2017英语高考二轮复习专题课件第一部分课时12短文改错(二)——句法和行文逻辑错误

对点训练规范练课时12短文改错(二)——句法和行文逻辑错误试题对点训练规范练(2016·高考全国Ⅲ卷)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。试题对点训练规范练Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However，myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.答案对点训练规范练答案：Theteenageyearyearsfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseworstyearsinmylife.Atthe﹨first,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourselfmyself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuchso.Theyalwaystelltoldmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfreefromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearwearingstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometoforcollege.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowhenever∧Ineedhelp.对点训练规范练一、句法错误高考英语短文改错常见的句法错误有动词的时态、语态错误，非谓语动词使用错误，主谓一致错误，名词性从句中的连词的误用，定语从句中的关系代词和关系副词的误用等。这些错误通常与句子成分的分析紧密相关，所以难度较大。对点训练规范练1.动词的时态、语态错误近几年短文改错题涉及时态的考查点通常为一般现在时和一般过去时的混用。有时也涉及对其他时态的考查。而语态错误主要包括主动语态与被动语态的误用以及不及物动词用了被动语态。一般来说，在高考短文改错中必有一个时态错误。(2016·高考全国Ⅲ卷)However，myparentsdidn'tseemtothinkso.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.试题解析答案句法错误。由前句的didn't和后句的felt可判断用一般过去时。答案：tell→told试题解析对点训练规范练答案2.非谓语动词使用错误非谓语动词使用错误在短文改错中较为常见。该类错误主要体现在以下几个方面：动词不定式的符号to赘余或残缺，过去分词和现在分词的混用等。(2016·高考全国Ⅲ卷)IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.wear放在介词by之后，应当用动名词形式wearing。答案：wear→wearing试题解析对点训练规范练答案(2015·高考四川卷)It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.want后跟不定式作宾语，所以share前应当加上不定式符号to。答案：share前加上to试题解析对点训练规范练答案3.主谓一致错误主谓一致错误是指谓语动词的形式跟主语不一致。其错误类型表现为：主语是复数形式，而谓语动词却用了单数形式，或者主语是单数形式，谓语动词却用了复数形式。主谓一致错误也是考生在书面表达中常犯的错误，考生也通常忽略这方面的问题。(2016·高考浙江卷)Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowus.本句的主语是we，故系动词was改成were。答案：was→were试题解析对点训练规范练答案4.主从句连接词误用此类错误主要指名词性从句中的连词的误用，定语从句中的关系代词和关系副词的误用等。(2016·高考四川卷)ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom'sfavorite.句法错误。分析句子结构可知，dishes后跟的是定语从句，what不能引导定语从句，应用that/which引导。引导词在定语从句中作cooked的宾语，可以省略，此时就相当于把what删除。答案：what→that/which或去掉what对点训练规范练二、行文逻辑错误行文逻辑错误常见的有代词的指代错误，连词的逻辑意义错误等。这类错误很难被发现，而此类错误基本上都会有所涉及，所以针对这类题考生必须通过阅读全文来综合考虑。1.代词的指代错误代词的指代错误常见的是代词的指代对象、单复数及代词的格与文章的逻辑意义不一致，此外还有反身代词的错用等。这类错误通常较为隐蔽。试题解析对点训练规范练答案(2016·高考全国Ⅲ卷)Atfirst，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.行文逻辑错误。此处谈论的都是“我”的事情。答案：yourself→myself2.连词的逻辑意义错误对点训练规范练试题对点训练12句法和行文逻辑错误A(2016·高考四川卷)ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival，it'spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull­timejob，soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom'sfavoritest.Atdinner，wesaidtoher，“HappyMother'sDay！”Momwasgratefulandmoving.对点训练规范练答案答案：ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival，it'spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull­timejob，sobutshehastodomostofthehouseworkshousework.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorandIplannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.Wegetgotupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwenton﹨shopping.对点训练规范练答案Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhishand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedin∧thekitchen.Thedisheswhatthat/which（或去掉what）IcookedwereMom'sfavoritestfavorite.Atdinner，wesaidtoher，“HappyMother'sDay！”Momwasgratefulandmovingmoved.对点训练规范练试题B(2016·高考浙江卷)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday，we'dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere！MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.对点训练规范练答案答案：WhenIwasaveryyoungchildrenchild，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslatelater.Everytimehearrivedhomeat∧theendoftheday，we'dgreetherhimatthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewaswereandpretendnottoknowingknowus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehad﹨adrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychatchatted，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinonthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedexcitingandfrighteningtobeupthere！MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.对点训练规范练试题C(2016·济宁曲师大附中高三检测)ItwasonSundaysoIdidn'thavetogotoschoolasusually.Myparentswenttothecountrysidetoseemygrandparents，leftmealone.Afterfinishingmyhomework，Ibegantoplayfootballathome.Allofasudden，Ikickedtheballsohardlythatitflewrightontoavaseandbrokeit.Itwasgreatfavoriteofmymother's.Idecided