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1高三书面表达专题—ALetterAskingforInformationI．文章结构。咨询信一般由三部分构成：第一部分：表明写作意图。点明咨询的主要内容。第二部分：详细叙述咨询的内容。第三部分：希望对方给予回信。写作语气：客气，有礼貌。II.常见错误。假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。以下是该则广告的信息。请根据上述信息，给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。你的邮件必须包括以下的内容：1.是否有购物时间，学生票价；2.费用是否包括景点门票、午餐；3.回牛津时间。Correctthemistakesinthemodelessay：DearSir/Madame,I’mwrittingformoreinformationaboutthedaytourtoLondon.AsastudentatOxfordUniversity,I’dliketoknowdoyouhaveanyspecialpriceforstudents.Asforthemoneyyoucharge,whetheritcoverstheentrancefeeforvisitingtheplaceslisting?What2aboutlunch?Isitcontained?OrdoIneedtobringalongmyownfood?Howlongwillthetourlast?SinceIneedtopreparemylessonsforthenextday,I’dliketoknowthetimetoreturnback.Besides,I’mwonderingisthereanytimeforshopping?IreallywanttohavealookatthebigstoresinLondon.Yours,LiHuaIII.范文示例：Readthefollowingpassageandpayattentiontotheformalwrittenrequestsforinformation.假如你是李华，你在杂志Panorama上读到以下广告：之后你想加入这一组织。请你写一封信给Greenplanet,了解以下细节：meetings多久举行一次，地点talks专家还是会员主讲newsletters是否额外收费membershipfee学生是否优惠DearSir/Madam,Iamwritingtoyouwithregardtoyouradvertisementpublishedinthemagazine“Panorama”.IaminterestedinenvironmentalprotectionandIamconsideringjoiningGreenplanet.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeinformationaboutyourorganization.Tobeginwith,Iwouldliketoknowhowoftenthemeetingsareheldandwheretheytakeplace.I’malsointerestedinknowingwhetherthetalksaregivenbyexpertsinthefieldorbymembersofyourassociation.Inaddition,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldinformmewhetherthereisanyextrachargeforthenewslettersyoupublish.Finally,itisnotcleartomewhetherthereisareduced3membershipfeeforstudents.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouatyourearliestconvenience.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaIV.写作模板及注意事项：写作模板开头：1.___________youradvertisementinthepaper,Iaminterested________it.拜读了你们在报纸上做的广告，我很感兴趣。2.NowIamwritingforsomedetailedinformation.正文：1._________________,Iwouldliketoknow….首先，我想知道……2.I’malsointerestedinknowing….3.而且，我不知道newsletters是否会额外收费（至少3种表达）。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五星级的表达：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.就价钱而言，学生有优惠吗？_______theprice,doyouhavediscountsforstudents?Asfortheprice,I’mwondering_____________________________________.5.最后，不知道学生是否有优惠。Finally,itisstillnotcleartomewhetherthereisareducedmembershipfeeforstudents.五星级的表达：结尾：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.Or:Yourtimelyreplywouldbemuchappreciated.Or:Iamlookingforwardverymuchtohearingfromyousoon.注意事项：1.句式忌单一，要注意变换和过渡词的恰当运用；2.区分名词性从句和一般疑问句或特殊疑问句的语序。V.写作训练:假设你是李华，寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。你想了解有关订票方面的具体情况，例如：可否在网上订票？团体购票是否可以打折？可否因故取消订票？你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表（见下表），但还有些具体信息不明确。请给迪斯尼乐园发一封信，询问有关情况。注意：词数在100左右，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。TicketPrices4□Regular□Peak□SpecialAdultsHK$295HK$350HK$350Children(aged3to11)HK$210HK$250HK$250Seniors(65orover)HK$170HK$200HK$200Childrenunder3?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________