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2017年1月上海市高考英语写作题假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑期将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：1.你对此事的明确的态度；2.你的理由。考生原作1I’mgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipatinginanoverseascommunicationactivityinBritainwhichwilllasttwomonths.Isuggestthatyoushouldchooseworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourseverymonthforthelocalcommunityaging,hospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyoucanreduceyourcosts.Contrarytotheaccommodationarrangedbythehost,youcansavealotofmoney.Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooseit.Stayingintheaginghospital,thecontrastcouldn’tbegreater.Ontheonehand,onlybyworkingasavolunteercanyougainafreestay.Itsoundsgreat!Yourarrivalwilladdcolorstotheatmospherethere.Ontheotherhand,duringoursparetime,wewillalsospendtimehelpingothersinthatoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heatedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wecangainboththingsatthesametime.”Sowhynotchooseit?Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvise.Bestwishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere.Itisagoldenchancethatyouwillgaininsummervocation.Inshort,enjoyyourself.考生原作2ItissaidthatyouwillgoabroadtoEnglandforatwo-monthoverseascommunicationactivityinthissummervocation.Ihearthatyouarehesitatingwhethertospendhigherpricechoosingarrangeddormitoryortospend30hourseverymonthservingtheoldtogetafreeliving.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldchoosethefirstone.Ifyouchoosethesecondoption,youwillusetoomuchtimetodoserviceinsteadofstudyingthelocalculture.Althoughcommunicationwiththeoldcangetalotoflivelyexperienceandavoidmanymistakesinlife,yourmostimportantresponsibilityistolearnhowoverseasstudentsstudyandwhattheywilllearn.Arrangedroomcansaveyoutimeandhavemorechancestolivewithpeerswhomayhavethesameinterestwithyou.Bythis,youcanmakealotofyoungfriendsandifyouareintroubleinfuture,theymaygiveyousomesuggestionsandahelpinghand.IwishthatyouwouldtakemyadviceandI’mwaitingtohearfromyou.6月份高考英语写作题假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校学生会将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：1.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议；2.你的理由。徒步活动方案主题：发现上海时间：5月1日（星期日）下午3:00路线：从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，抵达外滩（theBund）后原路返回考生原作1I’mastudentnamedLeiWangofourschool.HearingthenewsthatourStudents’UnionwillorganizeawalkingprogramandhasputthedraftedplanontheInternet,I’llventuretoairmythoughtsaboutitasfollows.Tobeginwith,frommypointofview,thetimeplannedisnotappropriate.Asisknowntoall,thefirstdayofMayisthefirstdayofholidayinChinasothatthecentercityofShanghaiissuretobecrowdedonthatday.ToensurethatwestudentshaveagoodtasteofbeautyofShanghai,thedatehadbetterbeputofftilltheendoftheholiday.Besides,Iholdtheideathattherouteshouldberevised.Personally,afterapproachingattheBund,it’snotagoodchancetogobackaccordingtotheoriginalroute.Instead,westudentscangotootherplacesofinteresttogobacktoschool,whichguaranteesagoldenopportunityofwitnessingthebeautyofShanghai.Inanutshell,allthethoughtsabovearebasedonmypersonalsuggestions.Iwouldbemuchobligedifmysuggestionsarefullyconsidered.考生原作2Wordscomethatawalkingactivitywillbeheldinourschool.Aboutthisactivity,Ihavesomeideas.Ithinkwecanmakethesubject—findingShanghai.IhaveseenthesubjectonourschoolInternet.Ithinkitisgreatfulandinteresting.Butinmyopinion,weshouldgotomorelocalandhistoricplaceinShanghai,suchasYuGarden.Becausethislocalplaceisrichofmanyhistoricalcultureandmeaningful.SomyplanisthatwecangotoYuGardenfirstandthenwecanaccepttheplanonschoolInternet---startinPeople’sSquare,NanjingRoad,endintheBund.TheanotheradviceisthatIthinkthetimeisnotfit.BecauseonSundaythesepopularplacewillattractmanytrouists,itisverydangerous.SoIsuggestthatweshouldholdtheseactivityonworkday.That’sall,Ihopeyoucanacceptmyadvice.Thanks!考生2（修改版）Towhomitmayconcern,Wordhascomethatahikingeventwillbeheldinourschool.Andyouareseekingforopinionsfromteachersandstudents.Ihavesomepersonalopinionsaboutthisevent.Inthefirstplace,Ithinkweshouldstickcloselytothesubject—FindingShanghai,whichmeanslettinghikersgettoknowmoreaboutShanghai.Weshouldgopastsomeuniqueplaceswhichrepresentthecity’scharacteristics,suchasYuGarden,theOrientalPearlTVTowerandetc.TheseplacesarefulloffactorsofShanghai’shistoricalcultureandclassicarchitecture.Inthesecondplace,Ifeelthatthetimeisnotappropriate,foronSundaytherepopularplaceswillbecrowdedwithtouristsandpedestrians,whichisunfavorabletotheevent.Inthiscase,Iproposethatweshouldholdthishikingeventonaworkdaytoavoidunnecessarycongestion.That’sallIwanttoputforwardtoyou,andIhopethatyoucanadoptmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,WangLei1月份高考英语概括写作题ShynessIfyousufferfromshyness,youarenotalone,forshynessisauniversalphenomenon.Itisnotsurprisingthatsocialscientistsarelearningmoreaboutitscauses.Thefirstenvironmentalcauseofshynessmanybeachild’shomeandfamilylife.Today’schildrenaregrowingupinsmallerandsmallerfamilies,withfewerandfewerrelativeslivingnearby.Growingupinhomesinwhichbothparentsworkfulltime,childrenmaynothavethesocializingexperienceoffrequentvisitsbyneighboursandfriends.Becauseoftheirlackofsocialskills,theymaybegintofeelsociallyinhibited,orshy,whentheyst