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书面表达专题讲座河西教研室张佩珍《英语课程标准》对高中毕业生“写”的要求则更高更具体，其中包括：能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度和感情；能阐述自己的观点、评述他人的观点，文体得当、用词准确。近几年的命题特点(1)形式多样(2)文体丰富(3)内容多元(4)半开放性和开放性(5)高级词汇和复杂结构(6)增加书面表达的长度(7)“能力立意”、“内容创新”、“用英语解决问题的能力”一、命题特征总述及测试内容回顾提纲作文、图表作文、看图作文、开放作文记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文二、不同情景形式书面表达命题解读及写作指导(一)提纲式1．命题解读提纲式书面表达是以内容要点提示为载体的书面表达形式。2．写作指导(1)研读提示，把握体裁;(2)紧扣主题，组织要点;(3)避免直译，准确表达;(4)适当发挥，自然连贯;一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：1．地点：距白山入口处500米；2．房间及价格：单人间（共20间），100元/天；双人间（共15间），150元/天；热水淋浴；3．餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）4．游泳池：全天免费开放；5．欢迎预定。WelcometoBaishanMountainHotelBaishanMountainHotelisnowopenforbusiness.Ourhotelstands500metersawayfromtheentrancetoBaishanMountain.Ithas20singleroomsand15doublerooms,allwithhotshowers.Asingleroomis100yuanandadoubleroom150yuanforonenight.Youareadvisedtobookinadvance.ThehotelservesthreemealsadayandthereareChinesefoodandwesternfoodforyoutochoosefrom.Youcanalsoenjoyyourselfatthecafedrinkingteaorcoffeeintheevening.Wealsohaveaswimmingpool,whichisopenalldayandfreeofcharge.Allarewelcome!请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：MyTeacherMr.MooreThere’sateacherMr.Moore.Whoislovelyandthirty-four.Alwaysencouragingustotry.Heleadsustoaworldof“why”.Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.注意：1不得照抄短诗原文。2必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。3必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。4短文不能写成诗歌形式。5词数：120左右。Ofallmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhoimpressesmemost.Thoughheis34,helooksveryyoungforhisage.Andhe’soneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.Comparedwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inhisopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why”.So,insteadofgivingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesustothinkbyourselveswheneverheputsforwardquestions.Withhishelp,we’velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblem.Whatawonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehimverymuch.(二)图画式1．命题解读图画式书面表达是一种以图画为主要载体、附带少量文字提示或说明的书面表达形式。2．写作指导(1)细心观图,理解图意。(2)立足整体,找全要点。(3)详略得当,突出主题。(4)注重关联,行文连贯。假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。图形要点化图1：骑车前往郊区，欢声笑语图2：学生达到郊区，着手活动（挖坑、抬树苗、种植、浇水）图3：树木种植完毕，立提示语图4：植树活动结束，拍照纪念要点短语化图1：wenttothesuburbsbybiketoplanttrees;talkingandlaughingalltheway图2：begantowork;dugholes;carriedandplantedtrees;wateredthem图3：putupaboardremindingpeopleoftheprotectionofthetrees图4：tookphotostorecordourgreenaction短语句子化图1：Inthemorning,wewenttothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.图2：Webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes,somewerecarryingandplantingtrees,whileotherswerewateringthem.图3：Weputupaboardremindingpeopleoftheprotectionofthetrees.图4：Wetookphotostorecordourgreenaction.句子短文化GreenActioninOurClassApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.请你根据下面一幅图和一首诗，写一篇说明“书的作用的”短文。注意：可根据小诗的提示适当增加必要的细节，使内容和意思衔接。（字数为100左右）层层宝库找开来，黑宝纵横一排排。能记诸般悠悠事，不分古今和中外。Aseveryoneknows,itisveryusefulandinterestingforustoreadbooks.Byreadingbooks,wecanlearnwhatisgoingonbothathomeandabroad.Wecanalsoknowwhathashappenedorwillhappeninthepastyearsandinthefuture.Bookshelpustoenrichourknowledge.Someusefulandhelpfulbooksoftenopenourmindsandgiveusnewideas.Weunderstandhowtoliveahappylifeandlearnnewerandbetterwaysofdoingthingsthroughbooks.Assomeonesaid,Agoodbookisjustlikeagoodfriend.Thereisaproverbwhichsays,“Itisnevertoooldtolearn!随着A/H1N1流感在世界范围内的迅速传播、如何预防就变得非常重要。请你结合下面图画的内容为你校英语广播站写一篇广播稿向同学介绍如何预防A/H1N1流感。Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattentionplease?Ihavesomethingimportanttoannounce.WithA/H1N1virusspreadingrapidlyworldwide,moreandmorepeoplehavebeenkilled.However,ifwetakesomepreventivemeasures,wecanavoidbeinginfected.Herearesomeusefultipsforyou.First,weshoulddevelopgoodhabits,suchaswashingourhandsbeforemealsandafterusingthetoilet.Second,itisimportantforustokeepthewindowsopentoletthefreshairin.Third,we’dbettertakeregularexercisetoimproveourimmunesystem.Fourth,beforegoingtocrowdedplaces,weshouldwearmaskstoreducethechanceofbeinginfected.Lastbutnotleast,wecangetvaccinatedtopreventA/H1N1virusfromattackingus.Ifyoufollowmyadvice,I’msureyoucankeepA/H1N1virusawayandliveahealthylife.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.你们班四月二日组织了一次爬香山活动，请根据下图内容写一篇日记，完整记述当天发生的事情。TodaywewenttoclimbXiangshanMountain.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttherebybus.Atnineo’clockwearrivedatthefootofthemountainandstartedclimbing.Themountainwasveryhighandsomeofusgottiredsoon,butallofuswereveryexcited.Wecheeredhappilywhenwegottothetop.Theviewwaswonderful.Wehadourlunchthereandenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Unfortunatelywhenwebegantowalkdownthemountain,wewerecaughtinastorm.Facedwithunexpectedsituation,ourteacherremainedcalm,askingustohelpeachotherdownthemountain.Sowesh