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WritingSkillsWritingbymakingcontrasts&comparisons长沙市一中Mr.andMrs.Leeoftenhavedifferentopinions.Lastmonth,theyplannedtospendtheirholidayatthebeach.Mrs.Leewantedtogothereintheircar,Mr.Lee,however,___________________________.Mrs.Leepackedfourbigsuitcases;incontrast,Mr.Lee___.Onthedaytheyleft,Mrs.Leegotupearly,while____.Whentheyarrivedattheairport,Mrs.Leewantedtogetthesecuritycheckassoonaspossible,butMr.Lee___.Finally,Mrs.Leemanagedtogetaboard,onthecontrary,Mr.Lee___andtookmuchtroubletogettherethenextday.Brainstorm长沙市一中123Completethestory.4insistedontakingaplaneEventhoughtheyaredifferentinmanyways,thereare___similaritiesbetweenthetwo.First,they____enjoywatersportslikesurfing.Second,theirpreferenceoffoodis____.Freshseafoodatattractsthemalot.Third,thiscouple_____________thatwhiletheyhaveargumentsometimes,theyagreewitheachotheronwhattodotorelax.Brainstorm长沙市一中alsoalikearesimilarinbothalsobothalikearesimilarinIntroduction1.Whatwritingstrategyisusedinthestory?长沙市一中•MakingcontrastsItexplainshowpersons/thingsaredifferent.•MakingcomparisonsItexplainshowpersons/thingsaresimilar.Tomakecontrasts:however,but,yet,unlike,while,incontrast(with),ontheotherhand,bedifferentfrom,onthecontrary,...Tomakecomparisons:both,also,alike,likewise,justlike…,inthesameway,XissimilartoYinthat...,...Lexicalchunks长沙市一中2.Whatlexicalchunkscanweusetomakecontrastsandcomparisons?Lexicalchunks长沙市一中Tomakecontrasts:然而______(conj.)但是_________(adv.)____(conj.)____(conj./adv)与此相反________________(phrase)________________(phrase)和......不同_______(prep.)________________另一方面_________________howeverbutyetunlikewhileincontrast(with)ontheotherhandbedifferentfromonthecontraryLexicalchunks长沙市一中Tomakecomparisons:两个都_____也____就像，正如___________相似的，同样的______(adj.)_________(adv.)以同样的方式________________X和Y在...方面类似____________________bothalsojustlike…alikelikewiseinthesamewayXissimilartoYinthat...Iwroteletterstomyfriendsinthepast.Isendemailstomyfriendsnow.PracticeICombine2sentencesinto1长沙市一中Iusedtowriteletterstomyfriends,butnowIsendtheme-mails.______beforewhenIwroteletters,Isende-mailstomyfriendsnow.UnlikeUnlikestudyinginChina,studyingabroadmaycauseaseriesofdifficultiessuchasnotknowingsomelocalcustoms.PracticeII长沙市一中differentfromReplacethecircledwordincontrastwith_____________/_______________Canadaonlyhasapopulationof29million,whileChinahas1.3billion.PracticeIIITranslatethesentences.长沙市一中加拿大和中国都是世界上的大国。InCanada,muchofthelandiscoveredbyforestswhileinChinaaboutone-thirdofthelandisnearlyreducedtodesert.加拿大有2900万人口，中国则有13亿。CanadaandChinaarebothamongthebiggestcountriesintheworld.加拿大很多土地被森林覆盖，而中国约有1/3的土地几乎沦为沙漠。Waystodevelopcomparisonandcontrast长沙市一中•Topicbytopicstructure集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）•Pointbypointstructure逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）长沙市一中TopicbytopicORpointbypoint?JudgingCanadaandChinaarebothamongthebiggestcountriesintheworld.Canadaonlyhasapopulationof29millionandmuchofthelandiscoveredbyforests,whileChinahasapopulationof1.3billionandaboutone-thirdofthelandisnearlyreducedtodesert.长沙市一中TopicbytopicORpointbypoint?CanadaandChinaarebothamongthebiggestcountriesintheworld.Canadaonlyhasapopulationof29million,whileChinahas1.3billion.InCanada,muchofthelandiscoveredbyforestswhileinChinaaboutone-thirdofthelandisnearlyreducedtodesert.JudgingWhenwewanttocontactwithourrelativesorfriends,whatwillwedo,tosendashortmessageorwritealetter?Generallyspeaking,thesetwowayshavesomethingincommon.First,1.____ofthetwowaysareeffectiveandcheapwhenitcomestocontactingwithothers.Second,theyare2.____/_________ingettingthroughtoothers.PracticeIVCompletethepassage.长沙市一中bothalikesimilarPracticeIVCompletethepassage.长沙市一中3.___/________,eachwayhasitsownspecialadvantages.Asanancientformoftransformingwordsfromeachother,lettersalwaysexpressthetruefeelingofone'sheartvividly,4.______shortmessageisjustsomedeadwordsonthescreenthatcomeoutthesame.Onthe5._____hand,sendingashortmessagesaveusmuchtime;6.___thecontrary,writingalettertakesmuchmoretime.Last,different7._____alimitof70wordsinashortmessage,youcanwrite8.___muchasyoulikeinaletter.HoweverwhileotheronfromYetasPracticeIVCompletethepassage.长沙市一中Ofcoursewhichonearthshouldbethemoreproperwaydependsontheindividualpersonalpurpose.Combinethedescriptionandyourownopiniontogether.Payattentiontothestructure.长沙市一中.MakingacompositionStructure•Opening:Background/Generalidea•Body:Contrastandcomparison•Closing:Makingcommentsandstatingyouropinions•长沙市一中SimilaritiesDifferencesBeijingShang-hai●bigandfamous●modern●goodtransportsystem●goodjobopportunities●fiercecompetition●capital●richcultureheritage●dryandcoldinwinter●sandstorms●importantport●economiccenter●nearthesea●nosandstormThetaskonP111长沙市一中.SampleofthetaskonP111Thesetwocitieshavemanythingsincommon.First,botharebigandfamous.Second,thesetwocitiesarealsoalikeinthattheyarebothmodernandpossessexcellenttransportsystemsthatarebotheasyandconvenient.Buses,trainsandplanescantakepeoplewherevertheywanttogo.Third,thesetwocitiesaresimilarinthatwhilebothoffergoodjobopportunities,competitionforthesejobsisfierce.Yet,eventhoughthecitiesaresimilarinmanyways,t