雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson 6

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IELTSWRITINGLessonNine:小作文2饼状图MenWenttoGymDidn'tgotoGymWomenWenttoGymDidn'tgotoGymPieChart的审题过程:1.看文字信息2.标题审题标1\2\33.极端数据及其周围(与之接近)数据4.一般数据5.落单数据TASKI1.每个饼块在两个饼中排名第?占?%2.分类说:左饼到右饼上升/下降/保持不变3.每段中具体描写每个饼块,突出特点4.写完要素后将两个饼的数量比较一下*若两个饼的总量有不同,需要交代一下5.学会丰富百分比的表达和“占”的表达。不要一直用数字加百分比的格式,如25%。特定的数字可以采取多样性的表达,如25%=aquarterof,50%=halfof,50%=a,orthemajorityofTASKI:两个饼TASKI“占据”的讲法:A占了数据的百分比occupyconstitutemakeuptheresttheremainderTASKI1.A占了数据的百分比2.THEREBE3.数据做主语4.Thepercentageof…is…%.饼图的三句万能句型:1.数据+抄题+导入宾语Band52.主语+“占据”(先特征,后数据)Band63.剩余数据Band7解决方案:1.把相同的属性的柱状用线条勾画出来。以线状图或者是饼状图的方法来写。2.完成两维分析。TASKI:柱状图1.将相同属性的柱子顶端连接起来2.若横坐标是数字轴或时间轴,按曲线图写,否则按饼状图写法写P63TASKI:柱状图Thegraphshowsthechangingpatternsincommutingbytrain,car,tubeorbusforcommutersinLondonintheyears1960,1980and2000.Thenumberofpeopleusingtrainsatfirstrosefromjustunder20%in1960toabout28%in1980,butthenfellbacktoabout23%in2000.Useofthetubehasbeenrelativelystable,fallingfromaround27%ofcommutersin1960to22%in1980,butclimbingbacktoreach25%by2000.Ontheotherhand,theuseofcarsincreasedsteadilyfromjustover5%in1960to23%in1980,reachingalmost40%by2000,whereasthepopularityofbuseshasdeclinedsince1960,fallingfromjustunder35%in1960to27%in1980andonly15%in2000.TASKI表格题审题顺序:确定写作顺序(横?纵?)表格审题编号——先趋势,后数据在表格左边空白区域标上trend写出alltrends那句话(总分句)2min在表格右边空白区域进行数据方法的编号2-3min进行数据的描写10minTASKITABLE1.表格的描述顺序是以时间(趋势)作为主线,非时间作为辅线2.极端数字举例法3.范围法4.平均值举例法5.类比法6.反比法TASKI类比的四种句型:1.Thiswasthesimilarcasewith…2.Thiswastrueof…3.Sodid…4.Thiscanbeparalleledwith…反比的三种句型:1.Thiswastheoppositewith…2.Thiswasconversewith…3.Thiswascontraryto…表格图Thetablebelowshowstheresultsofasurveytofindoutwhatmembersofacitysportsclubthinkabouttheclub'sactivities,facilitiesandopeninghours.Thetablecomparestheopinionsofmaleandfemaleclubmembersabouttheservicesprovidedbyacitysportsclub.Wecanseefromtheresponsesthatthemalemembersaregenerallyhappyorsatisfiedwiththerangeofactivitiesattheclub,withonly5%dissatisfied.Incontrast,however,onlyabouttwo-thirdsoffemalememberswerepositiveabouttheactivityrangeandalmostathirdweredissatisfied.Thegendersweremoreinagreementabouttheclubfacilities.Only14%ofwomenand10%ofmenwereunhappywiththese,andthemajority(64and63%respectively)wasverypositive.Finally,thefemalerespondentsweremuchhappierwiththeclubopeninghoursthantheirmalecounterparts.Almostthree-quartersofthemwereverysatisfiedwiththeseandonly3%wereunhappy,whereasnearly40%ofthemenexpressedtheirdissatisfaction.Overall,thetableindicatesthatfemalemembersaremostunhappywiththerangeofactivities,whilemalemembersfeelthatopeninghoursaretheleastsatisfactoryaspectoftheclub.Thetablecomparestheopinionsofmaleandfemaleclubmembersabouttheservicesprovidedbyacitysportsclub.Wecanseefromtheresponsesthatthemalemembersaregenerallyhappyorsatisfiedwiththerangeofactivitiesattheclub,withonly5%dissatisfied.Incontrast,however,onlyabouttwo-thirdsoffemalememberswerepositiveabouttheactivityrangeandalmostathirdweredissatisfied.Thegendersweremoreinagreementabouttheclubfacilities.Only14%ofwomenand10%ofmenwereunhappywiththese,andthemajority(64and63%respectively)wasverypositive.Finally,thefemalerespondentsweremuchhappierwiththeclubopeninghoursthantheirmalecounterparts.Almostthree-quartersofthemwereverysatisfiedwiththeseandonly3%wereunhappy,whereasnearly40%ofthemenexpressedtheirdissatisfaction.Overall,thetableindicatesthatfemalemembersaremostunhappywiththerangeofactivities,whilemalemembersfeelthatopeninghoursaretheleastsatisfactoryaspectoftheclub.TASKI:混合图WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.ThetwopiechartsshowtheproportionyoungmenandyoungwomenwenttoGymandthebarchartbelowshowshowoftentheydidinLondonlastyear.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.MenWenttoGymDidn'tgotoGymWomenWenttoGymDidn'tgotoGym01020304050TwiceinadayOnceinaday3timesinaweek2timesinaweekOnceinaweekOnceinamonthOnceinayearWomenMenTASKIWecanseetheproportionofyoungmenandyoungwomenwenttoGymfromthetwopiechartsandthebarchartshowshowmanytimestheywenttherelastyear.Ingeneral,femaleswenttoGymlessfrequentlythanmalesandexercisedmostlytwiceinaweek.ThepiechartshowsthatabouttwothirdofthemalepopulationwenttoGymlastyear,whileonlylessthanhalfofthefemalepopulationwentthere.ThehighestpercentageofwomenwhowenttoGymwasapproximately33%,wasfortwiceinaweek.However,thispercentagewaslessthanthepercentageofmaleswenttoGym,whichwasapproximately42%.Malesworkedoutthemselvesmorecommonlyforonceaday,whichconstitutedjustover23%,3timesinaweek(about12%),onceinweek(approximately10%)andtwiceinaday(6%).FemaleswenttoGymmorecommonlythanmaleswerefor3timesinaweek(21%)andonceinweek(18%).Sevenpercentofmenandabout14%ofwomenseldomwenttoGym.TASKIWRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.InJune1996,anexperimentalfluvaccinewastrailedinalargecountrytownonfemalesonly.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.TASKI01234No.ofDeathsMarchtoMayJunetoAugustDeathsfromFluMFTASKINo.ofcasesofflu01000200030004000MarchMayJulySeptembNovembeFemaleMaleTASKIThefigur
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