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1英语写作常见错误与分析一、结构层面错误分析1、段落少于三段。只写一段0-4分，写两段0-7分。2、结构安排不合理。一般来说中间主体段篇幅最大。一句话不足以成段。3、论述段落无层次感：未使用合适的过渡词。二、语法层面错误分析1、句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余2、主谓不一致3、双动词4、时态问题5、名词可数与不可数的误用6、动词作主语7、修饰语错位8、悬垂修饰语一、句子不完整•句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，又想加些补充说明时发生．Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.Forexample,byTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.改为：Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radioandnewspaper.一、句子多余例6．Thepublicserviceadvertisementcatcheveryone’seyes,enableuspaymoreattentionaboutourlivesandsocieties.改为：Thepublicserviceadvertisementscatcheveryone’seyes,whichenablesustopaymoreattentiontoourlivesandsocieties.二、主谓不一致e.g.Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.•改为：Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewantsto.三、双动词（常见therebe句型）改为1：Therearealargenumberofpeoplewhodiefromthedisasters.改为2：Therearealargenumberofpeopledyingfromthedisasters.改为3：Alargenumberofpeoplediefromthedisasters.e.g．Therearelargenumberofpeoplediefromthedisasters.四、时态问题改为1：Withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,moreandmorepeoplehavepossessedcars.e.g．Withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,moreandmorepeoplehadcars.五、名词可数不可数的误用改为:Toomanytestshavenegativeimpactsonstudents.e.gToomuchtestshasnegativeimpactonstudents.六、动词作主语改为:Toplay/Playingcomputergameswillsurelyinfluencestudents’study.e.gPlaycomputergameswillsurelyinfluencestudents’study.七、修饰语错位•英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．e.g.IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.改为：IbelieveIcandoitwellandknowtheworldoutsidethecampusbetter.八．悬垂修饰语•所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例1.Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.改为：WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.例2．Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.改为：Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.三、语言表达层面错误分析1、词性使用混乱2、词语搭配错误3、to的用法4、汉语翻译痕迹明显一、词性误用•“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．•Nobodycannegativetheimportanceofmoney.•剖析：negative系形容词，误作动词。•改为：Nobodycandenytheimportanceofmoney.一、词性误用•“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．.Allthegraduatesarefacingthesameproblemoffindingagoodjobinmodernsocial.•剖析：social系形容词，误作名词。•改为：Allthegraduatesarefacingthesameproblemoffindingagoodjobinmodernsociety.二、词语搭配错误e.gWemustpayattentiontoitandmakeasolutionoftheproblem.改为：Wemustpayattentiontoitandfind/workout/figureoutasolutiontotheproblem.介词to和不定式符号的混淆e.gToomanytestswilldoharmtocultivateourindependentthinking.改为：Toomanytestswilldoharmtothecultivationofourindependentthinking.三、to的用法四、汉语思维•Today,Moneytoeverybodyisveryimportance,our’seat,cloth,live,go,etc.Iverylikeit.改为：Ilikeitverymuch.改为：Today,Moneytoeverybodyisveryimportant,becausefood,clothing,shelterandtransportation,thefourbasicnecessitiesallconsumemoney.预测作文一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsonShouldWeGiveaHandtotheStrangersinNeedofHelp?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.ShouldWeGiveaHandtotheStrangersinNeedofHelp?Asisvividlyshowedinthepicture,anoldwomanhasfallendownandshoutedforhelp,thewomanstandingbesidewarnedtheyoungmannottoofferhelpsoastoavoidbeingblackmailedbytheelderly.Suchimagedrawsattentiontotheissuewhetherweshouldofferhelptothestrangerinneedofhelp.Thereisonlyoneimportantreasonwhyaminorityofpeoplearewillingtooffertheirhelptostrangers,especiallytheelderly.Thatis,peopleareoftenblackmailedaftergivingahand,whichisreportedonTVornewspapersquitefrequently.However,thisphenomenonhasarousedanumberofdreadfulconsequencesonthesociety.Tobeginwith,suchindifferencetoneededpeoplewillleadtomoraldecliningofthewholesociety.Moreover,ifwedonotofferourhelp,peopleindesperateneedmayevenlosetheirlives.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwon’tturnblindeyestothoseneededstrangerssincetohelpothersisaglorioustraditionofournation.Meanwhile,Iwillprotectmyselfandofferhelpinanappropriateway.OnlywhenIhaveareadymindtohelpotherscanIexpecttobehelpedwhenIaminneed.预测作文二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsonOntheStudyofChineseTraditionalCulture.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.OntheStudyofChineseTraditionalCultureJustlikewhatyoucanseeinthepictureabove,studentsareboundupinlearningEnglishinGuoxueclass,whichmakestheChineseteacherfurious.RecentfewyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatpeoplehaveputEnglishasthetoppriorityandignoredtheimportanceofChinesetraditionalculture,SinceEnglishisconsideredasameansofpromotingcommerceandworldcommunication.People,however,differinopinionsonthismatter.SomepeopleholdtheideathattheprominenceofEnglishstudyshouldbereducedsignificantly,studentsshouldspendbalancedtimeoneachsubject，especiallyforChinesestudents,theyshouldrenderChinese,theirtonguetobeonthelistofpriority.ItismorecrucialtoacquiretheChinesetraditionalcultureintheviewofthesepeople.Meanwhile,somepeoplethinkitisunnecessarytolearnChinesetraditionalculturesincethey’reout-of-dateinthismodernsociety.Theyadvocatethatinordertobecompetentinthemodernsociety,individualsshouldhaveagoodmasteryofEnglish.Astome,IstronglyrecommendstudentstolimittheirtimesinlearningEnglish