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现象解释型范例12Para1：首先应总述现象并描述其现状；①Nowadays//Inrecentyears//Inmodernsociety,总述现象,(whichhas(have)beenbroughtintofocus//whichhas(have)arousedgreatconcern).//现象hasbecomeaseriousproblem.//Whatimpressesusmosttodayis现象.②现象表现，现象具体的体现或变化③Moreover//Inaddition,进一步描述现象表现或变化.现象解释型3Para2：在描述了现象之后，然后，分析这种现象的原因相关因素或带来的影响[描述影响]①Undoubtedly,该现象has(have)broughtanegativeeffect(influence)on影响对象.//该现象canbringdamageto影响对象.//现象所涉及的主题canbenefitalotfrom该现象.②Aboveall,影响一.Forexample,进一步说明影响.③What’smore,影响二.④Inaddition//Besides,影响三.现象解释型4[说明原因]①Thereasonsforthisphenomenonarevaried.//Therearemanyfactorscontributingto(influencing)该现象或其相关情况.②Amongallthesereasons(factors),原因一plays(play)acriticalrole.③Moreover//Furthermore//What’smore,原因二.④Besides,原因三.现象解释型5Para3：最后，阐述自己对该现象的看法或提出相关建议或希望[做评价]①Nodoubt//Frommypointofview,对该现象做出总体评价.②However,可能存在的问题//However,itisworthnotingthat应该注意的事项.③进一步描述问题或注意事项.④Allinall//Therefore,总结全文.现象解释型6[提建议]①Asforme//Frommypointofview//Inmyopinion,对该现象做出整体评价、对现象的发展做出预测或提出建议(,but指出注意事项/提出建议).②Foronething,评价一/建议一.③Foranother,评价二/建议二.④Toconclude//Inaword,总结全文.现象解释型7SecondhandGoods例文讲解Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofSecondhandGoods.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.目前购买二手货的人越来越多2.分析产生这一现象的原因3.二手货交易可能带来的问题8SecondhandGoods例文讲解1.目前购买二手货的人越来越多2.分析产生这一现象的原因3.二手货交易可能带来的问题Para1:Inrecentyears,secondhandtransactionshavebecomequitecommon(whichhavebeenbroughtintofocus/whichhavearousedgreatconcern).Para2:Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisphenomenon.//Thefollowingreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Para3:However,therearealsosomeproblemsinsecondhandgoodstransactions.9SecondhandGoods例文讲解Para1:Inrecentyears,second-handtransactionshavebecomequitecommon.Para2:Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisphenomenon.//Thefollowingreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Para3:However,therearealsosomeproblemsinsecondhandgoodstransactions.1.price:cheaper2.thingsitself:makegooduseofthosegoodswhichmaybeuseless3.Transactionplatform:internetletthetransactionsbecomemoreconvenientandquicker1.没有保障，得不到售后2.二手货市场缺乏有效监管，可能存在欺诈10SecondhandGoodsInrecentyears,second-handtransactionshavebecomequitecommon.//Nowadaystherearemoreandmoresecondhandgoodsinthemarket,suchassecondhandbooks,furniture,appliances,cars,andsoon.//Whydosomanypeopleliketobuysecondhandgoods?Thefollowingreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.//Aboveall,secondhandgoodsarecheaperthannewones.Thisenablesthosepeoplewhohavepoorfinancialabilitiestobuythethingstheywant.//Moreover,secondhandgoodstransactionsmakeitpossibleforpeopletomakegooduseofthegoodswhichmaybeuselessintheirhands.Besides,Internetprovidesamoreconvenientandquickertransactionplatformforsecondhandgoods.However,therearealsosomeproblemsinsecondhandgoodstransactions.//Foronething,thequalityofsecondhandgoodscannotbepromisedandyoucannotenjoythegoodafter-saleservice.Foranother,secondhandgoodsmarketlacksenoughsupervisionandmanagement,andthereexistmanydishonestbusinessactivities.Inaword,Ithinksecondhandgoodstransactionisagoodtradingway,butitneedsfurtherperfectionoftherules.1.individuals，characters，folks替换（people，persons）2.positive，favorable，rosy（美好的），promising（有希望的），perfect，pleasurable，excellent，outstanding，superior替换good3.dreadful，unfavorable，poor，adverse，ill（有害的）替换bad(如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换)Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames，enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation，asaresult，theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarebad.1112词汇替换4.（anarmyof，anoceanof，aseaof，amultitudeof，ahostof，many，ifnotmost）替换many.注：用many，ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。5.asliceof，quietafew，several替换some6.harbortheideathat，taketheattitudethat，holdtheviewthat，itiswidelysharedthat，itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think（因为是书面语，所以要加that）7.affair，business，matter替换thing13词汇替换8.shared代common9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits）10.formypart，frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion11.Increasing（ly），growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Sth.ismoreandmorepopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.littleifanything，或littleornothing替换hardly13……beneficial，rewarding替换helpful，14.shopper，client，consumer，purchaser，替换customer15.exceedingly，extremely，intensely替换very16.hardlynecessary，hardlyinevitable……替换unnecessary，avoidable17.sthappealstosb，sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin18.captureone’sattention替换attractone‘sattention.14词汇替换15词汇替换19.facet，demension，sphere代aspect20.beindicativeof，besuggestiveof，befearfulof代indicate,suggest，fear21.giveriseto，leadto，resultin，trigger替换cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换……reasonsforsth23.desire替换want.24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto25.bearinmindthat替换remember26.enjoy，possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）27.interaction替换communication28.frownonsth替换beagainst，disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew，asanexample替换forexample，forinstance30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible，替换nearly/almostimpossible16词汇替换