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大学优秀作文精编371507_11988872号题目要求：题目：Mytroubles要求：Noweverybodyseemstoliveinallkindsofdistractions,suchasinformationfrommobilephonesandcomputers,varietyshowsonTV,orinvitationtoashoppingtripfromafriend.Writeanessayofabout300wordsaboutwhat,inyourlife,keepsyoufromcompletingtasksordoingwhatyouenjoy.Pleaselearntoputwhatyouhavelearnedinclasstouse,especially:1.clarifyingtopicandpointinyourTS;2.evaluatingtherelevanceofinformationtoensureunity;3.providingspecificandsufficientevidencetoensureimpact;4.organizingyoursupportingpointstoensurecoherenceMyTroublesTherebeingnosmartphones,Iwouldhavebeenoneofthemostdistinguishedstudentsinmyclassandnoknowledgefromthetextbookwouldfailme.ThisistheexactsentencewhichgoesthroughmyheadeverytimewhenIamfacedwithaseeminglyunbeatableexampaper.Yes,I'mseriouslytalkingaboutmytroubleinhandphone-addiction.Nomatterwhenandwhere,forexamplewhenhavingclasses,attendinglectures,hangingoutwithfamilyandfriends,Iwillsurelytakeoutmycellphonetobrowseunrelativenewsandblogs.Thephenomenondoesn'tvaryforinterestingortiresomeoccasions.Ijustrepeatthisactionfromtimetotime,withoutevenrecognisinghowmanytimesIhaveslidedmyfingeronthephonescreen.FromthedaythatIpickedupthisannoyinghabit,Ihaveneverbeenabletofocusmyselffullyonacertainoccasion,thushaveleftoutquitealotinterestingandimportantinformation.Apartfrombeingdistractedfromclassesandmeetings,theaddictiontosmartphonehasalsotakenuptoomuchofmytime.Ican'thelpglancingatitwhileI'mstudying.Faithfullyspeaking,thetimeIspendonstudyingandplayingmyphonebothshareshalfoftheintendedtime.Consequently,italwaystakesmelongerthanotherstofinishatask,andwhat'sworse,Isometimescan'tmeetthedeadline!Lastbutnotleast,frequentuseofmobilephonewillresultinadetrimentofpeople'sintelligence.Justlikewatchingtelevision,peopledonothavetoforcethemselvestothinkovertheprogrammesprovided,andtheyarejustwatchitforrelaxationandfun.Ithinkitisthesamewithusingsmartphones.Wedon'tuseourbrainpowertoreflectonamicroblog,ashortpieceofnewsorthelatestscandalsofcelebrities.Wekeeponrefurbishingandrefurbishing,andinformationjustfloodintooureyesandoverwhelmus,makingusmoreincapableofrationalanalysis.Withsomuchhatredtomyindulgenceofusingsmartphone,Iamresolvedtoconfrontthiswretchenemyanddefeatit!教师评语：accurateinterpreationofthetask;clearstructure;fluentlanguage.