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一.雅思大作文的15大考察内容考察频率最高专题:1.教育:儿童,中学,大学教育体制和方法2.科技发展对生活的影响3.文化的组成因素和保护4.生活方式的转变和社会观念5.全球化及其影响6.环境问题和环境保护7.政府投资考察次重点专题:1.艺术的价值2.媒体的作用3.广告的影响4.动物的保护和动物实验5.城乡差距和城市化6.犯罪7.弱势群体:妇女的权利,妇女参军8.体育雅思写作错误检查表(10条)1.使用了正确的语法结构:时态语态,主谓一致,从句,用词准确(名词,动词,形容词的形式),介词,冠词2.句式有变化3.使用了一定量的词汇4.拼写没有错误5.观点明确,语意精准不模糊6.每段主题句都表明了该段中心思想,所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题7.大量的过渡性词语(逻辑连接词),使句子间和段落间都具有逻辑性和条理性8.提供了足够的细节,例子或论据9.每一段话都得到充分展开10.每一段话都紧扣文章主题如何应用:a.1347当做检查项目,其他当做考前提醒b.时间紧,就改第一段和每段的前两句话三.大作文首段基本写作策略---三步走1.转述背景,扩展题目(setting/backgroundinformation):把题目所提供的背景再用自己的话拓展转述同义替换一下题目:Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportsormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobeagoodsportspersonormusician.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.考官写的开头段:Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sports,artormusic.2.说明意图(statementofpurposes):写作意图=你的立场或者观点,争取用一句话说明你的观点,位置可以是在首段的最后一句3.提及下文,分支观点的罗列和总结(summaryofmainpoints):对主要观点用短语或者短句形式进行总结概括注意:一般情况下包括前两步就可以了,第三步视情况而定.句子个数不是绝对的开头段写作套路赏析Itisinevitablethatastechnologydevelops,sotraditionalculturemustbelost.Technologyandtraditionareincompatible,youcannothavebothtogether.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?开头段1:Itisafactoflifethattheadvanceofscienceandtechnologyhasbeenaccompaniedbyadeclineintraditionalculture.(背景转述)Inmyopinion,thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,becausesomeaspectsoftraditionalculturehamperprogressandshouldbeabandoned.Moreover,itisnaturalthatpeopleshouldwanttofindnewwaysofdoingthings.(写作意图)Itisafactoflifethat…这是现实中的事实….Itisnaturalthat…很自然….Itisquitecommonthesedaysthat…目前很普遍的是….开头段2:Itisanundeniablefactthatscientificandtechnologicaldevelopmentshavebroughtconsiderablebenefitstoeverywalkoflife.EspeciallysincetheIndustrialRevolutiontookplace,ourliveshavebeenmademuchmoreconvenientbyinventionssuchastrains,airplanesandcomputers.(背景转述)ButIthinkthatthelossofourtraditionalcultureistoohighapricetopayforit.(写作意图)1.Itisanundeniablefactthat…不可否认的是…2.AistoohighapricetopayforBA对于B来说是一个巨大的代价Theenvironmentaldeteriorationanddestructionaretoohighapriceforoureconomicgrowth.四.议论文五大题型分类和写作套路(一)讨论型discuss题目表述:Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.讨论正反两方面观点并给出你的观点例如:题目1Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.题目2:Somepeoplebelievethatculturewillberuinedifitisusedtoearntourismrevenue,butothersconsiderthattourismistheonlywayofprotectingaculture.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.讨论型discuss写作套路套路1.两方平衡式---两个观点公平讨论开头段:不表达个人观点立场主体段1:反方观点(你不倾向的观点)--2点理由主体段2:正方观点(你相对倾向的观点)--2点理由结尾段:方法1---你同意其中一个观点方法2---都同意套路2.一方倾向式---两个观点不公平讨论开头段:表达个人观点或立场主体段1:详谈正方观点(你相对倾向的观点)----2-3点理由主体段2:简谈反方观点(你不倾向的观点)----1-2点理由结尾段:重申你的观点或立场文章布局及思路练习题目1---犯罪类Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.正方观点—惩罚固定1.Fixedpunishmentwillhaveadeterringeffectonsociety.(对…有威慑作用),accomplishthepurposeofdeterrence2.Guarantee/ensuresocialstabilityandsecuritytoalargeextent3.Asignofthetriumphofgoodoverevil4.fixedpunishmenttoeachtypeofcrimecouldraiseindividuals’awarenessofobeyingthelaw.反方观点—惩罚不固定1.Takingthecircumstancesandmotivationofacrimeintoaccountisaprerequisiteforestablishingandensuringjusticeandequity.绿色部分:同类信息大量携带(并列)前提,先决条件:precondition,premise,prerequisite在….的前提下:underthepremiseprecondition/prerequisiteof2.Somekindsofcrimesshouldbetakendifferently,suchasself-defenseandmanslaughter.自我防卫和过失杀人3.Criminallawshavetoprovideminimumandmaximumpenalties惩罚forthepunishmentandthelawalsohavetoforeseecertaincasesofexemptions.免除,豁免文章布局及思路练习题目2---旅游类Somepeoplebelievethatculturewillberuinedifitisusedtoearntourismrevenue,butothersconsiderthattourismistheonlywayofprotectingaculture.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.正方观点---旅游业有益于文化保护1.Intergratingtourismandculturalheritagecouldprovideeconomicincentivesforprotectingculture.economicincentives=financialsupport2.Museums,historicalsitesandruinsenablethevisitorstogetadeepinsightintolocalcustomsandpractices,experiencelocaltraditions,artandheritages,respectthehostcommunityanditsenvironment,promotethedialogueovernaturalandculturalresourcesbetweendifferentcountries.反方观点---旅游业有害于文化保护1.Tourismcreatespollutionandwaste.Therubbishdiscardedbytravelerswouldhaveanegativeimpacton/doharmto/dogreatdamagetothetouristspotsandlocalculturalruins.2.Excessivebuilding(roads,hotelsetc.)destroysnaturalhabitatsandspoilsthelandscape.3.Localtraditionsmaybelostduetotheexoticculturalconflicts.4.Traditionaljobsandskillsdieout(e.g.farming,fishing).5.Localpeopleareforcedtoworkinthetouristindustry,whichwouldtaketheirattentionandvigorawayfromtheculturalconservation.(二).同意与否型ag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