动词＋宾语(S+Vt+O)主语＋双宾动词+间宾+直宾(S+Vt+O.indir+O.dir)主语＋宾补动词＋宾语＋宾语补语(S+Vt.+O+O.compl)主语＋系动词＋表(S+LV+predicative)9个单词简单句成分分析:定语?状语?主谓宾2.1.2简单句写作思路---一个公式，四大经验(1)一个公式：1-2-3-4-55(状)—1(主)—2(谓)—3(宾)—4(定)—5(状)将以下句子从1-2-3模式一直到1-2-3-4-5模式，请大家逐个翻译一下，仔细对比英语顺序与汉语顺序的差异。英汉相似点：1-2-3顺序完全一样(5分)英汉相异点：汉语次信息先出现；英语主信息先出现.(7分)我们应该促进在环境问题上贫国和富国的交流.我们应该促进交流.★英文学术文体里,定语,状语的位置!!!Writingskillsadj.(前置定语)+n.n.+adj.(后置定语)合格的毕业生学习成绩合格的毕业生学习成绩合格但缺乏社交技能的毕业生qualifiedgraduatesgraduateswhoarequalifiedinacademicrecordbutarelackofsocialskillsA.添加次信息---定语theabilitytosurvivefalls(不定式)theideaexpressed(分词)BankofChina(介词短语)amanwhoisstubborn(从句)graduatesqualifiedinacademicrecordViewsontheissueinquestionvaryfrompersontoperson.Radioprogramscontributetothecultivationofthecapacityoftheimaginationofthelisteners,especiallytheadolescents.Theirhighstandardshowedtheprogressmade.Overall,Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressed.Yet,afatheracceptingresponsibilityforbehaviorproblemsislinkedwithpositiveoutcomes.Educationisofvitalimportanceforthedevelopmentofindividualandwell-beingofsocieties.Whatshouldeducationconsistoftofulfillbothfunctions?Task2真题剑桥范文例句后置定语是英语直线型思维方式的表现.是地道的学术写作的特色.外刊B.添加次信息---状语随便置如今,出国成为一种社会潮流.Nowadays,goingabroadhasbecomeasocialcurrency.★Goingabroad,nowadays,hasbecomeasocialcurrency.★Goingabroadhasbecome,nowadays,asocialcurrency.Goingabroadhasbecomeasocialcurrency,nowadays.高分副词：Mainly=primarily=chiefly=mostly,主要地properly=appropriately,适度地understandably可以理解,overwhelmingly占绝对优势地,instantly快速地,clearly,radically基本上,merely=just=only,unnecessarily没必要,impulsively冲动地,especially特别地,entirely=completely=totally=entirely,全部地partly部分地merrily愉快地happily,mentally心理上,physically生理上,generally总的来看,keenly急切地,seemingly表面上看,strikingly明显地,Utterly=completely,somewhat=alittle,moderately温和地,intensely=considerably大量地,fiercely=severely激烈地,superficially表面上,virtually实际上，vexingly烦人地，greatly=highly非常，大大地,conceivably可以想象地undoubtedly毫无置疑地unfortunately不幸地Overall,wecanseethatnotonlyarethereverylargedifferencesbetweenthetwoeconomiesbutthatthesegapsarewidening.(Cambridge3)Interestingly,technologycanpositivelycontributetothekeepingaliveoftraditionalskillsandwaysoflife.(Cambridge3)Personally,Ithinkthattheamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars.(Cambridge6)1.Specifically,FrancespendsmoreonCDsandphotographicfilmbutlessontennisracquetsthanItalydoes.(Cambridge3)剑桥7T2&4真题题目剑桥3-6考官范文9个单词简单句成分分析:定语后置定语状语主+谓+宾状语定语定语简单句黄金法则：1写出句子主干(英汉相似点)2利用英语语言的特点加后置定语&状语写出7分简单句写任