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BasicWritingIntroduceaplace假如你是一名导游，请根据下面的信息介绍我国的海南岛。面积约35000平方公里（中国第二大岛）历史6000多年人口71,110,000左右，包括十个民族居民谋生方式种水稻，捕鱼等气候四季温和风景名胜众多，是著名的旅游胜地①③②④⑤Writingstyle:Person:Tense:practicalwritingthethirdpersonthepresenttensegoto基础写作：高考大纲对写作的要求要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能：（1）准确使用语法和词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。评分标准分为5档（略）1，要点要全。2，一定的词汇，句型（数量）3，准确4，上下文的连贯。5，拼写和标点，书写较差，影响交际先降个档次。Writingsteps:1.审题：体裁，人称，时态。2.译要点：长句变短句，按英文的表达断句,并添加所缺部分按英文句子语法顺序翻译，破解难句，适当使用复合句，正确使用英文主动句子与被动句子。3.连要点：使用连词，表顺序和逻辑的短语连句成篇。4.检查修改：（标点符号，大小写，单词拼写，语句是否通顺，是否遗漏要点。）5.抄写：字迹工整的抄写在试卷上。审题Logic(逻辑性）Keywords信息词Keysentences信息句Genre(体裁）Person(人称）Tense(时态）backstep1:长句变短句第一句：海南是中国的第二大岛，总面积约35000平方公里，有着6000多年的历史。1.海南是中国的第二大岛。2.它的总面积约35000平方公里。3.它有着6000多年的历史。step2:写关键词1.thesecondlargestisland2.coveranareaof…squarekilometers/takeup…squarekilometers3.has/withahistoryof…step3:连词成句Step4:适当使用句型，连词1.HainanisthesecondlargestislandinChina.2.Hainancoversanareaof35,000squarekilometers.3.Hainanhasahistoryofover6,000years.第一第二句间可用同位语结构第二第三句间可用with结构连接。Hainan,thesecondlargestislandinChina,coversanareaof35,000squarekilometerswithahistoryofover6000years.writedownthekeywords第二句：海南总人口7,1110,000左右，包括十个民族。关键词：thepopulationof…is…/haveapopulationof/withapopulationof;include/consistof/bemadeupof…连词成句：whichconsistsof10nationalities（定语从句）ThepopulationofHainanis7.11million,_________________________________.consistingof10nationalities.（分词短语）第三句：海南的人民通过种水稻，捕鱼等方式谋生。关键词：谋生：earnone’sliving;通过：by种水稻，捕鱼：growrice,fishingstep1:写关键词①PeopleinHainanearntheirliving____________________________.(介词短语)②PeopleinHainangetmanywaystoearntheirliving,suchas__________________________________________bygrowingrice,fishingandsoonfishingandsoon.(动词-ing形式)growingrice,Step2连词成句：第四句：当来到海南，你会发现全年气候温和。(1)YoucometoHainanandwillfinditmildalltheyearround.(2)WhenyoucometoHainan,youwillfinditmildalltheyearround.(3)WhencomingtoHainan,youwillfinditmildalltheyearround.5.海南名胜众多，是个著名的旅游胜地。Hainanhasmanyfamousplacesofinterest,isafeastforeyes.()TorFTherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinHainan,whicharereallyafeastforeyes.()THowtomakeitfluent?1.Hainan,thesecondlargestislandinChina,coversanareaof35,000squarekilometerswithahistoryofover6000years.2.ThepopulationofHainanis7.11million,whichconsistsof10nationalities.3.PeopleinHainangetmanywaystoearntheirliving,suchasgrowingrice,fishingandsoon.4.WhencomingtoHainan,youwillfinditmildalltheyearround.5.TherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinHainan,whicharereallyafeastforeyes.合理使用连接词，使文章层次分明，行文连贯，但要注意决不能牵强附会，让人感到别扭。1.表平行、对等或选择and;both…and…;aswellas;neither...nor…;also;notonly…butalso...2.表转折but;yet;however;nevertheless;inspiteof;although;otherwise;while3.表对比onthecontrary;insteadof;oneonehand…ontheotherhand;justlike4.表因果so;for;therefore;asaresult;because;owingto;dueto;thanksto5.表时间、顺序shortlyafter;first,second…;firstofall;tobeginwith;fivedayslater;sincethen;forthefirsttime;themoment;atlast;afterthat;then;next;finally;foronething;foranotherthing;intheend6.表递进、强调besides;furthermore;whatismore;inaddition;worsestill;aboveall;tomakemattersworse;otherwise;inspiteof;infact;afterall7.表解释、说明namely;actually;suchas;forexample;thatistosay;inotherwords;andsoon;totellyouthetruth;accordingtothis;forinstance;take…asanexample;take…forexample;asfollows8.表结论inshort;inbrief;inaword;ingeneral;asyouknow;asfarasIknow;onthewhole;tosumup;inone’sopinion9.表观点、意见Iamafraid…Ithink…Ibelieve…Isuggest…Ifeel…Itoldherthat…Hesaidthat…HainanIslandHainan,thesecondlargestislandinChina,coversanareaof35,000squarekilometerswithahistoryofover6000years.Thepopulationofitis7.11million,whichconsistsof10nationalities.Andpeopletheregetmanywaystoearntheirliving,suchasgrowingrice,fishingandsoon.WhencomingtoHainan,youwillfinditmildalltheyearround.Besides,therearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinit,whicharereallyafeastforeyes.Writethefollowingwritingafterclass.写作内容：请你结合下表内容，对广州做一个简单的英文介绍。地理位置广东省中部，是广东省的省会历史是一座古城，有2200多年的文明历史面积7434.4平方千米人口994.30万称号广州一年四季如春、繁花似锦，故又有“花城”的美誉其他1982年，国家选定广州为全国首批历史文化名城之一。今日广州，正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海内外游客。Thankyouforyourpresence.