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Englishwriting附作文评分标准（供参考）A(13—15分):包含内容要点，语言基本无误;行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。B（10—12分）：基本内容要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。C（7—9分）：包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能答意。D（3—6分）：语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云E（0—2分）：白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。1.巧用精准的高级词汇,句型、词组优先2.善用关联词3.活用多种句型,避免使用过分简单的句子,长短句结合（长句为主，但不能太长）4.妙用格言，谚语（proverbs)等得高分的一些技巧LiuXiangis21.HecomesfromShanghai.Heisarunningstar.LiuXiang,a21-year-oldrunningstar,comesfromShanghai.Myfatherisgood.Mymotherisgood,too.Myfatherishard-workingandmymotheriskind.Whichisbetter?1.我们应该努力学习来取得好成绩。A.Weshouldworkhardtogetgoodgrades.B.We’resupposedtotryourbesttogetgoodgrades.2.我们应多花时间学习。A.Wehavetoconcentratemoreonstudy.B.Wehavetostudymoreandplayless.句型、词组优先3.我们不能玩电脑游戏。A.Wecan’tplaycomputergames.B.Weneedtostayawayfromcomputergames.1）Heranveryquickly.Heranasquicklyashecould.2）IwilllearnEnglishwell.IwilltrymybesttolearnEnglishwell.3）Ican’tlearnEnglishwell.Ifindit(it’s)difficultformetolearnEnglishwell.句型、词组优先1.表示并列或递进:and,both…and,what’smore,notonly…butalso,besides,2.顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,then,finally,intheend,atlast3.选择:or,either…or4.转折:but,however,although\though,5.因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult6.条件:if,unless7.对比:instead,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand8.解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas/like9.强调:also,especially,actually,infact10.结论:allinall,inaword,ingeneral,2.关联词(linkingwords)Peopleusedtodofarmwork.Theyfelttired.Theygotlittlemoney.Nowtherearemanyfactorieshere.Peoplecanfinddifferentjobsinfactories.以家乡的变化为例：theyworkedhardandfelttired,theygotlittlemoney.AlthoughTheyfelttired.Theygotlittlemoney.Nowtherearemanyfactorieshere.Peoplecanfinddifferentjobsinfactories.Nowtherearemanyfactorieshere,peoplecanfinddifferentjobseasily.becauseThewaterisdirty,peoplecan’tswimorfishinit.Wecouldseefish.Theywereswimminginthewater.Wecan’tseeanythinginthewaternow.Wecouldseefish.Theywereswimminginthewater.Wecouldseefishswimmingintheclearwater.Thewaterisdirtyforpeopleswimorfishin.tootosothatThewaterisdirty,peoplecan’tswimorfishinit.Thewaterisdirtypeoplecan’tswimorfishinit.GivingadviceHecould/should/shouldn’tv.….Heissupposedtov.….He’dbetterv.….It’sbetter/bestforhimtov….Whynotv…?/Whydoesn’thev…?What//Howaboutv-ing…..?v.-ing...isgood/necessary/helpfulforhim.3.活用多种句型：我们应该多学多练。Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”（熟能生巧）Soweshouldspendmoretimelearningandpracticing.4.妙用格言，谚语（proverbs)等以下文为例\ThewaystostayhealthyHealthisthemostimportantforanyofus.Inordertostayhealthy,weneedsomecommonknowledge.Firstly,weshouldpayattentiontothediet.It’sbesttoeatlotsoffruitandvegetables.“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway,”sofruitisgoodforhealth.Besides,wearenotsupposedtohavealotofjunkfood.Secondly,exerciseisnecessary.Ontheonehand,wearenoteasytogetfat.Ontheotherhand,wecanbestronger.Finally,we’dbetterhavegoodlivinghabits.Weshouldsleepforabout8hoursatnight,andneverworktoohard.What’smore,wemuststayawayfromcigarettes.Ingeneral,thesearethingswe’dbetterfollowifwewanttostayhealthy.thebeginningtheending总结观点，表达祝愿、期望或号召等title引出话题CommonProblems•名词的单复数问题•主谓一致问题•时态和语态问题•Chinglish现象•词类和连词错用现象