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FiveStepsMakeanAmazingCompositionDoyoulikewriting?Whatisthestudents’commonreactiontowritingacomposition？高考作文高分卷的特点外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。养眼的…当批到下午两点看到了它们…老师最恨的作文…老师最喜欢的作文…一点提示…很容易改进的字笔笔答题不可越界1.审题2.列提纲3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润色修正写作的五个步骤：（体裁，时态，结构，要求）（重点词组）（简单句）（衔接词）（更高级的句法和单词）See?Writingisnotsotough.Let’shaveatry!作文题目：2008年奥运会落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫张华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由．内容包括１．向公众开放，用于健身２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益３．开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客．４．………哈哈，不是李华了！1.单词拼写或用错：Giveyousomeadvise.Theycanattactvisitors.adviceattract学生常犯错误：WemaygivenittothePEcompany.Thesportstadiumsisverygreatandishighlyspokenofbytheforeigners.3.主谓一致问题：give2.时态语态问题：areareManypeoplecanusethemtostrongourbody.Iamwritingtomakesomeadviceforhowtomakefulluseofthesportsstadiums.5.介词短语运用问题：4.词性混淆问题：strengthenon信息2信息3信息4开头正文结尾体裁人称时态要求结构字数内容一般现在时Para.1Para.2Para.3抓要点,120个左右信息1信息5①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.③你想写一些建议.向公众开放，用于健身总结，意愿……书信格式租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客第一,三人称Step1：审题Step2：列提纲Para1.开头①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.③你想写一些建议.①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.the2008OlympicGameswerehostedinBeijing.②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.＊aftertheOlypmicGames＊collectsomeadvice＊howtomakebestuseofthestadiums.③你想写一些建议contributesomesuggestionstoyouPara2.正文①向公众开放，用于健身②租给体育公司，创造经济效益③开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客①向公众开放，用于健身.＊beopenedtothepeople/public＊beusedfor＊strengthentheirbodies②租给体育公司，创造经济效益.＊berentedto＊Sportcompanieswhichorganizematches＊Makemoney/profits③开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客＊beusedas＊touristattractions＊AttracttouristsStep2：列提纲Para3：总结，意愿…结尾＊Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned../frommypointofview.＊Iwouldappreciateitifyoutake…intoconsiderationStep2：列提纲Step3：连词成句Para.1:The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums.Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Para.2:Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanstrengthentheirbodies.Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanmakemoreprofits.Theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.Step3：连词成句Para.3:Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefullusethestadium.IwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsiderationStep3：连词成句Step4：连句成篇Iheardyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterthe29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.HereIwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Firstofall,thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanstrengthentheirbodies.Secondly,Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmuchmoreprofits.lastbutnotleast,theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefullusethestadiums.Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsideration二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力四.尝试多样化表达方式一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力①强调句②With短语复合结构③定语从句④名词性从句⑤各种状语从句⑥被动语态Step5：润色修正润色修正Iheardyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterthe29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.1.With复合结构Withthe29thOlympicGameshostedsuccessfully,Iheardyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums2.定语从句Firstofall,thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Peoplecanstrengthentheirbodiesthere.润色修正Firstofall,thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic,wheretheycanstrengthentheirbodiesconveniently.（适当增加修饰性的副词）润色修正3.非谓语动词Secondly,thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmuchmoreprofits.Secondly,thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanieswhichorganizematches,bringinginmuchmoreprofits.（现在分词作结果状语）润色修正4.状语从句lastbutnotleast,theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.lastbutnotleast,theycanbeusedastouristattraction.BecausemanyofthemaresowelldesignedwithstrongChinesefeaturesthattheywillsurelyattractvisitorsfromallovertheworld.润色修正5.倒装句只有当我们充分利用这些体育馆时，才能让它们的存在有意义。Onlywhenwemakefulluseofthestadiumcanweletstadiummakesense.Withthe29thOlympicGamesendedsuccessfully,Whatweshoulddonowishowtomakefulluseofthestadiums.Iheardyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthem.HereIwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Firstofall,thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic,wheretheycanstrengthentheirbodiesconveniently.Secondly,thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanieswhichorganizematches,bringinginmuchmoreprofits.lastbutnotleast,theycanbeusedastouristattraction.BecausemanyofthemaresowelldesignedwithstrongChinesefeaturesthattheywillsurelybeattractionsforvisitorsfromallovertheworld.Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefulluseofthestadiums.Onlywhenwemakefulluseofthestadiumcanweletstadiummakesense.Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsideration1.认真审题2.勾勒题纲3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润色修改Homework假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：参考词汇:穿行threadone’sway天桥overpass问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。