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高考英语作文的润色与提高宋武栋山东省实验中学专题一：优秀作文的基本特征优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征1、层次不乱2、句式多变3、亮点若干3、巧妙串联4、蠢错不犯6、整洁卷面层次不乱开头：第一个要点主体：第二个要点结尾：第三个要点句式多变长短变化主、被动变化主语变化同义词变化同功能句型变化横向比较变化亮点若干高中词汇高中常见短语高级句型各种复合句倒装句强调句型虚拟语气句型非谓语动词结构巧妙串联起：firstofall,tobeginwith,aboveall...承：inaddition,besides...转：however,ontheotherhand...合：inmyopinion,allinall,inaword...蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的基本语言表达能力。1.Iverylikethebook.2.Hewasveryangrily.3.Therehavemanystudentintheclassroom.4.Thecarisyellowcolor.整洁卷面英文书写大方、圆润、自然词与词间距适当字母大小适当无大面积涂改不影响交际专题二肃清基础语言错误中学生英语写作中常见的14种语言错误：1.主谓不一致MyfatherandIlikesgoingfishingbythelake.Largequantitiesofsoilhasbeenwashedaway.2.时态、语态混用Lastnight,Ihadenjoyedaparty.Thepaintingonthewalldamagedseriously.∧was3.句子成分残缺Istoodupandsawthereaboy.Theyoungmanrunninginthestreet.∧∧waswas4.习惯搭配误用Ionceheardfromtheanimallikethis.Wepassedawaythebuilding.ofby5.名词单、复数不分Imademanyfriendinthesummercamp.WecangetsomeinformationsfromtheInternet.6.动词单、复数不分Ourteacheroftensaythatsuccesslieinhardwork.Mr.Smith,togetherwithsomestudents,arecomingtoourschool.7.赘词现象多发Ihopeyoucanreturnbacktoourschoolsoon.We'llholdapartyonnextSunday.8.近义词的误用Theschoolrequeststhatallthestudentsshouldweartheschooluniform.Iquarreledwithmyteacheraboutmygrades.9.基本词汇拼写错误IfliedtoNewYorkdirectlyfromBeijing.Thiswillbedoneimmediatly.10.前后人称不一致Theboywasborninapoorfamilybutsheworkshard.Wewatchedafewmoviesandwelovedit.11.动词原形作主语/宾语Takeawalkafterdinnerisverygoodforyou.Atthatmoment,Ididn'tfeelliketakeawalk.12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致Preparingdinner,thedoorbellrang.Walkinginthestreet,acarhitanoldman.13.一个简单句出现两个谓语Therewasnoworktodo,hewentbackhome.Ireceivedyouemail,Iwasveryexcited.being∧When∧and14.中式英语Nextweekhaveaparty.IsorryyouIcan'twithyougoBeijing.有则改之，无则加勉；用心则易，无心则难。专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应他是个好人。第一反应测试：Heisagoodman.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitable,easy-going,devoted,open-minded,modest,friendly…对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。I’msorrythatIcan’tgotoBeijingwithyou.WouldyouacceptmyheartfeltapologythatIcan’tmakeittoBeijingwithyouaswehaveplanned.IsorryyouIcan’twithyougoBeijing.英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西1.一般中学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构；2.恰到好处的名言、谚语等；3.一语中的的修辞手法。很多•alotof•agoodnumberof(C.n.)•alargeamountof(U.n.)•agreatdealof(U.n.)•amountainofhomework•aseaofpeople•abundant/adequate•takepartin•joinin•participatein•competein•signupfor…参加•fitin•adaptto•adjustto•copewith…•beusedto•beaccustomedto•feelathome…适应•followmydream/passion•pursuemygoal•seekaftermydestination/objective追求梦想•about/around/some•roughly•approximately•moreorless大约•so/therefore•asaresult•asaconsequence•consequently因此•important•crucial•critical•significant•ofmuchvalue重要的恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.5.Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.6.Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.7.Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.8.Morehaste,lessspeed.9.It’snevertoooldtolearn.10.Allthatglittersisnotgold.11.Lookbeforeyouleap.12.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.13.Greatmindsthinkalike.14.wellbegun,halfdone.15.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.大胆使用基本的修辞手法比喻Allthestudentsareasbusyasbeespreparingforthecomingexams.所有学生都在忙着准备考试。Allthestudentsarebusypreparingforthecomingexams.夸张我感觉压力很大。Ifeelgreatpressure.IfeltasifIwereunderamountainandIcan'tevenbreathe.拟人我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。Ifeelallmyclassmateslaughingatme.Ifeltasifeventhebirdsonthetreesarelaughingatme.亮点的任务：使你的作文从千万篇作文中脱颖而出。谢谢！