名师指津作文汇总

•U11.2008年7月，王勇从华南师范大学中文系毕业。（graduatefrom）•他主动要求到汶川县的一所希望小学任教。（volunteer，workas，primaryschool）•他最终赢得了父母和朋友的支持。（winsupport）•由于远离家乡，刚开始他倍感孤独。（sufferfrom）•他积极迎接挑战，从不抱怨生活。（challenge，complain）•他很快适应那里的生活和气候。（adaptto）•他工作认真吗，教学占用了他大部分的时间。（takeup）•工作之余，他会抽时间锻炼身体、听音乐以放松自己。（dosomeexercise,relax）•由于工作出色，他深受师生欢迎，在学校起着越来越重要的作用。（so…that…,playanimportantpartin）十、语篇运用参考范文(Onepossibleversion)：AftergraduatingfromtheChineseDepartmentofSouthChinaNormalUniversityinJuly,2008,WangYongvolunteeredtoworkasateacherinahopeprimaryschoolofWenchuanCounty.Hefinallywonsupportfromhisparentsandfriends.Farfromhishometown,hesufferedalotfromlonelinessatthebeginning,buthemetthechallengepositivelyandnevercomplainedaboutlife,sohesoonadaptedtothelifeandweatherthere.Heisstrictinhisworkandteachingtakesupmostofhistime,butinhissparetime,hewillspendtimedoingsomeexerciseandenjoyingmusictorelaxhimself.Becauseofhisexcellentwork,heissopopularwiththeteachersandstudentsofthisschoolthatheisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartintheschool.•U2姓名：郭晶晶•职业：中国著名跳水运动员•成绩：获得四届奥运跳水冠军•经历：早年由于年轻和经验不足（inexperienced），成绩并不是太好，但她不气馁（loseconfidence），继续保持对跳水的热爱（expressakeeninterestin），后来经过努力训练，取得了可喜的成就（pullthrough,makeprogressin）。•未来：不会结束跳水职业（cometoanend）,下一个目标是伦敦奥运会。十、语篇运用参考范文(Onepossibleversion)：GuoJingjing,afamousdiverinChina,hasgotfourchampionsintheOlympicGames.Duringtheearlyyearsofhercareer,shewasbeatenformanytimesinthecompetitionowingtoherbeingyoungandinexperienced.Butshedidnotloseconfidenceinherselfandkeptexpressingakeeninterestindiving.Afterbeingtrainedveryhard,shehaspulledthroughandmadeamazingprogress.Evenso,hercareerasanathleteisnotgoingtocometoanendandhernextgoalisLondonOlympics.•U31.李华去年毕业于北京大学。（graduatefrom）•他很想留在北京工作，于是在毕业前他去了很多公司应聘，但都失败了。（applyfor）•当他要放弃的时候，一个朋友告诉他一家外贸公司有位职员将要退休，让他去试试。（beabouttodo,retire）•听到这个消息后，李华马上向那家公司递交了申请表。（fillintheapplicationfrom）•两天后，该公司通知其面试。（haveaninterview）•公司对他的表现感到很满意，决定录用他。（besatisfiedwith,employ）•李华很高兴，当晚就邀请了他的那位朋友吃饭，庆贺他终于找到了工作。（invitesbtohavedinner,celebrate）’•据说，由于李华对公司的贡献，他得到了一个出国深造的机会。（it’ssaidthat…contribution,havetheopportunitytodo）十、语篇运用参考范文(Onepossibleversion)：LastyearLiHuagraduatedfromPekingUniversityandwantedtoworkinBeijing,sobeforegraduationhewenttomanycompaniestoapplyforjobs,butfailed.Hewasabouttogiveitupwhenoneofhisfriendstoldhimthataclerkinatradecompanywouldretiresoonandaskedhimtohaveatry.Hearingthenews,LiHuafilledintheapplicationformandhandeditintothecompanywhichinformedhimtohaveaninterviewtwodayslater.Tohishappiness,thecompanywasquitesatisfiedwithhisperformanceanddecidedtoemployhim,soLiHuainvitedhisfriendtohavedinnerinordertocelebratehissuccessinfindingajobatlast.ItissaidthatLiHuahasgotanopportunitytogoabroadforfurtherstudyduetohisoutstandingcontributionstothecompany.LastyearLiHuagraduatedfromPekingUniversityandwantedtoworkinBeijing,sobeforegraduationhewenttomanycompaniestoapplyforjobs,butfailed.Hewasabouttogiveitupwhenoneofhisfriendstoldhimthataclerkinatradecompanywouldretiresoonandaskedhimtohaveatry.Hearingthenews,LiHuafilledintheapplicationformandhandeditintothecompanywhichinformedhimtohaveaninterviewtwodayslater.Tohishappiness,thecompanywasquitesatisfiedwithhisperformanceanddecidedtoemployhim,soLiHuainvitedhisfriendtohavedinnerinordertocelebratehissuccessinfindingajobatlast.ItissaidthatLiHuahasgotanopportunitytogoabroadforfurtherstudyduetohisoutstandingcontributionstothecompany.•U41.张军很喜欢上网，2年前买了一台新电脑，花了几乎所有的积蓄。（feellike/enjoy,spend）•两年来，他经常在网上购物，订票以及查询各种节日优惠。（inthelasttwoyears,holidayoffers,shoppingontheInternet）•朋友向他推荐一种虚拟旅游服务，据说感觉好像处于真实的环境中一样。（virtualholiday,feelasif）•他一直梦想能去英国的Bournemouth,该城市位于英格兰南海岸，有七公里长的黄金海岸，素有海上花园之称。•此次体验后，他决定建一个网站，把世界各地著名景点都收藏其中，帮助大家实现环球旅游的梦想，同时，还可以供大家分享彼此的快乐和体验。（attraction,share）•尽管开头很难，但他很乐观，相信会有很多人来光临。（optimistic）十、语篇运用参考范文(Onepossibleversion)：Zhangjun,whoenjoysgoingontheInternet,spentalmostallhissavingsbuyinganewcomputertwoyearsago.Intherecenttwoyears,hehasbeenontheInternetshopping,bookingticketsorfindingoutallkindsofholidayoffers.Onedayafriendofhisrecommendedhimvirtualholiday,whichwassaidtomakeyoufeelasifyouwereinarealsituation.Hewassoexcited,forhehadbeendreamingtogotoBournemouth,acitylocatedinthesoutherncoastofEnglandknownastheGardenoftheSeaforits7-milegoldencoast.Afterthatexperience,hedecidedtosetupawebsitewithallthefamoustouristattractionsaroundtheworldsothatpeoplevisitthissiteandsharetheirhappyexperiences.Thoughitishardatthebeginning,heisstillsooptimistic,believingthissitewillseemanypeoplecomeandvisit.十、语篇运用---基础写作时间昨天晚上地点俱乐部歌手80年代末组建乐队;以获奖歌曲而闻名;服装独特;表演时边唱边演奏乐器场景大厅座无虚席;舞台布景普通;音响系统极佳观众人多嘈杂,整场欢呼,跟唱,很开心1.昨天晚上,俱乐部音乐会现场座无虚席.(conert,with复合结构)2.这个乐队是在80年代成立的.(inthelate1980s)乐队以获奖歌曲而闻名.(befamousfor,award-winning)3.表演者服装独特(performer,constomer,unique)舞台布景普通;音响系统极佳(ordinary)4.整场歌迷欢呼,跟唱(throughout,can’thelp,singalong)歌手表演时边唱边演奏乐器(while,playthemusicalinstruments)5.人多嘈杂，很开心(crowded,noise;enjoy)1.昨天晚上,俱乐部音乐会现场座无虚席.(conert,with复合结构)Lastnight,therewasaconcertintheclubwithnotasingleseatempty.2.这个乐队是在80年代成立的.(inthelate1980s)Thebandwasformedinthelate1980s.乐队以获奖歌曲而闻名.(befamousfor,award-winning)Theband