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technology•Positive•Multiplypeople’schoices•Liberateworkers•Boost/enhanceefficiency/productivity•Carryout/conductscientificresearch•Speedup/accelerate/quickenthepaceoflife•Promotecommunication•Bridge/narrowthegapbetween•Reducethecost•Improveinterpersonalrelationship•Makeourlivesmoreconvenient•Curedisease•Negative•Restrictpeople’schoices•enslaveemployees(fromtheirwork)•Suspend/discontinuescientificresearch•Slowdownthepaceoflife•Hindercommunication•Widen/expandthegapbetweentherichandthepoor/•thewealthyandtheneedy•Raise/liftthecost•Alienateindividuals•Complicateourlives•Causeillness写作模式参考范文（实质性说明）TheBoominDoingSomething透过该现象阐明其深层次的问题（划线部分可替换）下一页上一页Back写作模式（实质性说明）1)Atfirstglance,theboomin…isindeedsuggestiveof…(表象说明)2)Butadeeperandcriticallookintothephenomenoncanrevealsomethingworthyofcarefulconsideration.(转折句)3)Tothebestofmyunderstanding/knowledge,theboomisaproofof…(实质性说明I)4)Comparedwith…,typicalof/featured（划线部分可替换）下一页上一页Backin…,ours,distinguishedby…,…(进一步阐述)5)Itisalsoanindicationof…(实质性说明II)6)Asagrowingbodyofevidenceshows,…makesfeaturesof…(进一步阐述)7)Andaboveall,itisaside-effectof…(实质性说明III)8)Impressedwith…,moreandmore…cherishasweetillusionthat…;butineffect/reality,forevery…kissedbyfortune/luck,therearethousandsmorewhose…(进一步阐述)下一页上一页BackTheBoominStudyingAbroad透过出国留学热这一现象阐明其深层次的问题下一页上一页TheBoominStudyingAbroadBack1)Atfirstglance,theboominstudyingabroadisindeedsuggestiveofgreatsuccessinourall-roundreformaswellasmuchimprovementinpeople’slivingstandards.2)Butadeeperandcriticallookintothephenomenoncanrevealsomethingworthyofcarefulconsideration.3)Tothebestofmyunderstanding,theboomisaproofoftheurgent下一页上一页needforustoimprovethecurrentsystemofoureducation.4)Comparedwiththewesterneducationalconcepts,typicalofbuildingindividuality,ours,distinguishedbyexam-orientedculture,shouldkeeppacewithchangingtimes.5)Itisalsoanindicationoftheincreasinglyintensecompetitionamongjobmarketathome.6)Asagrowingbodyofevidenceshows,thecompetitionmakesfeaturesofrequirementofastrongeducationbackground,degreesfromthefamousuniversitiesabroadpreferred.上一页7)Andaboveall,itisaside-effectofblindbeliefintheeducationabroad.8)ImpressedwiththesuccessofsomeoverseasChinese,moreandmoreparentscherishasweetillusionthatstudyingabroadwillensureabrightfuturefortheirchildren;butinreality,foreveryoverseasChinesekissedbyfortune,therearethousandsmorewhosedreamshavenevercometrue.•Whatisthemostterrifyingexperienceformostpeople?Isitdrowning?Isitfallingfromahighplacetotheirdeath?Isitbeingattackedbywilddogs?Thoughtheseexperienceswouldcertainlyfrightenmostpeople,accordingtoarecentpoll,mostpeoplefearstandingonastageinfrontofagroupofpeopletodeliveraspeechmorethananythingelse,includingtheabovelife-threateningscenarios!Whatisgoingonhere?Whyispublicspeakingsomenacingtomostpeople?•Anobvioussuggestionistobewellprepared.Itisagoodideatowriteoutaspeech.Likeanyotherskillorart,themoreonepractices,thebetterheislikelytobecome.Publicspeakingisnotonlyforspeechcontests;allprofessionalsmustpresentthemselvesinpublicsoonerorlater.Ratherthanshirkingtheopportunitytospeak,seizeitandmakethemostofitthenexttimefortuneknocks.••Speech•Thispartincludesvariousspeechesindifferentoccasions.Forexample:Speechattheeveningparty,Openingspeech,Closingspeech,Welcomingspeech,Answeringspeech,Openingremarksofsomeactivities,Send-offspeech,farewelladdress,Speechongiventopic,Addressonweddingceremony,Addressoncommencementceremony,Banquetaddressetc.•SpeechonGivenTopic•Thecontentofspeech•1.salutation•Dear,Beloved,Distinguished,Respected,Honorable…,etc.•2.beginning•Attractive,concise,focusonthetopic.•3.mainbody•Moving,humor,vivid,emotional,concise.•4.conclusion•Encouraginglanguage,sincerewishes,summaryremarks,persuasiveclosing.LanguageStyle:•1.simpleandclear•Ifyouwantyouraudiencetounderstandyourmessage,yourlanguagemustbesimpleandclear.Useshortwordsandshortsentences.Ingeneral,talkaboutconcretefactsratherthanabstractideas.Useactiveverbsinsteadofpassiveverbs.Activeverbsaremucheasiertounderstand.Theyaremuchmorepowerful.•Iamheretoannouncemyretirementfromthegameofbasketball.Itwon'tbeanotherannouncementtobaseballoranythingtothatnature.•Mentally,I'mexhausted,Idon'tfeelIhaveachallenge.Physically,Ifeelgreat.•IwillsupporttheChicagoBulls.IthinkthegameitselfisalotbiggerthanMichaelJordan.IplayedittothebestIcouldplayit,Itriedtoenhancethegameitself.I'vetriedtobethebestbasketballplayerthatIcouldbe.•JordanRetirement•2.SpokenEnglish(avoidlearnedwords)••ActuallyItalkedtoJerrylastyearoncetheseasonendedandItoldJerryatthattime,mentally,Iwasalittleexhausted.Ididn'tknowifIwouldplaynextyear.Iwantedtoputhimonawarenesssothathecouldpossiblypreparegoingintonextseason.AndJerry,oncewehadourconversation,wantedmetotaketimeasIdidin93tomakesurethatitwastherightdecisionbecauseitwasgoingtobethefinaldecision.•JordanRetirement•3.Parallelism•Wemustactonwhatweknow.Itakeasmyguidethehopeofasaint:incrucialthings—unity;inimportantthings—diversity;inallthings,generosity.(GeorgeBush)•Lethistorysayofus:Theseweregoldenyears—whentheAmericanRevolutionwasreborn,whenfreedomgai