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LessonTwo托福独立写作强化提分今日内容如何提升独立写作分数？1）开头段：其他引言段写作方法2）正文：其他论证结构3）活用素材4）语句润色5）观点创新6）限时写作与讲解开头段传统方法：背景+观点常用词汇事件：issue,problem,question热门，棘手：hot,heated,urgent,burning,pressing,pervasive,rampant争论：debate,controversy,argument,dispute一致，同意：consensus引起注意：inthelimelight,broughtintoattention,focus,concern带来问题：impose,cause出现问题：loomup,cropus面临问题：confront,encounter,facequestion紧急的：acute困扰：beplagued,embarrassed,upsetby见证：witness,see惊人的：alarming,startling,surprising使恶化：worsen,deteriorate讨厌的：undesirable广泛的：pervasive,rampant,prevalent存在：underway常用句型Withtherapid/amazingdevelopmentof…Accordingtorecentsurvey/poll/study,therehaveoccurred…Thereisaheated/focuseddebateatpresentabouttheissueof…Allreliableevidencejustifiesthefact/viewthat…isarampantissueintoday’ssociety.Recently/nowadays/atpresent,thephenomenonof…hasloomedupwidepublicconcern.Thealarmabouttheissueof…hascausedconsiderable/generalattention.Thequestionof…hasbeeninthelimelight/broughtintofocus.Nowadays,oursocietyiswitnessingmoreandmore…其他方法：论题+各方观点+观点是指在文章开头首先给出人们对要讨论的问题的不同看法和观点，然后提出作者对此问题的态度。适用于有争议性的主题。语料常用词汇反对：object,challenge认为：acknowledge,accept,maintain,hold,conceive争议：controversy辩论：contend容忍，让步：concede主张：setforth,advocate,endorse同意：consent招致反对：provokecriticism不可避免的：inevitable可行性：feasibility歪曲事实：slant,distort退一步说：conceding假想：assumption适度的，适量的：moderate怀疑的：skeptic套用句型Thereismuchdiscussionastotheproblemof…Thosewhoobjectto…arguethat…Butthosewhoadvocate…ontheotherhand,arguethat…Thereisnoagreementamongpeopleastotheissueof…Somepeoplesaythat…Otherssaythat…Astome,Iamonthefirstsideoftheargument.Thefollowingexamplescanprovemystandpoint.Thereisapublicdebateastotheissueof…Nowadays,itiscommonlybelieved/widelyheldthat…,butIdoubtwhetherNowadays,itisgenerallyacknowledgedthat…butIdoubtwhether…Whenaskedabout…,thevastmajorityofpeoplesaythat…Butotherpeopleregard…as…Whenfacedwith…quiteafewpeopleclaimthat…Butotherpeoplethink…套用句型Whenitcomesto...,mostpeoplebelievethat…butotherpeopleviewitas…Thereisapubliccontroversynowadaysovertheissueof…Thosewhoobjecttotheideaarguethat…Butpeoplewhofavor…arguethat…Thereisaheateddebatetodayabouttheproblemof…Inthefaceof…somepeopletakethepositionthat…,towhichIcan’tattachmyconsent.Althoughpeoplearriveathecommonunderstandingof…,theirviewsareatoppositepoleswhentalkabouttheissueof…….seemstoprovokewidecriticismintoday’ssociety.Thevalueofthisformof…isnowbeingquestionedby…Thereisagrowingskepticismtoward…例子1话题：经济应该缓慢发展还是迅速发展Nowadays,thereismuchdiscussionaboutwhetherfasteconomicgrowthisdesirable.Thosewhocriticizeeconomicgrowtharguethatwemustslowdown.Theybelievethatsocietyisapproachingcertainlimitsongrowth.Theseincludethefixedsupplyofnaturalresources,andthepossiblenegativeeffectsofindustryonthenaturalenvironment.Peoplewhowantmoreeconomicgrowth,ontheotherhand,arguethatevenatthepresentgrowthratetherearestillmanypoorpeople.Personally,Ithinkthesecondideawillholdwater.例子2话题：社会成功标准Thereisnoagreementamongpeopleastothebestmeasureofacountry’ssuccess.Somepeoplefocusonricheconomywhileothersmaythinkitisthequalityoflifethathasnothingtodowithmoney.Frommypointofview,bothviewsgotoextremesandweneedafurtheranalysisontheirviews.开头段观点+简单事例例子：Peoplearedrivenbypersonalsatisfactionormonetarygains.Agreeordisagree?Eventhoughweliveinacapitalistsociety,Istillcannothelpbutbelieve,despitemyowncynicism,thatpeoplearemoremotivatedtoachievesomethingforpersonalsatisfactionratherthanmonetarygains.LookatChekov’sshortstory,“TheBet.”Amanagreestosacrificefifteenyearsofhislifeinprisoninexchangeforamilliondollars.Obviouslyhismotivationforsuchanextremebetiswealth,butbytheendoftheprisonsentence,themancouldcarelessaboutthemoney.Afteryearsofintrospection,ofreadingShakespeare,TheBible,andtextbooks,themanactuallycomestodespisethemoneyheoncesought;themoneyhesignedawayfifteenyearsofhislifefor.Hedoesnotcollecthismoneyfromthebanker,herunsawaytobeonhisownandcontinuetolivethelifeofsolitudehehaslearnedtolove,freeofmoneyandpossessions.正文：心理学理论（内因外因）+我姐姐的例子+心理学理论（快乐理论）+我邻居的例子AnotherexampleSomepeoplethinkthattruthisnotobjective,butratherisdeterminedbyeachindividual.Doyouagreeordisagree?Greatconfidenceisoftenputintowhatpeopleseeorhear.Inacourt,ajudgewilllistentowitnessesandregardtheirwordsasevidence.Isitpossiblethatwhatweseeandhear,orwhatweregardasthe“truth”,isnotobjective.正文：其他论证结构正文：其他论证结构引言：提出观点正文一：论据1结论：总结观点正文二：论据2正文三：让步正文：其他论证结构引言：提出观点正文一：论据1结论：总结观点正文二：论据2正文三：举例句型Ofcourse,thereisnodenyingthat….Admittedly….TakeXasatypicalexample….活用素材Forexample:GalileoChallengetheauthorityDiligencePersistenceEtc语句润色复杂句分词独立结构定语从句等等亮点词汇资源1）高频写作词汇2）高阶写作词汇3）亮点动词4）其他论点创新1）分类2）替代分类法宽泛、抽象细化、分类2.1方法增加2.2目的入题点讨论内容Somehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1：Somehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1-思路1high-schoolgraduates文科生：liberalartsstudents理科生：sciencestudents艺术类：artstudentsgotowork1.liberalartsstudentslibraries/newspaper/reporter/clerk→bettergraspofhigh-levellanguage2.sciencestud