雅思写作双饼图写法介绍――pie chart

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Howtowritepiechart?amy2015/3/20reviewJECSS35%English30%P.E15%LiberalArts(文科)15%Science(理科)5%35%30%15%15%5%1.ReadthetitleandAnalyzethenumber2.OrganizethearticleIntroductionBodyConclusionthebiggestone最大的thesmallestone最小的thesametwo数量一样的阅读题目和分析数据文章组织占多少比例:occupy,represent,constitute,makeup,takeup,accountfor,1.Malesaccountedfor10%ofthewholeworkforce.2.Studentsmakeup/takeuproughly20%ofthegroup.wordstoday表示剩余:名词:therest=theremainder1.Duringtheremainderofthemorning,hehelpedhisauntwithsomehousework.形容词:remaining2.Theremaining18%wastakenupbythecostofmedicalcare.bemadeupof…,becomposedof…,consistof…1.Societyismadeupofpeoplewithdifferentabilities.2.TheworkforceofGreatBritainiscomposedoffivepartsrocket-upobvioustraditionalsectordistributionpopulationtremendousaggressiveshrink收缩的departmentofagricultureindustrialsector由…组成(整体)由(部分)组成wordstoday农业部门飞涨明显的传统部门分布劳动力分布Distributionofworkforce人口巨大的进攻的,巨大的shrank——shrunk工业部门Thetwopiechartsbelowshowthedistributionofworkforcefrom16yearsoldto65inGreatBritainin1932and1992P1标题改写(替换、添加与变换)Thetwopiechartsillustratethedistributionalsituationoflaborforcebetweentheagesof16and65intwodifferentyearsinUK.Thetwopiechartsbelowshowthedistributionofworkforcefrom16yearsoldto65inGreatBritainin1932and1992In1932,25%ofthepeoplebetween16and65wereunemployed.Ofthosewhohadajob,thelargestpercentageofthepopulation(45%)chosetoworkintheindustrialsectorOnly3%oftheworkerswereemployedbythegovernment.(被动句),whichwasfollowedbythoseintheservicesector(15%)andthedepartmentofagricultureandfishing(12%).P2P2:针对图一,进行排序描写Comparedwiththeyear1932,1992witnessedtremendouschangesinmanyoftheselectedsectors.Theproportionoftheunemployedsignificantlyshranktoonly10%.P3开头部分P3的开头部分:概括说明变化Asfortheemployed,dramaticexpansiontookplaceinthesectorofgovernmentandserviceindustrytoabout52%and15%respectively.Noticeably,governmentworkforcewitnessedthemostobviouschange,whichis5timesthatoftheprevious3%in1932.However,forthemoretraditionalsectors,therewasaconsiderabledecreasefrom15%to8%inagricultureandfishing,andamoreaggressivedeductioncanbedetected(被动)inthesectorofindustryfrom42%toabout15%.P3对比图一,描写图二上升情况P3对比图一,描写图二下降情况P3剩余部分学会用插入语Inconclusion,duringthe60yearschosen,thenumberoftheunemployedandtheamountoflaborforceinthetraditionalsectorslikeagricultureandindustrydeclined,whilegovernmentemployeeandworkforceintheserviceindustrysawarocket-up.P4总结特点P4开头部分体会如何写长句:插入语Like结构非谓语While表对比结构从句summary——写作思路P1:改写标题P2:排序(图一)P3:对比(结合图一对比,写出图二变化情况)P4:结尾homework1.Writewordsandrecitethosewords(抄写并记忆)2.翻译下面2个句子(为不局限思维,题目只给出了词组,可根据你的理解去翻译,每题至少翻译两个版本,多种翻译的途径通常是通过采用不同主语,或者主动、被动,或者从句,非谓语等实现的)1)1932,工业部门,(劳动力)人数,最多,占了42%2)与1932年相比,在1992年,很多部门都有明显的变化饼图句型分析1表达:1932,工业部门,(劳动力)人数,最多,42%(1)In1932,mostofthepeople(42%)workedintheindustrialsector.(2)Therewere42%ofthepeople(largestportion)workingintheindustrialsector.(3)Thepeopleworkingintheindustrialsectoroccupied42%ofthetotallaborforce,whichwasthemostsignificantpartofall.(4)Thepeoplewhoworkedintheindustrialsectormadeup42%ofthetotallaborforce,whichwasthemostsignificantofall.非谓语——现在分词非谓语→定语从句1:多句式结合:基本句型/therebe/非谓语/从句基本句式therebe句式分析2——主动被动In1932,42%ofthepeopleworkedintheindustrialsector,whichwasthelargestportionofthetotallaborforce.42%ofthepeopleworkingintheindustrialsectorwasthelargestportionofthetotallaborforce.42%ofthepeople(largestportion)wereemployedintheindustrialsector.Thepeopleemployedintheindustrialsectorcovered42%ofthetotal.主动2:主动被动交互使用被动分词表被动非谓语——现在分词表主动句式分析3——多样化主语42%ofthepeopleworkedintheindustrialsector,whichwasthelargestportionofthetotallaborforce.Relatively,theindustrialsectorattractedthelargestamountofworkforce(42%)in1932.Comparatively,workingintheindustrialsectorwouldbemostpeople’schoice(42%)amongallthesectorsin1932.1932witnessedthefactthatworkingintheindustrialsectorbecamemostpeople’schoice(42%).动作发出者做主语某个对象做主语非谓语做主语时间做主语比较中必写句型与1932年相比,在1992年,很多部门都有明显的变化。Comparedwiththeyear1932,thereweretremendouschangesinmanyoftheselectedsectors.Comparedwiththeyear1932,1992sawtremendouschangesinmanyoftheselectedsectors.

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