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Makecomments列举影响分析原因发表观点列举影响具体举例概括某一方面的影响Topicsentence(产生影响)Topicsentence(产生影响)Itwillexertaprofoundinfluence.Thereareanumberofeffect.Thepositive/negativeeffects,whicharewidelyaccepted,canbelistedasfollows.Thenegativeeffects,whicharegenerallyacknowledged,arepresentedbelow.…isharmful/beneficialinmorethanoneway.ItleavessomeseriousconsequencesItmaygiverisetoahostofproblems过渡句1Theimmediateresultitproducesis…Perhapsthemostseriousconsequenceis…过渡句2Theinfluenceisnotconfinedtowhatismentionedabove.What’smore?Tobeginwith,…Tomakemattersworse,…Theworstofall,…Topicsentence环境污染对人有影响概括的影响1水污染对人的影响，举例概括的影响2大气污染对人的影响，举例概括的影响3森林退化对人的影响，举例Thefakecommoditieswouldsabotagethenation.Thepoorquality,sometimesevenpoisonousfoodisthreateningpeople’slife.Nobodywoulddenythattheissueofmilkpowderwillhappenagain,iftheconcernisnotraisedoverthefoodsecurity.Inaddition,……分析原因Topicsentence(原因)First,原因1+例证Second,原因2+例证TopicsentenceWhy…?Whathascausedthe…?Whatontheeartharethereasonsforthephenomenon?Whatintheworldisresponsiblefortheproblem?Thereareseveralreasonsforthephenomenon.Thecausesforthephenomenon,whicharequiteobvious,canbelistedasfollows.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.Thereasonsforthefact,atleasttome,arenotdifficulttofind.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem.Thefactorsthatcontributetothephenomenoninclude…层次过渡句原因1Themostimportantreasoncitedbypeopleis…Oneofthemostpopularreasonsis…原因2Anotherimportantreasonis…Alsoplayingapartis…Inaddition,…isalsoresponsibleforthephenomenon原因3Thethirdreason,whichcannotbeneglected,isthat…Thepicturerevealsafactthatnowadaysagrowingnumberofstudentsiswillingtostudyabroad.Topicsentence(原因)ExamplesWhyisthereanincreasingpopularityofstudyingabroad?Thecausesofthisphenomenonarevarious.Foronething,studyingandlivinginothercountries,peoplecouldbeexposedtomoreaspectsoftheworld.Forexample,onemayhaveclassmatesfromdifferentnations,whichgivesthemachancetolearndiverseideasandvalues.Anothervitalreasonisthatoverseasstudentscouldhavepreciousexperiencesthatthosewhostaydomesticwillneverhave.Agoodcaseinpoint,studentsinChineseuniversityusuallyhavemealsatschoolcanteen,whilestudyinginaforeigncountry,moststudentshavetocookbythemselves.teenageradolescentyoungster非限制性定语从句onemayhaveclassmatesfromdifferentnations,whichgivesthemachancetolearndiverseideasandvalues.人们会有来自不同国家的同学，因此他们有机会了解不同的思想和价值。这使他们有机会了解不同。。。最近报纸上经常报道楼房倒塌的新闻，因此人们开始关注住房安全问题。Recently,newsaboutcollapsebuildingsoftenhitstheheadline,whichmakespeoplecometopayattentiontothesecurityoftheirhouse.他在美国待了10年，这使他看起来更像一个外国人，而不像中国人。HehasbeeninAmericaforalmosttenyears,whichmakeshimlookmorelikeaforeignerthananative.发表观点Topicsentence(我的观点)分析原因1，2别人的观点也有道理，但是TS:有人认为，我认为Differentfromthecommonargumentthat….,Iholdtheviewthat…Insteadofsupportingtheideathat…,Ichoosetostandbehindtheargumentthat…Theideathat…maywinthemajorityofpeople,butIstillinsistthat…Alargenumberofpeoplemayagreethat…,butItaketheoppositeviewthat…Happiness=money?HealthormoneyStudyabroadordomesticAlargenumberofpeoplemayagreethatmoneyequalstohappiness,butItaketheoppositeviewthatmoneycannotalwaysbringaboutdelight.Insteadofsupportingtheideathatmoneyismorecrucialthanhealth,Ichoosetostandbehindtheargumentthathealthoutweighsmoney.Theideathatstudyingabroadwillprovidestudentswithabetterfuturemaywinthemajorityofpeople,butIstillinsistthatpursuingeducationinChinaisamorefavorablechoice.Meaningofthepicture.Thecommonsightbringsabouttheargumentthatinsteadofmakingpeoplemoreintimate,thecomputerandtheInternetseparatethemfromeachother.However,frommypointofview,thecomputerandinternetprovidepeoplewithanefficientcommunicationchannel.别人的观点也有道理，但是Itmighthavesomethinginpointthat…,but…Itcannotnotbedeniedthat…,but…Itisnotirrationalthat,…,but…Meaningofthepicture.Thecommonsightbringsabouttheargumentthatinsteadofmakingpeoplemoreintimate,thecomputerandtheInternetseparatethemfromeachother.However,frommypointofview,thecomputerandinternetprovidepeoplewithanefficientcommunicationchannel.First,…Second,….Itmightbetruethatpeoplecommunicatefacetofacelessthanbefore,butitdoesnotmeanthattheyarelessintimate.Internetisjustanewchannelforpeopletogetcontactwitheachother.Themoreproperlyweuseit,themorebenefitwewillget.YourTopicGoesHereYoursubtopicgoeshereElements