公开课：应用文写作之建议信

应用文写作之建议信Howtowriteapersuasiveletterofadvice第二节：书面表达（满分25分)假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等3．祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,speakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.Tryyourbesttocom-municatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,inordertoimproveyourlistening,paymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Iwishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdviceBeginning:WritingpurposeMainbody:Advice/suggestionsEnding:Wishes/wordsforencouragement??????Howtomakeyourletterofadvicemorepersuasive(说服力)?写作难点：Whichoneismorepersuasiveandwhy?AStudentsprobablyshouldnotsmoke.FirstIdon’tthinksmokingishealthy,especiallyforusstudents.Second,inmyview,itisnotgoodtodevelopthehabitofsmokinganditishardtogetridofit.Lastly,Ithinkcigarettesareveryexpensiveanditcostsalottobuythem.Inconclusion,myopinionisthatstudentsshouldnotsmoke.BTherearethreereasonswhystudentsshouldnotsmoke.First,smokingisbadforone’shealth.AccordingtotheCenterforDiseaseControl,thereareearlysignsofheartdiseaseinyoungadultswhosmoke.Second,itishabit-forming.Statisticsshowthatifstudentsstarttosmoke,theycontinuetosmokethroughouttheiradultlife.Finally,smokingcostsalotofmoney.OnepackofcigarettescostsaroundRMB15Sostopbeforeyoustart!MoreopinionsMorefactsTIP:使建议更具有说服力+Forthebeginning1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…2.Iamwritingtosharewithyoumyopinionabout…Forthemainbody1.Istronglyadvise/suggestthatyoushould…because…2.IfIwereyou,Iwould…Fortheending1.Ihopemyadvicecanbeofsomehelptoyou.2.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.◇UsefulSentences◇假设你是李华，得知你的老师Mr.Huang喜欢抽烟，并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯。请你给他写一封信，要点如下：1.担忧老师的身体健康，建议老师戒烟。2.列出吸烟的危害：吸烟容易引发心脏病等3．祝愿他早日戒烟成功。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。AimClearStructureProperLanguagePersuasiveSummaryThankyou!