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改错一Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneoftheexcellentstudentinourclass.Althoughsheisclever,butsheworksveryhard.Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.ShewasdoingherhomeworksoneSundaymorningwhenshesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookoutofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbour’shouse.Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.Herneighbourwasverythankfulforherhelp.改错二Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaythecinema,ImetanEnglishwoman,wholostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmandtookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplaceinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmeanythingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,Istillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldhavebeenabletohelphim.改错三DearRalph,I'maseniorstudent.I'mgettingwellwithaboyinmyclass.ButIhavefalleninlovewithhimforalmosthalfayear.Heisshyboy,soIwrotehimaletterfirsttoexpressmyfeeling.Hewroteback.Inhisletterhesaid,Wearestudents.Ourtaskisstudyhard.Letustowaitandseewhetherwehavesomechanceaftergraduation.SoaftergraduationItelephonedtohim,askhimaboutgoingout.Buthesaidhedidn'twantto.HejustwantedtosleepandwatchedTV.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?DoyouthinkIshouldcontinuetolovehimandgiveup?改错四DearBob,Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriend,andgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgotoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.Iusetoplayping-pongalotonmysparetime,butnowIaminterestinginfootball.Doyouplayanyballgames?Whatyourfavoritesport?Ilookforwardtohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua改错五Twomonthsago,Iwenttoabroadforfurtherstudy.BeforeIleft,Iwasgivenalotpresent.Amongthem，thereweretwopresentswhichwerereallyinterestedme.Mysisterbuysmeabookwithcolorpicturesaboutbodylanguageandwithwordsaboutcustomsofdifferentcountryinthem.Mybrothergavemeanotewhichread,“Mypresenthasputinyourbedroom.”WhenIhurriedintomybedroom,Ifoundabox,inthattherewasanelectronicdictionary.Iwasverygladbutafewsurprisedtoreceivethesetwopresents.改错六DearLiMing,Ihavereceivedyourletteryesterday.Don’tworryaboutyou.I’mgettingalongwellwithmyresearchworksinthelab.But,tomysurprising,yousayyouwillgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisthatyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinteresting.I’mafraidIcan’tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillbeimportanttoolinyourfuturework.Besides,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantatourdailylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillsucceed.Dorememberwhereisawill,thereisaway.改错七Somestudentsdon’tliketalkingabouttheirparentsoftenasiftheirparentslovethemverymuch.Areyougoingonwellwithyourparents?Youandyourparentswillbeveryhappyifyoucanbefriend.Herearesomewaytohaveagoodtalkwiththem.Findagoodtimetotalk,likewhenyou’reeatingdinner,goingoutforwalkandwatchingTV.Tellthemsomethingyou’reinterestedin,oraskthemabouttheirlifewhentheyareyoung.Theylovetotalkaboutourpast!Meetthemfacetofaceandlistentothemcarefully.Behonesty,andyourparentswilltrustyoumore.改错八OneafternoonJackiswalkingdownariveralong.Itwasverycolddayandontheriverfewboatscouldbeseen．Whenhestoppedonabridgeandlookdown,hesawaterriblescene.Aboyfellofacanoe(独木舟)andwasstrugglinginthewater．Withoutthinkaboutherself,Jackjumpedintotheriverandtosavetheboy．Hewasabouttodrag（拖）theboytotheriverbankthenhesawsomepeoplestandinamotorboatunderthebridge．OneofthemstaredJackandsaidangrily,“Theyaremakingafilmandyou’vespoiledawholeafternoon’swork!”答案：改错一：who's改为whose2.正确 3.去掉but4.on改为in5.parents后加were6.homeworks改为homework7.stopped后加to8.find改为found9.immediate改为immediately10.fire前加the改错二：the改为a2.正确3.see前加to4.go改为going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8.去掉had9.on改为at10.him改为her改错三：1.getting后加on或along2.fallen改为been3.shy前加a4.feeling改为feelings当情感讲时feeling常用单数5.study前加to或study改为studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改为watch9正确10.and改为or改错四：1.learn改为learnt或learned。2.to后加be或become。3.删去more。第一次告诉Bob关于自己的一些事情，此处用more不合逻辑。4.where改为which。在此非限定性定语从句中，关系词在从句中作主语，故用which。5.此行无错。6.subject改为subjects。quitsafew意为“相当多”，修饰可数名词复数。7.use改为used。据下文butnow可知，此处应用usedtodo表示“过去常常做某事”。8.interesting改为interested。beinterestedin…为固定短语，“对……感兴趣”。9.What后加is。此句无谓语。10.hear改为hearing。lookforwardtodoingsth.为固定短语。改错五：答案：76．去掉to 短语错误。goabroad“出国”。77．present→presents 名词的数错误。present“礼物”，是可数名词。78．去掉第二个were 动词错误。interest在此是及物动词用法，意为“使……感兴趣”。beinterestedin“对……感兴趣”。79．buys→bought 时态错误。由全文可知，用一般过去时态。80．√81．them→it 代词错误。在这本书里有关于肢体语言的图片和不同国家的语言习俗。用it指代这本书。82．put前加been 语态错误。我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了。礼物是被放在卧室里，所以用被动语态。83．that→which 定语从句关系词错误。介词后用which，不用that。84．but→and 连接逻辑错误。前后是并列关系而非转折关系。85．few→little 混淆错误。alittle与little可以用作副词，表示“有点”“稍稍”，修饰动词、副词、形容词或介词短语。如：Heisalittletired.他有点累了。而afew不可用作副词。改错五1.have去掉2.about后的you改为me3.works→work4.learn→learning5.recent→recently6.interesting→interest7.English后的and改为but8.be后加an9.at→in10.where后加there改错六41.about→with/to根据句意，可知此处是表达“和父母交谈”，而不是“谈论父母