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GoinghomeReadingParagraph1-2:SettingofthestoryTheyweregoingtoFortLauderdale–threeboysandthreegirls–andwhentheyboardedthebus,theywerecarryingsandwichesandwineinpaperbags,dreamingofgoldenbeachesandseatidesasthegray,coldspringofNewYorkvanishedbehindthem.AsthebuspassedthroughNewJersey,theybegantonoticeVingo.Hesatinfrontofthem,dressedinaplain,ill-fittingsuit,nevermoving,hisdustyfacemaskinghisage.Hekeptchewingtheinsideofhislipalot,frozenintocompletesilence.when?who?where?what?threeboysandthreegirlsspringVingothebussilence;stillness;reserve(拘谨；寡言);happiness;excitement;liveliness;contrastTip1:Sharpcontrastandcomparisonmayhelphighlightwhatyouwanttoexpress.Tip2:Vividdescriptionofappearancemayhelppictureone’scharacter.AsthebuspassedthroughNewJersey,theybegantonoticeVingo.Hesatinfrontofthem,dressedinaplain,ill-fittingsuit,nevermoving,hisdustyfacemaskinghisage.Hekeptchewingtheinsideofhislipalot,frozenintocompletesilence.suspenseoneunclean;rough;caringlittleaboutdetails;mysterious(amanofstories);Paragraph3:DevelopmentofthestoryInteractionone(Vingoandoneofthegirls)Hesat_________hisseat.(para3)rootedinHekeptchewingtheinsideofhislip,________________________.(para2)frozenintocompletesilencesilent;nervous;worried;aheavyheartStructurestoimitateHesatrootedinhisseat.Hekeptchewingtheinsideofhislip,frozenintocompletesilence.Myfatherstoodthereinsurprise.surprised/shocked/stunned.Myfatherstoodstill.rootedtothespot.Theywerecarryingsandwichesandwineinpaperbags,dreamingofgoldenbeachesandseatidesas…Allofthemwereinit,interestedlylookingatthepicturesVingoshowedthemofhiswifeand…Thecrowdwerewalkingonthebeachandtheywerelaughing,shoutingandclapping.Tip3:Pastparticipleandpresentparticiplemaydepictone’sinnerfeelingsmorevividly.,laughing,shoutingandclapping.Hesaid_______,asifrememberingsomethinghehadtriedtoforget.(para3)quietlysomethingsuspensetwoParagraph4-6:DevelopmentofthestoryInteractiontwo(Vingoandoneofthegirls)firstlettersecondletterletgolovereturntoloveoutofdeeploveHetoldhiswifeshecouldhaveanewguyifshecouldn’tstandit.Heaskedifshewouldtakehimbackandputayellowribbonasasignal.suspensethreeSincethe1970’s,inmanycountries,ayellowribbonhasbeenusedtosymbolizeforgivenessandwelcometosomeonelonglost.Tip4:Rhetoric(修辞)canturnsomethingabstractintoconcrete,usuallywiththethemehidden.Itmeanshiswife’slove,acceptanceandforgiveness.WhatdoesayellowribbonmeanforVingo?Paragraph7:Further-developmentofthestoryInteractionthree(Vingoandtheyoungpeople)familypicturesthewomanhandsomeinaplainwaythechildrenstillunformedShe’sawonderfulwoman,reallysomething.(para5)beautifulbutplain;kind;caringforfamilyinthemuch-handledsnapshotsVingomissedhishomesomuch.suspensefourTip5:Keepingreadersinsuspenseuntiltheveryendisagoodplotdesigning.Now20miles;Thentenmiles;Thenfivemiles;...Whatisthestorytobecontinued?Paragraph8-9:Endingofthestory读后续写：阅读本文之后，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分成两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语;Paragraph1:Nowtheywere20milesfromBrunswick,then10miles,andthenfive....Paragraph2:Vingogotoffthebusandheadedtowardhishome,andthereatthefrontdoorafamiliarsceneblurredhiseyes....Vingo;ayellowribbon;hiswife;gohome;theyoungpeople;thebus;dressed;threechildren;thetree;anewguy;aboutcharacters:abouttheme:ayellowribbon;gohome;thebus;thetreeVingo;hiswife;theyoungpeople;threechildrenunderlinedwordsVingogotoffthebusandheadedtowardhishome,andthereatthefrontdoorafamiliarsceneblurredhiseyes.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nowtheywere20milesfromBrunswick,then10miles,andthenfive.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inwhatwayscanwemakethebestofthegiveninformation?Discussion►Bebasedonthekeywordsfromparagraph1&2►Bebasedonthesuspensefromthegivenpassage►Bebasedthepersonalitiesofthecharacters►Imitatethevividdescriptionofappearance►Imitatethevividdescriptionofaction►Imitatesomeformsofproperrhetoric(修辞)►ImitatethewritingformofsharpcontrastCriteriaofcontinuationwritingcontentlanguagethinking漂漂亮亮干干净净马马虎虎手舞足蹈语无伦次第五档(21-25)第四档(16-20)第三档(11-15)第二档(6-10)第一档(1-5)1.Vingoclosedhiseyestostoplooking,tighteninghisfacewithhisupperlipshivering,asifprotectinghimselfagainstanotherdisappointment.2.Vingorosefromhisseat,grabbingholdofthemuch-handledsnapshots.3.Withdeeptensionandanxiety,Vingograbbedholdofthemuch-handledsnapshotsfirmly,hisupperlipshivering.4.Vingocouldfeelhispulsequickeningandskinshrinking,messythoughtswhirlingaroundinhismind.5.Therewasabigoaktreedottedwiththousandsofyellowribbons.6.Engulfedbyaflushofnervousness,Vingokepthisgazetothepicture,missingthepreviouswonderfultimewithhisfamily.7.Almostsimultaneously,Vingoliftedhisheadup,glimpsingabigoaktreewithamassofyellowribbons.8.Numbwithincredibles