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高考英语基础写作复习系列黎群英大学生度暑假方式的变化下列两个图表显示了在过去的10年间大学生过暑假的方式变化。旅游16%其他20%在家55%社会调查28%在家32%旅游30%其他10%.描述图表中变化明显的项目；.简要分析变化的原因；.由表格内容得出的结论。社会调查9%写作内容:Ascanbeseenfromthetwocharts,inthepasttenyears,thecollegestudentswhogotravelingandmakesocialinvestigationduringsummervacationhaveincreasedby19%whilethosewhostayathomehavedecreasedfrom55%to32%.Therearetwomainreasonsforthechanges.Foronething,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,manypeoplehavebecomerich,whichmakesitpossibleforstudentstogetfinancialsupportfrom找出开头、数据、原因和结论的常用语：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________————————————theirparentsfortraveling.Andforanother,thegovernmenthasbeenencouragingcollegestudentstomakesocialinvestigationontherapiddevelopmentinbothcitiesandvillages.Fromthechangesinthecharts,wecanpredictthatmoreandmorecollegestudentswillmaketheirsummervacationcolorfulandmeaningfulbygoingtotheoutsideworldinsteadofstayingathome._____________________________________________________________————————————审题：（格式/人称/时态/要点/篇章结构）篇章结构：①conclusion:(图表反映的问题或总体趋势tense—②facts:（具体数据或事实）tense–③reasons：（原因分析）tense---④yourownopinion/suggestions:（解决办法或建议）tense--do/willdo有明确过去时间状语用过去时；无明确年份，反映一种普遍现象或介绍情况的用现在时dodo图表类说明文的写作常使用的词汇有:（图表/数据）：table,chart,graph，figure数据；表示上升的词:表示下降的词:表示平稳:rise，increase，climb，goup,…；fall，decline，decrease，drop，godown,…;remainsteady/unchanged…一开头常用套语1.从以上表格中我们可以明显地看出，…...。•_____________________________wecanseeobviouslythat…2.正如能够从图表中所看到的，……正在发生巨大的变化。•__________________________________________greatchangeshavetakenplacein….3.正如曲线所示，最近5年来……飞速增长。___________________,therehasbeen______________…inthepastfiveyears.4.图表显示/表明……_______________________________Fromthegraphabove,AscanbeseenfromthetableThegraphshows/indicatesthat…arapidincreaseinAsisshownbythegraph二数据说明常用套语1.和去年同期相比，其销售额上涨8.3%，达到1063亿美元，创历史新高。Sales__________8.3%__________thesameperiodlastyear,____arecord$106.3billion.2.如表中所示，他们的收入在1985年翻了一翻，总计为540元。Asisshownbythegraph,in1985their___________,amountingto540yuan.increasedbycomparedwithtoincomedoubled三原因说明常用套语1.有两个原因可以解释这样一种现象。2.许多因素可以说明/导致/引起这个变化/成功/增长。3.……的原因是……Therearetworeasonsthataccountforthisphenomenon.Anumberoffactorscould_______________thechange(success/increase).Thereasonfor….isthat….accountfor1.我们可以得出……2.从图表的变化来看，我们可以预计……3.依我之见结尾的常用套语Wecandrawtheconclusionthat…Fromthechangesinthecharts,wecanpredictthat…PersonallyinmyopinionasfarasI’mconcernedasformefrommypointofview中国某市住房的产权变化以下图表反映了中国某大城市住房产权的变化：0%20%40%60%80%100%199520002008privatestate-owned[写作内容]请以“ChangesintheOwnershipofHouse”为题，为校报写一篇短文。内容包括：1.根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化；2.分析产生这些变化的原因；3.说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。Ascanbeseenfromthechart,ownershipofhousesinabigcityinChinahaschangedinthepasttenyears.实战演练1.Thereare_______________________thisphenomenon.（有两个原因可以说明这种现象。）2.Theprivate_______________comparedwiththesameperiodin2000.（增加到40%）(Therearetworeasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.)(Theownershipoftheprivatehouses)Completethefollowingsentencestworeasonsthataccountforincreasedto4o%4.___________________________ofprivatehouses_______yearbyyear_____1995__2005whilethatofthestate-ownedhouses___________from75%to10%.Thepercentageoftheownershipfromtoincreasedwentdown3.Thereasonwhy________________isthatthesociety____________greatly.ithaschangedgreatlyhasdevelopedOnepossibleversion:OwnershipofHousesinaBigCityinChinaAscanbeseenfromthechart,ownershipofhousesinabigcityinChinachangedinthepasttenyears.In1995,_____________werestate-owned,andfiveyearslater,the________________________toprivateoneswas3to2.Butfromthenon,theownershipof__________houseschangedsorapidlythatofhouseshavebeenprivatesofar.75percentofthehousesrateofstate-ownedhouses80percentThechiefreasonforthisgreatchangeisthat__________________thepeople’slivingstandardshavebeenimproving,somostofthemcan____________thehouses.Besides,somepeopledonotsavealotofmoneyinthebankfortheirchildrenbecausetheywanttohavetheirownhomeandenjoylife.Suchchanges___________________onthedevelopmentofsociety,whichdoesgoodtoboththe_________andthe___________.from1995uptonowaffordtobuyhavehadagreateffectpersonalitysocietyConclusion•一开头常用套语1.Fromthegraph/table/diagramabove,2.Ascanbeenseenfromthetable(=Aswecanseeclearlyfromthetable),3.Asisshownbythegraph,4.Thegraphshows/indicatesthat…二数据说明常用套语1…increasedby…comparedwiththesameperiodlastyear,toarecord….2.in…(year)theirincomedoubled,amountingto….三原因说明常用套语1.Thereare…reasonsthataccountforthisphenomenon.3.Thereasonfor….isthat….2.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfor(contributeto/leadto/resultin)thechange(success/increase).四结尾的常用套语1.Wecandrawtheconclusionthat…2.Fromthechangesinthecharts,wecanpredictthat…3.Personally/inmyopinion/asfarasI’mconcerned/asformefrommypointofview