建议信-作文-PPT课件

DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuaHowtowritealetterforadvice如何算是一篇好文章？－覆盖了所有的要点－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全卷整洁美观，书写端正要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道连接词写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。常用句式A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter3.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----4.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithon…andI’lltrytomakesomesuggestions.5.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.....B.表达建议（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.5.Isuggestthat…6.Youwouldbetterdo/notdo…7.Youmayconsiderdoing…first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。DearBob,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).I'mlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXX假如你朋友Jim是多年的烟民，现身体不适，所以你想写一封给他建议他戒烟。Task11.首段：写信的目的Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.2.主体：关于如何戒烟的建议主题句+建议：意志；参与有益活动,远离烟友2.关于如何戒烟的建议主题句：Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Abouthowtostopsmoking,hereareafewsuggestions.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.3.结尾Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.DearJim，Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.yourssincerely,XXX假如你是营养师Mr.Li,李华向你写信咨询有关如何保持健康的建议：1.健康的重要性2.如何保持健康Task2DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtokeephealthy.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.Astheproverbsays,“Nooneknowsthevalueofhealthuntilhelosesit”.Inotherwords,nothingismoreimportantthanhealth.Goodhealthisbeneficialtoyourworkandstudy.Buthowtokeephealthy?HereIwanttogiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldhavearegularlife:gotobedandgetupearly.Second,keepahealthyandbalanceddiet:eatmorevegetablesandfruitsandotherfoodfullofenergyandfiber;eataslittlesugarandoilyfoodaspossible.Don’teatfoodwhichhasgonebad.Third,getridofthebadhabitssuchassmoking,drinkingorstayinguptoolate.Physicalexercisecanmakeyourbodystrong,soweshouldexerciseeveryday.Inaword,healthismorevaluablethananythingelse.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantokeepushealthy.yours,DearLihua,Hownicetohearfromyou!Inyourletteryouas