六级对比选择型作文讲解

六级对比选择型作文讲解预测作文•Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:•1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的•2)阐述他们各自的考虑•3)表明你的看法行文思路•本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。对比选择型模板•Whenitcomesto/Whenaskedabout谈论主题,differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers/offerdifferentviews/havedifferentchoices/preferences.•Somepeopletakeitforgranted/believe大学生毕业看重高工资.理由一.Inaddition,理由二.However,othersmaintain/argue大学生应该选择良好的职业发展.Intheiropinions,理由一.Besides,理由二.•这两段也可写成：•Whenitcomesto/Whenaskedabout谈论主题,differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers/offerdifferentviews/havedifferentchoices/preferences.Somepeopletakeitforgranted/believe大学生毕业看重高工资.However,othersmaintain/argue大学生应该选择良好的职业发展.•Thosepeoplewhoholdthefirstopinion/maketheformerchoice/havethefirstpreferencebelieve理由一.Inaddition,intheireyes/theyinsist/theymaintain/theypointout理由二.However,stillothersthinkdifferently/donotagreethis/havedifferentchoices/preferences.Intheiropinions,理由一.Besides,理由二.)例文如下•HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?•Therearemoreandmorepeoplelookingforjobseveryyear,buttheyhavedifferentviewsaboutwhatkindofjobtheyshouldchoose.[1]Someofthemfocustheirattentiononthejobsthatpromisehighsalaries.[1]Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.•[2]Peopleholdingthefirstviewusuallythinkthatmoremoneywillresultinmorehappiness.[3]Withalotofmoneyinhand,theywillbeabletoenjoyarichlife.Otherwise,theywillsufferfromdepression[4]duetolackofenoughmoney.(反面论述段)•[2]However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.[5]Itiscareerdevelopmentthatcountsmost.Withoutdevelopment,youwillbeoutrunbyothersandfallbehindthetimessoonerorlater.(正面论述段)•Inmyview,careerdevelopmentistherightchoicebecausecareermaygiveuslongtermsatisfaction[6]whilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.Besides,[7]generallyspeaking,agoodcareerdevelopmentwillbringhighsalariessoonerorlater.SoIwill[8]givemyvotetothecareerdevelopmentfirstandthenhighsalaries.(总结观点段)•[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。•[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。[4]“因为缺钱”。•[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。[7]“一般来说”。•[8]“选择”。练习•例1.1.佳句：Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。___________________________________________________________________________.【KEY】1.Inrecentyears,therearemoreandmorepeoplewhohaveshowedapreferenceforwesternfastfood.•2.佳句：However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。___________________________________________________________________________.•2.However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatsincesportsstarshavemadegreatcontributionstothesociety,theydeservesomespecialtreatment.•3.佳句：Careermaygiveuslongngtermsatisfactionwhilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。___________________________________________________________________________.•3.Thesimilaritybetweenusmakesourrelationshipsolidwhilethedifferenceteachesushowtounderstandeachother.•点评：本文与校园生活密切相关，也是近年来出现的现象，人们对此的看法各异，2003年后，六级作文考查加大了学校生活类题目的考查，因为这类题材不存在地域的差异，不同地域的同学都有话可说。本预测题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的六级作文话题类似，符合命题者出题思路，值得引起重视。