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HowToUseLanguageProperlyTrustNoOneButYourselfNow,youcantryone.Doyoupreferindividualsportsorteamsports?Pleasesupplyreasons.记得好的开头具备的因素:扣题了吗?找到重点了吗?为文章找到合适的切入点了吗?你是不是写模板句型了?天呀,你怎么写这么短呀?天呀,你怎么写这么长呀?Playingteamsportsandexercisingbymyselfarebothnice.Iseemtoenjoydoingbothandhavedonebothwithgreatpleasure.However,itseemsthatIcanfeelmoreateasebydoingindividualsportswhenIamnothappy.Iindeedpreferindividualsportsoverteamsportsinamomentofweakness.第二段了,你该给例子了吧?什么是好的例子?千万别说姑娘伤心。千万别假大空。求你了,别老写特别论述性强的分论点。千万别仰天长啸说我没思路。第二段你怎么写的?WhenIfeelunhappy,individualsportscancheermeup.IamawayfromallmyfriendssothatIdohavetohideawaymysorrow.ThisisparticularlytruewhenIgojoggingbymyself.Irunslowlypassthetreesandflowerswithease.Iammoreatpeace,andfeelserenityandtranquility.Onecanhardlyfeelsuchcalmnesswhenshoutingandpullingwithfriendsonthebasketballcourt.Whenfeelingstressed,Idon’twanttobearoundfriendswhiledoingsports.IhavetocooperatewithotherswhenIjustwanttofeelrelaxedbydoingphysicalactivity.Doingyogabymyselfcanjusthelpmetoachievesuchalevelofease.Icanmovewithmusicandlistentomyownheartbeatinsteadofthenoisecreatedbyplayersbecausetheycraveforwinning.Ifeelthestretchofmybodyandthepainitcausedinsteadofcompetingwithotherteams.WhenIamdone,Ialsofeelthereleaseofthetension,andthetinglingfeelingallovermybody.

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