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二、靓点句式背一番(一)开头常用语1．Iwanttocongratulateyouwithallmyheart.我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。2．Congratulationsonyourwinningfirstprizeinthe...contest.祝贺你在……比赛中获得一等奖。3．Youdon’tknowhowexcitedandhappywefeltatthenewsof...Weareproudofyourachievement.得知……的消息，你不知道我们有多激动、多开心。我们为你取得的成就而自豪！(二)主体部分常用语1．Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.这些年来，我一直钦佩地注视着你的进步，我比任何人都知道你付出了多大的努力。2．Iamdelightedthatthethreeyearsofyourefforthasbeenrewardedinthisway.我很高兴你三年的努力得到了这样的回报。3．Itisobviousthatyouwillhaveapromisingfuture.很显然，你将会有一个充满希望的未来。(三)结尾常用语1．Wishyougoodluckandsuccessinthecoming...祝你在接下来的……中有好运并取得成功。2．Ihopeyoucanmakeeveryefforttorealizeyourdream.我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。三、润色完善很关键(2018·潍坊三模)假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Tom通过了来华支教的申请，将于今年七月到边远地区教学。请根据下面的提示给他写一封祝贺信：1．表示祝贺；2．分析可能遇到的挑战；3．告知提前了解当地的风俗习惯。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(一)准审题、准表达保基本分开头：祝贺事由(通过了来华支教申请)主体：面临的挑战(天气、学生基础、与人交流)结尾：个人建议(了解当地风俗)；表达祝愿定要点定结构一般现在时和一般将来时为主定时态第二人称为主定人称祝贺信定体裁[中档作文]DearTom，Congratulationstoyou❶！Youhavepassedyourapplicationtobeavolunteerteacherforruralareas❷.I’mmorethandelightedtolearnyouwillcometoChinathisJuly.I’mwritingtotellyousomerelevantdetails.Thereisnodoubtthatyouwillface❸allkindsof❹challengesduringthistime.Firstly,theweatherthereistotallydifferentfromtheweather❺ofLondon.Youmustpreparefor❻thechangeableweatherinthemountainousarea.Secondly,childrentherearepoorinEnglish❼.Youwillhavedifficultyincommunicatingwitheachother❽.Besides,youshould❾learnmoreaboutlocalcustomsandmannersinadvance.Itwillhelpyouadapttothenewsurroundings.Youwillbeabletodoyourworkbetteronlywhenyouarewellprepared.Yours，LiHua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)DearTom，(1)(合并句❶❷为一个简单句)．I’mmorethandelightedtolearnyouwillcometoChinathisJuly.I’mwritingtotellyousomerelevantdetails.CongratulationstoyouforhavingpassedyourapplicationtobeavolunteerteacherforruralareasThereisnodoubtthatyouwill(2)(词汇升级❸)(3)(词汇升级❹)challengesduringthistime.Firstly,theweatherthereistotallydifferentfrom(4)(词汇替换❺)ofLondon.Youmust(5)(词汇升级❻)thechangeableweatherinthemountainousarea.(6).(合并句❼❽，升级为状语从句)befacedwithvarietiesofthatmakepreparationsforSecondly,childrentherearesopoorinEnglishthatyouwillhavedifficultyincommunicatingwitheachotherBesides,you(7)(词汇升级❾)learnmoreaboutlocalcustomsandmannersinadvance,(8)(升级句为定语从句).(9)(升级句为倒装句)．Yours，LiHuaaresupposedtowhichwillhelpyouadapttothenewsurroundingsOnlywhenyouarewellpreparedwillyoubeabletodoyourworkbetter四、“一题两用”错不犯下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。DearTom，Congratulationsforyou!I’mtrulyhappytolearnthatyourapplicationtobethevolunteerteacherforruralareashasapprovedandyou’llcometoChinathisJuly.SincethisisyourfirstvisittoChina,andIwouldliketolistseveralthingsrelating.First,prepareforthechangeableweatherinthemountainarea.Second,childrentherewerepoorinEnglish.Third,youmightnotbeaccustomedtothelocaldiet.Inaddition,don’tforgettolearnaboutlocalcustomsandmannerinadvance,whatwillhelpyoufitinwiththenewsurroundings.Onlywhenyouarewellpreparedwillyoubeabletodoyourworkgood.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua答案：第一句：for→to第二句：the→a;has后加been第三句：去掉and;relating→related第四句：mountain→mountainous第五句：were→are第七句：manner→manners;what→which第八句：good→better