定语从句复习写作

TheAttributiveClauseUsedinWriting定语从句在写作中的运用—ByFancy完全完成了试题规定的任务。★覆盖所有内容要点。★应用较多的语法结构和词汇。★语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。★有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的汉语式英语句式单一平铺直叙无过渡语(关联词)Commonmistakes—Howtoavoidsimplesentences?—Usingclauses(从句),sentencestructures,thenon-finites(非谓语)andotherproverbs(谚语)inwriting.定语从句的作用定语从句可以进一步扩充句子中名词成分所携带的信息量，像一个“小仓库”可以放置很多附带的信息点，如能够在基础写作中巧妙利用，既能够使句子丰满好看有档次，能缩减句子的数量，从而为写作提分，减负。Review:Theusageoftherelativepronouns(关系代词)TalkingaboutpeopleDoyouknowtheman__________cametoseeXiaoYangthismorning?TalkingaboutthingsIcouldn’tfindthebook_________wasboughtyesterday.whose+n.=the+n.+ofwhich/whom=ofwhich/whom+the+n.Doyouknowtheboy_______parentsareonholiday?Heisaman______________weshouldalllearnfrom.Thetable___________youjustsawismadeofplastics.I’veneverbeentotheroom_______windowsarebroken.who,thatwho,whom,that,/whosewhosewhich,thatwhich,that,/Review:Theusageoftherelativeadverbs(关系副词)Thisistheplace______hisfatherworks.Thereason______hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.Istillremembertheday_______IfirstcametoBeijing.wherewhywhen介词+which/whomTherearemanytrees___________theycanhavearest.Thisisthering__________shespent1000dollars.In1952,Mandelawastheblacklawyer__________Iwentforadvice._____weallknow,heisagoodstudent._____isknowntousall,heisagoodstudent._____theproverbgoes(正如某个谚语所说),allroadsleadtoRome.underwhichonwhichtowhomASASASas关系代词or关系副词？________________Enjoysomeproverbs:带定语从句的谚语1.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者天助之。2.Hewholaughslastlaughsbest.谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好。3.Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。4.Hewholearnsbutdoesnotthink,islost;Hewhothinksbutdoesnotlearn,isingreatdanger.学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆Rewritethefollowingsentencesusingtheattributiveclause.1.ZhouLiangismybestfriend.Heis16yearsold.Heisofmediumbuild.2.Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhentheyareintrouble.3.Hehasmanyhobbies.Theyareincommonwith（与…相同的）mine.4.HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy.Itmadehisteacherhappy.5.Hehasmanygoodqualities.Theyareworthlearning.ZhouLiangismybestfriend,whois16yearsoldandofmediumbuild.Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhoareintrouble.Hehasmanyhobbieswhichareincommonwithmine.HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy,whichmadehisteacherhappy.Hehasmanygoodqualitieswhichareworthlearning.Rewritethefollowingsentencesusingtheattributiveclause.6.You’dbetterreadthebooks.Youareininterestedinthebooks.7.Remembertoreadthebooks.Youcanbenefitfromthebooks.8.It’sagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary,anditcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary.9.Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday.ItcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish.10.Youshouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwords.TheycanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks.You’dbetterreadthebookswhichyouareininterestedin.Remembertoreadthebookswhichyoucanbenefitfrom.It’sagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary,whichcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary.Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday,whichcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish.YoushouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwordswhichcanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks.1.ZhouLiangismybestfriend,whois16yearsoldandofmediumbuild.2.Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhoareintrouble3.Hehasmanyhobbieswhichareincommonwithmine.4.HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy,whichmadehisteacherhappy.5.Hehasmanygoodqualitieswhichareworthlearning.6.You’dbetterreadthebookswhichyouareininterestedin.7.Remembertoreadthebookswhichyoucanbenefitfrom.8.It’sagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary,whichcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary.9.Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday,whichcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish.10.YoushouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwordswhichcanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks.Ourclassisabigfamily.Itismadeupof37girlsand20boys.Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.ZhangYanchaoisourmonitor.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch.Ourclassisabigfamilywhichismadeupof37girlsand20boys,allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.ZhangYanchaoisourmonitor,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heisagoodboy(whom)wealllikeverymuch.________Practicemakesperfect!Describeourschool:1.广饶一中创建于1951年，是一所山东省著名的中学。GuangRaoNo.1MiddleSchoolofShanDong2.校园里花草树木随处可见，美丽如画。campusasbeautifulasapicture3.学校有许多篮球场，学生放学后在篮球场上打篮球。basketballcourts4.学校里有许多的优秀教师，其中樊老师是一名我们都很喜欢的英语老师。5.在过去的三年高考中，我们学校取得了令人惊讶的优异成绩。CollegeEntranceExaminationGroupDiscussion&cooperation内容1.逐句讨论，一起纠错（定语从句错误，主谓一错误，单词拼写错误，标点符号错误，固定搭配错误）要求1.人人参与，高效讨论。2.将不会表达的地方作好记录，可以邀请老师参与讨论帮助解决。3.组长控制好进度和时间（大约6-7分钟），选出最好的一份进行展示。目标2.如何将五句话进行连贯的衔接与整合，形成一篇完整的顺畅的作文。MySchoolIamstudyinginGuangRaoNo.1MiddleSchoolofShanDong.Itisafamousschoolwhichwasbuiltin1951.Firstofall,treesandflowerscanbeseeneverywhereinthecampus,whichmakesitasbeautifulasapicture.Besides,intheschoolstandmanybasketballcourts,wherestudentsplaybasketballafterschool.What’smore,therearemanyexcellentteachershere,ofwhomMissFanisanEnglishteacherwealllike.Atlast,inthepastthreeyears,ourschoolhasachievedexcellentresultsintheCollegeEntranceExamination,whichsurprisesthepublic.Iamproudofmyschool.Iwishitabetterfuture.Practicemakesperfect!Describeapersonathin