Nicetomeetyou!1.现在有一位老师站在我们面前,她叫Yumi,看上去___岁了。外貌性格_______。1.这是她第四次来武义。她对武义很熟悉。(褒义)作文阅卷中的常用语:扣一分有给一分有改错——减少扣分的理由词汇语法Naturalresourcesarelimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthefuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesaconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisafact.Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesabigconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisawidelyacceptedfact.Itiswidelyacceptedthatthereismajorconcernaroundtheworldforexhaustionoflimitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.verynearbigItiswidelyacceptedthatwidelyacceptedforthoughmajor润色——增加得分的依据词汇:具体、高级句式:紧凑、复杂语言Hegavemeinformation.Somebodyissleepingintheclassnow.Hiseyesareopen.Somebodyissleepingintheclassnow,__________________.withhiseyesopenIdidn’tknowthestudentsherearesosmartuntiljustnow.直到刚才我才知道武义一中的同学如此聪明。It‘snotuntiljustnowthatIknewthestudentsherearesosmart.NotuntiljustnowdidIknowyouaresosmart.阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文?•涂涂抹抹,斑斑点点;•层次不清,段落不分;•语句不通,杂乱无章;•书写潦草,卷面不洁;友情提示阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文?•字体工整,卷面干净;•紧扣主题,条理清晰;•长度适中,基本无错;•语言地道,过渡自然。友情提示