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Thebestwaytocopewithpressureistogiveyourselfasmile.---byHuangKe(Sam)giggle;chuckle;beam;grin;Asmileslippedoutfromhislips;haveagoodlaugh;weara(big/huge/faint)smile;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing;grinfromeartoear;Hersmileneverfaded;beallsmiles;Mysmilegrewwider…smile;laugh;MaryMaryisalittlegirlwholoveslaughing.Almostnoonenoticedthesmallmistake.Marygigglesatthesmallestthing.Oneday,ourEnglishteachermadeasmallmistakewhilegivingalesson.Maryburstoutlaughing.Asecondlater,thewholeclasshadagoodlaugh.Wehopehersmilewillneverfadeandhersmilewillbemoreattractive.①②③④⑤⑥⑦Maryisalittlegirlwholoveslaughing.Marygigglesatthesmallestthing.OnedayourEnglishteachermadeasmallmistakewhilegivingalesson.Almostnoonenoticedthesmallmistake.Maryburstoutlaughing.Asecondlater,thewholeclasshadagoodlaugh.Wehopehersmilewillneverfadeandhersmilewillbemoreattractive.Sheit,butlaughinggigglesatburstoutlaughinghadagoodlaughsmilewillneverfade1.usingwordstoreplaceotherwords(substitution替代)3.leavingawordorwordsoutofasentence(ellipsis省略)2.usinglogicalconnectors(conjunction连接)4.reappearanceofrelatedkeywords(wordcohesionchain词汇衔接链)One__________________likeabirdtowardmewithsuch_______._______seemstohavenoeffecton__________.Strands(缕)ofbrownhair_____________________________infrontof______________________witheverystep,and___________warmed_________________.ShemustbeMary.youngwomanbouncedlivelinessthislittlegirlswayedbackandforthahugesmilehercutefreckledfacealivelylittlegirlherclearblueeyesyoungwomanherclearblueeyesthislittlegirlhercutefreckledfaceahugesmileherpalefacewalkedslowlyswayed(摇摆)backandforthlivelinessgravitybounced(蹦跳)Gravity①②③④⑤⑥⑦⑧⑨One__________________likeabirdtowardmewithsuch_______._______seemstohavenoeffecton__________.Strands(缕)ofbrownhair_____________________________infrontof______________________witheverystep,and____________warmed___________________.ShemustbeMary.youngwomanbouncedlivelinessthislittlegirlswayedbackandforthahugesmilehercutefreckledfaceherclearblueeyesGravitywordcohesionchainTherepeatedappearanceofrelatedkeywordsCoherence连贯:(sentencesarelogicallyconnected)(onetext,onetopic)Hecomestoschoolveryearlyeverymorningandworkslonghours.Inhissparetime,thisyoungmanoftenreadsbooksabouteducation.What’smore,playingbasketballwithhiscolleaguesishisfavorite.comestoschoolveryearlyeverymorningworkslonghoursoftenreadsbooksabouteducationSamisadiligentteacher.HethisyoungmanhishishiswordcohesionchainTherepeatedappearanceofrelatedkeywordsCoherence连贯:(sentencesarelogicallyconnected)(onetext,onetopic)IwillneverforgettheyearIwasabouttwelveyearsold.MymothertoldusthatwewouldnotbereceivingChristmasgiftsbecausetherewasnotenoughmoney.Ifeltsadandthought,“WhatwouldIsaywhentheotherkidsaskedwhatI’dgot?”JustwhenIstartedtoacceptthattherewouldnotbeaChristmasthatyear,threewomenturnedupatourhousewithgiftsforallofus.Formetheybroughtadoll,IfeltsuchasenseofreliefthatIwouldnolongerhavetobeembarrassedwhenIreturnedtoschool.Iwasn’tforgotten.Somebodyhadthoughtenoughofmetobringmeagift.Yearslater,whenIstoodinthekitchenofmynewhouse,thinkinghowIwantedtomakemyfirstChristmastherespecialandmemorable,Iinstantlyrememberedthewomen’svisit.IdecidedthatIwantedtocreatethatsamefeelingofimportanceforasmanychildrenasIcouldpossiblyreach.SoIcameupwithaplanandgatheredfortypeoplefrommycompanytohelp.Wegatheredabout125orphans(孤儿)attheChristmasparty.Foreverychild,wewrappedcolorfulpackagesfilledwithtoys,clothes,andschoolsuppliers,eachwithachild’sname.Wewantedallofthemtoknowtheywerespecial.BeforeIcalledouttheirnamesandhandedthemtheirgifts,Iremindedthemthattheycouldn’topentheirpresentsuntileverychildhadcomeforward.FinallythemomenttheyhadbeenwaitingforcameasIcalledout,“One,two,three.Openyourpresents!”Asthechildrenopenedtheirpackages,theirfacesbeamedandtheirbrightsmileslituptheroom.Thejoyintheroomwasobvious,anditwasn’tjustabouttoys.Itwasafeeling–thefeelingIknewfromthatChristmassolongagowhenthewomencametovisit.Iwasn’tforgotten.Somebodythoughtofme.Imatter.IwillneverforgettheyearIwasabouttwelveyearsold.MymothertoldusthatwewouldnotbereceivingChristmasgiftsbecausetherewasnotenoughmoney.Ifeltsadandthought,“WhatwouldIsaywhentheotherkidsaskedwhatI’dgot?”JustwhenIstartedtoacceptthattherewouldnotbeaChristmasthatyear,threewomenturnedupatourhousewithgiftsforallofus.Formetheybroughtadoll,IfeltsuchasenseofreliefthatIwouldnolongerhavetobeembarrassedwhenIreturnedtoschool.Iwasn’tforgotten.Somebodyhadthoughtenoughofmetobringmeagift.Yearslater,whenIstoodinthekitchenofmynewhouse,thinkinghowIwantedtomakemyfirstChristmastherespecialandmemorable,Iinstantlyrememberedthewomen’svisit.IdecidedthatIwantedtocreatethatsamefeelingofimportanceforasmanychildrenasIcouldpossiblyreach.SoIcameupwithaplanandgatheredfortypeoplefrommycompanytohelp.Wegatheredabout125orphans(孤儿)attheChristmasparty.Foreverychild,wewrappedcolorfulpackagesfilledwithtoys,clothes,andschoolsuppliers,eachwithachild’sname.Wewantedallofthemtoknowtheywerespecial.BeforeIcalledouttheirnamesandhandedthemtheirgifts,Iremindedthemthattheycouldn’topentheirpresentsuntileverychi