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GuHongyingfromSFLSLearntoWriteViewsonsocialphenomenonWhatistheicebucketchallenge?•Theicebucketchallengeisanactivityinvolvingdumpingabucketoficewateronsomeone’sheadtopromoteawarenessofdiseaseALSandencouragedonationstoresearch.MyviewsontheicebucketchallengeTopicWhatmakesagoodessay?•Cleaninhandwriting•Coherentinstructure•Completeincontent•Correctinlanguage•ClearinopinionSharingtime•Commentoneachother’sessays.•Underlinehighlightsineachessay.•Choosethebestessaytopresent.AgoodessayOrganizationContentLanguageLearntopolishyourlanguage•Advancedwordsandexpressions•Brieftopicsentences•Correctlinkingwords•Diversesentencepatterns•Effectiveparticiples•Recently,theicebucketchallengehassparkedaheateddebate.Someareforit,whileothersareagainstit.Frommyperspective,Iamtotallyinfavorofthisuniquecharitycampaignwiththefollowingreasons.•Firstly,itraisesindividuals’awarenessofALSpatients.Withattractiveandamusingvideospostedbycelebritiesindifferentfields,agrowingnumberofnetizensbegintofocusonthetribeofpatients.Meanwhile,byacceptingthechallengeanddonatingmoney,celebritiesexertapositiveinfluenceoncommonpeople.Admittedly,it’sthestareffectthatcounts.•Secondly,easyaccesstofeelingthepainfromALSpatientspushparticipantsinclinedtogivethemahelpinghand.Soakedinicewater,theymaydirectlyexperiencetheprocessofbeingfrozen.•Lastbutnotleast,Ideem,themosteffective,isthenominatingrule.Threemorefriendsnominated,thecharitytriples,creatingaprevalentandlovingcirculationwheremoreandmorepeoplegetinvolved.•Inaword,thewidespreadfromcelebritiestothepublic,theexperienceofbeingfrozenaswellasthelovingcirculation,allcontributetosuchaconduciveactivity.Homework•最近的新闻中常有女大学生在返校途中被害的报道，女大学生的安全问题令人堪忧。为何女大学生屡遭侵害，请发表你的看法。•题目：Myviewsongirlstudents’securityForEnglishcomposition,atfirstIthoughtthemostimportantthingsareallthesefancywordsandcomplicatedsentences.ThenIbegantofoundthatthelogicalpointsandclearstructureseemalsoindispensable.Butfinally,Igettoknowwhenitcomestoacomposition,nomatterEnglishorChinese,whatcountareactuallynottheouterthingsbuttheonedeeplyinside.Morespecifically,theyareyouruniqueopinions,yourcomprehensiveandexactadviceandyoursincereemotions.Andfrommypointofview,toachievethese,onehastothinkmoreofthesmalldailythingsthathe/shedid,saw,heard,readandexperienced.Sotrytoputyourreasonableandfreshideasintothecompositiontomakeitimpressiveandcontagious,andmaybeonedayyou’llfindthatyouhavemadeabigsteponyourEnglishlearning.