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（半）开放作文（一）第一、认真审题，把握所有信息。第二、确定体裁，把握行文格式。第三、罗列提纲，思考表达方式。第四、组织语言，展开写作。第五、认真检查，查漏补缺。写作技巧一、试题特点开放性作文往往会给出一定的素材和主题,让学生在此基础上自由发挥,有较强的灵活性与开放性,难度较大,而半开放性作文给出要点的限制较小,难度相对较小。二、写作注意事项考生在写作时需要注意:1.在着手写作之前,要认真审题,把握命题要求,找准素材或主题中的关键句;2.依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章脉络,使得文章中心突出;3.准确定位人称、时态。遣词造句要扬长避短。大部分情况下,文中使用动词一般过去时为主,但人称的使用较为灵活,应该依据文章提示准确定位人称。应尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语或句型来灵活表达,避免重复使用。如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Successistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofenthusiasm.-SirWinston,Churchill内容要求：1．你对该引语的理解：2．你的相关经历：3．恰当的结尾。注意：1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：3．词数：120左右。ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat_______________________审题本文为（半）开放式作文，审题时注意以下几点1.本文为夹叙夹议型作文。2.人称以第一人称为主。3.时态上，叙述时主要用一般过去时，议论时以一般下载时为主。拟点1.对谚语中所说的“成功是一种从一个失败再到另一个失败而不丧失热情的能力”进行感悟。2.通过自己曾经学习骑自行车的经历，旨在说明“失败是成功之母”。考生习作ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldn'tgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Rather,weshouldkeeptrywithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.1考生习作Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.IwasSoexcitedthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderandIdidn’texpectit.ThebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficultandIcouldn’tcontrolit.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupbutmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.AsIpracticedmore,Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,IfeelIbecauseIdidn’tloseheartatthattime,Iamabletorideabike.2考生习作Actually,wecan'tsucceedineverythingwetry.Theimportantthingisthatweshouldstickatit.3阅卷现场Rather,weshouldkeeptrywithenthusiasm.”Keep+doing“try改为trying高级词汇withenthusiasm：热情地阅卷现场IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.倒装句式更高级SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.阅卷现场However,itwasharderandIdidn’texpectit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.句子合并显亮点阅卷现场ThebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficultandIcouldn’tcontrolitThebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficultformetocontrol.too…to结构阅卷现场Iwasabouttogiveupbutmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.beaboutto…when...固定句式阅卷现场Ididbetterandbetter.AsIpracticedmore,Ididbetterandbetter.Withmorepractice,阅卷现场Lookingback,IfeelIbecauseIdidn’tloseheartatthattime,Iamabletorideabike.Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn'tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.虚拟语气+倒装阅卷现场Theimportantthingisthatweshouldstickatit.What'simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldn'tgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Rather,weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.佳作赏析1Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn‘twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficultformetocontrol.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhenmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Withmorepractice,Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn'tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.佳作赏析2Actually,wecan'tsucceedineverythingwetry.What'simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.佳作赏析3