paraphrase的技巧

•一：具体化：•我是一个老师——我是一个英语老师——我是上海环球雅思主教雅思写作的老师•关键：一双慧眼：能够敏锐地找出一个句子中比较笼统的，适合用具体化的思路进行改写的对象。•Inthelastcentury,thefirstmanwalkingonthemoonsaid:“Itisabigstepformankind.”•Inthelastcentury:Inthe1960’s(20世纪60年代);•Man:AmericanastronautArmstrong;•Said:announcedInthe1960’s,whenAmericanArmstronglandedonthemoonforthefirsttime,heproudlyannouncedthatitwasagreatstepforthemankind•二：单词转换：•优先转换：动词；形容词•Foodcanbeproducedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfertilizersandbettermachinery.•Produce;cheaply;improved;better;•Produce-----manufacture•Cheaply-----economically•(improved;better)------advanced•Nowadays,peoplecanmanufacturefoodmuchmoreeconomicallythankstomoreadvancedfertilizersandmachinery.•谓语动词转换：•英语句子不外乎是两种结构：•实义动词和be动词结构•因此可以在什么怎么样和什么是什么之间进行切换来实现改写。•Manypeoplesayteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects;Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyourownopinion.•第一句：teachsbsth:（什么怎么样---什么是什么）•老师只应该教学生功课（什么怎么样）------教好学生功课是老师唯一的职责（什么是什么）•Somepeoplebelievethatitisthesoletaskforateachertointroduceacademicknowledgetothestudents.•下面一句试试看：Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.•(1)Someothersholdthatatrulyoutstandingteachershouldbethementorofbothknowledgeandlifetotheirdisciples.(2)Someotherssaytheresponsibilityofateacherarenotjustpassingonprofessionalskills,butalsotheimprovementsofsoundjudgment•Althoughthepracticehasitsbenefits,thepotentialproblemsshouldneverbeignored.•Despitethebenefits,onnoaccountshouldthepotentialproblemsbeignored.•(五)加上常用句型：•Airtravelhasbenefitedalotofpeople,butitisclaimedthatnon-essentialtravelshouldbereduced.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?•Peopleareinvolvedinthediscussionaboutwhetherairtravelshouldberestricted.•试一试：Doyouthinkitisbettertosendcriminalstojailorletthemreceiveeducationorjobtraining?•开头句：Thetreatmentofcriminalhasbeenopentodebateinrecentyears.•加上常用句型：Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhethertosendcriminalstojailsortoletthemreceiveeducationorjobtraining.(一般的水平)•Paraphrase往往是多种技巧的综合运用：•Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldbeprohibitedasitusesupfuelresourcesandcausespollution.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?Youshoulduseyourownexperiencetosupportyourargument.•1.具体化•不好的：critics或者opponents(反对者)•好的：supporter(支持者)或者advocator(倡导者)•2.单词转换：prohibit,useup,cause•Prohibit----ban•Useupfuelresources-----consumetoo•muchfuel•Cause----contributeto•Cause;leadto;resultin•指A造成B的唯一因素而现在是一果多因，所以用contribute•3.关键词：and•And----aswellas•Accordingtosomecritics(Somecriticsarguethat),airtravelshouldbebannedduetothefactthatitcontributestotheenvironmentalproblemsaswellasconsumestoomuchfuel.•Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldbeprohibitedasitusesupfuelresourcesandcausespollution•PoliceinBritaindonotcarryguns.Somepeoplebelievethatitwillmakecitizensunprotected,butsomesuggestthatitwouldreduceviolenceinsociety.Discussthosetwoviews.•背景句：Insomecountries,itisaconventionthatpolicedonotcarryguns.•加上常用句型：Thereisaperceptionthatitwillmakecitizensunprotected,whileacounter-argumentisthatitwouldreduceviolenceinsociety.(普通印象)