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高三英语写作-----Howtowriteanargumentation（议论文）书面表达(满分30分)1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。优点缺点待在家中花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识，开阔眼界（horizon/view）花费多，旅途不便注意：1.词数120左右2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.1.convenientandcomfortablecostless/savemoneylosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld2.increaseone’sknowledgeandbroadenone’shorizons/views1.(待在家中)花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界2.(外出旅游)增长知识，开阔眼界花费多，旅途不便spendmoremoneyandmeetsomedifficultiesbeginning1.havedifferentviewsonsth/2.reacttosthindifferentways.3.differintheirattitudestowardssth.conclusionmyopinion(待在家中)(外出旅游)Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.someothersThesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Peoplereacttothisproblemindifferentways.Someareinfavorofstayingathome.Theythinkit’sbothconvenientandcomfortable.What’smore,theycansavemoneyforotherpurposes.ButTheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.However,othersprefertogooutfortravelingsinceitcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirviews.Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandmeetsomedifficultieswhiletraveling.Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.Whenstayingathome,IcandowhatIlike,suchasreadingbooks,watchingTV,andhelpingmyparentswiththehousework.Inaword,tostayathomeisbetterthantotravel.词汇,句型,语法多样化1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？优秀作文标准：1、覆盖所有内容要点；2、语法结构或词汇方面有个别错误，但为尽量使用较为复杂的结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较强的语言应用能力；3、有效地使用了连接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。(1)审题不清：自己英语的学习目的、方法、课外途径课外自学途径；对学校英语教学的建议。(2)段落板块不清楚(3)要点不完整(4)缺乏有效的过渡词(5)句式、词汇低级重复单调(6)个人观点不到位(7)卷面太差，字小，不整齐，潦草，涂擦痕迹明显(8)词数不在规定范围之内。130-170，150-160！书面表达试题存在问题：1.(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,__________（所以）we’llhavelessfieldtogrowrice.thereforesoasaresult/consequencethus结果3.Therentisreasonable,__________,thelocationisperfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。what’smoremoreover/furthermoreinadditionbesides另外(递进）4.Theyoungmandidn’tenjoyhisoldjob._________(相反)hefindsthenewjobveryinteresting.Onthecontrary,However,转折But/yet/while5.__________(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.IngeneralInaword/allinall总结Inshort/briefGenerallyspeaking6.______________(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.weshouldspendtimeandmoneyonothermoreimportantthings.AsfarasI’mconcernedInmyopinion/it’smyopinionthat个人观点Ithink/believe对写作的建议：1、注意审题！2、分段写！3、注意书面表达板块齐全、要点完整；4、注意使用标记性语言，段与段之间一定要有过渡性的语句；5、句式应富于变化；对写作的建议：6、适当使用较高级的词汇；7、尽量避免句型结构、时态和语态等错误；8、加强个人观点的准确阐述！9、注重书写！书面表达(满分30分)当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，请你以“Liveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartment”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。注意：词数120左右，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）LiveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartmentNowadays,moreandmorepeople/agrowingnumberofpeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirlives.LiveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartmentNowadays,moreandmorepeople/agrowingnumberofpeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirlives.Butpeopledifferintheiropinionsonthematter.Somepeopleprefertoliveinatraditionalhouse.Theremightbeseveralreasons,Ithink.Inthefirstplace,youcangrowflowersandtreesintheyardifyouliveinatraditionalhouse.Besides,youcankeeppetsifyoulike.Finally,peoplecantakeexerciseintheyard.However,somepeopleprefertoliveinanapartment.Ononehand,itiscleanandsafe.Ontheotherhand,itisclosetoyourwork.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ipreferlivinginatraditionalhouse.MyreasonisthatIlikeenjoyingsunlight,especiallyinwinter.Moreover,mygrandparentswouldn’thappyiftheyliveinanapartment.Astheyarguethatitisnotconvenientforthemtohaveoutdooractivities.SoIthinklivinginatraditionalhouseisgoodandhealthylifestyle.Part1:(beginning)havedifferentopinionsonsth.reacttosthindifferentwaysdifferintheirattitudestowardssthPart2:(body)some….others/prefertodoA.ratherthandoB.Part3:(conclusion)inaword/inshort/inmyopinion/Iaminfavoroftheideathat…/for/againststructure书面表达(满分30分)当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：1.看电影：省时、有趣、易懂2.读原著：细节更多、语言优美3.我的看法及理由注意：1.词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：originalwork或bookintheoriginal（原著）Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer？Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer？Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.•经过调查，人们对于学生上网交友持不同意见（见下表）。请你以“Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?”为题，用英语写一篇关于学生上网交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。•词数：100左右•参考词