AsaWhole•Suitabletopicsentences•Allsentencesrelatetothetopicsentence•Soundlogic•Spelling,punctuation,capitallettersSentences•Becompleteinstructure–Becausehehadn’tfinishedhisassignment,sohecontiuedworkingintheclassroom.•Therightuseofpartsofspeech•Rightpronounreference•Correcuseofthetenses•Varietyinsentencetype:short&long;simple&complexReduceWasteonCampus1.目前有些校园内浪费现象严重;2.浪费的危害;3.从我做起,杜绝浪费。•1)Thereistoomuchwasteoncampustoday.2)Youcanseethelightsareonallthetimeinsomecollegesanduniversities.3)Youcanseetherunningwaterarerunningallthetime.4)Youcanalsoseealotofremainsoffoodinthecanteenaftermeals.•5)Wasteisveryharmful.6)Peoplebuytoomanyclothesandveryexpensiveclothes.7)Theywastealotofmoney.8)Peoplecuttheforests,minecoal,anddrillforoil.9)Thereisawasteofnaturalresources.10)Wasteerodeshuman’svirtues.11)Ifapersoniswasteful,thereisnogoodqualitysuchasfrugalityinhim.•12)Fightingagainstwasteiseverybody’sduty.13)Allthecollegestudentsshouldreducewasteoncampusbecausewasteisveryharmful.14)I’llstartfrommyself.15)Ifeverybodytrieshardtofightagainstwaste,“thegoodolddays”willcomebackinthenearfuture.•点石成金:1)Nowadays,thereistoomuchwasteoncampuses.2)Youoftenseestudentsleavingtheirdorm,forgettingtoturnoffthelight.3)Youalsofindthatmanyastudent,afterwashingtheirclothes,doesn’tbothertoturnoffthetap,leavingthewaterrunning.4)Ifyougotothecafeteriaatdinnertime,youarelikelytoseetablescoveredwiththeremainsofallkindsoffood.•另辟蹊径(添词改句):•1)A:Today,somecollegesanduniversitiesarefacedwiththeproblemofwaste.•B:Studentsofsomecollegesanduniversitiesareforgettingthegoodvirtueoffrugality.•C:Nowadaysthereexistsawidespreadbadhabitofwasteamongsomecollegestudents.•2)Itseemsthatthelightsarealwayson;noonerememberstoturnthemoffwhenleavingthedorm.•3)Therunningwaterseemstobealwayson;noonecarestoturnthetapoff.•4)Atdinnertime,studentsputtheirleftoversinthegarbagecans,orjustleavethemonthetable.•另辟蹊径(段落平面):•Wasteisnowconsideredoneofthemajorproblemsincollegesanduniversities.Moreoftenthannot,thelightison,withnoonemakingtheslightestefforttoturnitoff,evenwhenthereisbrightdaylight.Thesameistrueoftherunningwater,withthetapleftonendlessly.Atdinnertime,collegestudentstendtothrowawaytheirleftoversintothegarbagecans,evenjustonthetable.•点石成金:•5)Wasteisveryharmful.6)Ifyouarecarefreewithyourmoney,youwillsoonbeverypoor.7)Likewise,ifmanrecklesslyexploitsthenaturalresources,thenheissuretohaveadismalfuture.8)What’smore,beingwastefulisabadhabitwhich,likeadrug,graduallyerodesahumanbeing’svirtues.9)Onceapersongrowswasteful,thevirtuethatisfrugalityiserodedwithinhim.另辟蹊径(添词改句):5)A:Wasteisofgreatharm.B:Wastecausesgreatharm.C:Wasteresultsinheavylosses.6)Onewhothrowsawaymoneylikedirtwillsoonfindhimselfpenniless,downandout.7)A:Manwillbeeventuallypunishedifhechoosestoover-emphasizeeconomicdevelopmentatthesacrificeofhisnaturalresources.B:Itdoesn’tpaytoover-reapbenefitfromournaturalresources,ignoringtheprotectionofourenvironment.8)Wasteiscomparedtoadrug,whicheatsawayman’scharacter.另辟蹊径(段落平面):Wastebringsaboutalotofharm.Itputsthepersonwhoiswastefulinaveryawkwardpoverty-strickenposition.Italsoexhauststheworld’sverylimitednaturalresources.Inaddition,thosewhohavedevelopedthebadhabitofbeingwastefularementallyimpaired,whichhasaverynegativeinfluenceontheircharacter.•点石成金:•10)Perhapsitistimewerememberedtheoldsaying“wastenot,wantnot.(不浪费,不愁缺。)”11)Andfightingagainstwasteiseverybody’sbusiness!12)Asforuscollegestudents,weshouldstrivetoreducewasteoncampus,meincluded;I’llstartwithmyself.13)Witheveryonedoinghisbit,itwon’tbelongbefore“thegoodolddays”comeback.•另辟蹊径(添词改句):•10)Perhapsitistimewerememberedtheoldsaying.Itsays“wastenot,wantnot.”•11)Ifwearetoavoidtheembarrassmentcausedbywaste,wehavetodoawaywiththebadhabitofwaste,andeverybodyhastojoinin.•12)Wecollegestudentsshouldtakeanactivepartinthefightagainstwaste,andIamnoexceptioninreducingwasteoncampus.•13)Let’sjoinhandsintheprojectofrestoringfrugality.•另辟蹊径(段落平面):•AsfarasI’mconcerned,I’lltrymybesttosaveeverydropofwater,everydegreeofelectricity,andeverymouthfuloffood.AndI’dliketoremindmypeersoftheoldsaying“Wastenot,wantnot.”Ifeveryonewillmakeaneffort,Ibelieve,ourcampuslifewillbecomesimple,frugal,andhealthyagain.•StopCheatingonCampus1.目前有些校园内考试作弊现象严重2.作弊的危害3.从我做起,杜绝作弊•Nowadays,thereistoomuchwasteoncampuses.Youoftenseestudentsleavingtheirdorm,forgettingtoturnoffthelight.Youalsofindthatmanyastudent,afterwashingtheirclothes,doesn’tbothertoturnoffthetap,leavingthewaterrunning.Ifyougotothecafeteriaatdinnertime,youarelikelytoseetablescoveredwiththeremainsofallkindsoffood.•Wasteisveryharmful.Ifyouarecarefreewithyourmoney,youwillsoonbeverypoor.Likewise,ifmanrecklesslyexploitsthenaturalresources,thenheissuretohaveadismalfuture.What’smore,beingwastefulisabadhabitwhich,likeadrug,graduallyerodesahumanbeing’svirtues.Onceapersongrowswasteful,thevirtuethatisfrugalityiserodedwithinhim.•Perhapsitistimewerememberedtheoldsaying“wastenot,wantnot.(不浪费,不愁缺。)”Andfightingagainstwasteiseverybody’sbusiness!Asforuscollegestudents,weshouldstrivetoreducewasteoncampus,meincluded;I’llstartwithmysel