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CET-6写作备考句子的写作一、短句与长句•Ireturnedtomyroom.Therewasanoteundermydoor.ItwasfromBill.Hesaidhewasinthetownlookingforajob.Hehadnotfoundanythingyet.Hewassorrytohavemissedme.（旧）•WhenIreturnedtomyroom,IfoundanotefromBillunderthedoor.Hesaidhewasinthetownlookingforahob,buthadn’tfoundanythingyet.Headdedthathewassorrytohavemissedme.（新）•Wangstoodtherebeforeus.Hetalkedinalowvoice.Hisvoicewasearnest.Wefeltinhimsincerityanddedication.Thesequalitiesarenotcommontoordinarymen.（旧）•AsWangstoodbeforeustalkinginhislowbutearnestvoice,wefeltinhimsincerityanddedicationnotcommontoordinarymen.（新）1.短句与长句应混合使用•英语写作始与短句,但这并不意味着写作技术的成熟就要完全消灭短句.句子的长短是为表达思想服务的,不能为写长句而写长句.Theydamagealmosteverythingofours,frombookstoclothes,fromtoothpastetocases.Theyaffectournormallife,ruinourhappyschooldays.Theyareourgreatenemy.2.句式应灵活多变•若文中的简单句出现得太多,就会显得单调、含混、不生动.要写出生动而鲜明的句子,可通过嵌入方式来实现.一个简单句,嵌入定语、状语、补语后,变得生动有趣.Bookstellingpeoplehowtoadaptthemselvestothesocietyareworthreading.•Booksareworthreading.•Harrystoodattheedgeofthepath,watchingthecarsrunning.•这是一个简单句后附上了伴随状语,使句子更加生动.•写句子时,注意适时地变换句式,是一种有效的写作策略,同时能使文章产生意想不到的文学效果.3.合并短句的几种方法a.合并为并列句Residentsreportedahugeflyingsaucer.Itwasonlyaholeintheclouds.（旧）Residentsreportedahugeflyingsaucer,butitwasonlyaholeintheclouds.（新）Johniscomingheretomorrow.Youmightaswellcomewithhim.（旧）Johniscomingheretomorrow,soyoumightaswellcomewithhim.（新）b.合并为复合句Myunclehasjustreceivedaresearchgrant,heisachemist.（旧）Myuncle,whoisachemist,hasjustreceivedaresearchgrant.（新）c.把其中的一个改为分词短语Weadoptedthismethod.Ourteamraisedtheaverageyieldby40percent.（旧）Adoptingthismethod,……（新）Shewasmovedbyhissincerity,shefinallyacceptedhisoffer.（旧）Movedbyhissincerity,……（新）d.把其中的一个短句改为介词短语Heisaresponsibleman.Hehashisshortcomings.（旧）Heisaresponsiblemaninspiteofhisshortcomings.（新）e.把其中的一个短句改为谓语的一部分Heranswercame.Itisaquickandsharpone.（旧）Heranswercamequickandsharp.（新）f.把其中的一个短句改为with+复合宾语Zhejiangisnotedforitstea.Longjingisthebest.（旧）ZhejiangisnotedforitsteawithLongjingbeingthebest.（新）g.把其中的一个短句改为独立结构Johnwassick.Henryhadtodothework.（旧）Johnbeingsick,Henryhadtothework.（新）h.把其中的一个短句改为复合形容词Therewasanaironhisface.Hisfacialexpressionssuggested“Itoldyouso.”（旧）TherewasanI-told–you-soaironhisface.（新）二、短句内容的丰富（化抽象概述为细节描述）•抽象的概述总会给人言之无物的感觉,若再进行具体的描述,文章内容顿时充实起来,变得有血有肉,不再枯燥乏味,似乎有生命力了.Musiciseverywhere.（旧）Wecanhearitinrestaurants,airports,hospitals,supermarketsandmanyotherpublicplaces.（新）•Peoplecanacquireskillsthroughrecreation.这也是个概述,若充实以下内容就丰富多了。Theycanlearntofish,paint,plantflowersanddopapercutting.另外,这里的learnto正好与acquire相对应.•Tomisalazyboy.（旧）Tomusuallysleepslateinthemorninganddoeslittleworkafterhegetsup.（新）•Itwasadreadfuljourney.（旧）Itwasatiring,tediousanddangerousjourney.（新）•Treessurroundedthewaternearoursummerplace（旧）Oldelmssurroundedthelakenearoursummercabin.（新）三、短句的修饰(平行结构的运用)•平行结构作为一种使句子变得紧凑而错落有致的写作方式,有以下功效:句式优美、表达清晰、重点突出,使用尽可能少的词传达了尽可能多的信息.•Videogamesareakindofentertainment.•利用平行结构拓展为:Theybringpleasurestoyoungsters,trainthemtorespondquickly,stimulatetheirimaginationinelectronics.不难看出,此处内容丰富具体、行文流畅,有极强的说服力.四、短句间的衔接（连接手段）•准确地使用一些signalwords,总能让松散的拓展句自然地衔接起来,而且整个段落层次分明、前后连贯.•常用于表示因果关系的连词有:so,hence,thus,therefore,asaresult等.•常用于表示递进关系的连词有:besides,moreover,furthermore,additionally等.•常用于表示转折关系的连词有:however,nevertheless,but,yet,ontheotherhand等.•常用于表示对比关系的表达方式有:Someprefer...otherslongfor...;WecancompareAwithB...;...havesomethingincommon;Eachhasitspositiveandnegativeaspects.等.•常用于举例说明的表达方式有:Asimpleexampleis...;Take...asanexample...;Anillustrationwillmakethepointclear.;First,considerthecaseof...•常用于总结全文的表达方式有:inaword,tosumup,inshort,thus,thereasonwhywemust...;Onaccountofthiswefindthat...;Fromthispointofview...