雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson-1

IELTSWRITINGWelcometoIELTSWRITINGclass!若要花解语，倾国城。花下死，做鬼也风流。IELTSWRITINGTeachingPlanLessonOne:雅思写作简介+评分标准+写作步骤+如何写作首段LessonTwo:分论点的思维方法LessonThree:段落间的连接关系+如何写中间段+如何写末段LessonFour:雅思题型+话题分析LessonFive:小作文1LessonSix:小作文25.235.51各科均分（中国大陆A类考生）5.535.805.395.47writingreadingspeakinglistening中国考生的雅思考试成绩资料提供:雅思写作中中国考生所存在的主要问题：1.词汇匮乏，表达单一，词不达意2.语法基础差，文章多语法错误3.中国式的英语。4.Ifyoudonnotthinkclearly,youwillnotwriteclearly.知识面窄，思路不开阔5.缺乏必要的英文写作技巧，如段落的展开方式以及作文的组织结构等。HOW?WHAT?GenarlIntroduction时间字数题型考查能力分数比重A类G类Task120mins/15mins150wordsChart(line,pie,bar,flow)Table,mapLetter（complaint,request,apology…)客观描述信息和数据Task240mins/45mins250words议论文说理和论证雅思议论文考查什么能力？根据题目要求做出描述、进行论述或表明态度。不仅考查写作能力，同时也考查考生的思维和论证能力。IELTSWRITING：TASKIITaskII:lessthanorequalsto40minutesandmorethan250words一.TR（TaskResponse任务反应情况）二.CC（Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接）三.LR（LexicalResources词汇资源）四.GR&A（GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度）英文写作的特点：(第一条评分标准）pointsandsupportingpointsInwriting,anyideathatyouadvancemustbesupportedwithspecificreasonsordetails.WRITING中英文修辞大不同circular迂迴ChineseRhetoric枝状线状EnglishRhetoric具体讲：英语的布局谋篇原则通常为：从一般到具体、从概括到举例，从观点到案例再到数据支持。IELTSWRITING：TASKII任务反应易犯错误：1.总论点跑题（正评价，负评价，既有正评价又有负评价）2.分论点没有论证3.分论点的论据不够充分4.语言太绝对IELTSWRITING：TASKII总论点Whatisyouropinionaboutnucleartechnologies?IELTSWRITING：TASKII1.总论点跑题要求论述在某一限定范围内的话题。题干必须从头到尾，词词读完。Somepeoplesaythatitisnotrightforthegovernmenttospendsomuchmoneyonartisticprojectssuchasartgalleriesandsculptures.Doyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplethinkthatitisnecessarytopunishchildreninordertoteachthemthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong.Douyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswer.Ifyouagree,whatkindofpunishimentdoyouthinkshouldbegiventochildrenbyparentsandteachers?Givereasonsforyouranswer.IELTSWRITING：TASKII一个段落围绕一个观点来写，而且一个段落的段末不许出现新的观点。更重要的是，文章的最后一段一般不许出现新的观点。一般由重申论点和补充说明构成。IELTSWRITING：TASKII3.分论点的论据不够充分3.1论据不充分：文化差异3.2论据出处3.3论据不符合事实，建议：practical&cost-effective3.4论据以偏概全IELTSWRITING：TASKII4.语言太绝对4.1表达总论点的时候，一般适宜表达某个事件的好处超过坏处，或是坏处超过好处，而不是这个事件只有好处或是坏处。（多使用副词）4.2表达分论点的时候也需要恰到好处。Thecapitalpunishmentcannotbereplacedbyanyotherpunishments.Itcannotbereplacedbyanything,todayorfuture.IELTSWRITING：TASKII二.CC（Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接）关联词分为三种：段间，句间，和句内关联词。段间：写作流程中介绍句内关联词：主要用于句子扩展句间关联词：1.表转折：however,nevertheless…2.表递进：inaddition,moreover,furthermore…3.表因果：therefore,hence,thus,consequently…IELTSWRITING：TASKII三.LR（LexicalResources词汇资源）正式，准确，多样四.GR&A（GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度）准确，多样，时态，简单句+复杂句四大问题语法词汇搭配组织逻辑写作技巧中式思维中式语序中式表达方式注意!!!Requirements1.认真阅读历年真题2.对应相应不太会写的内容做提纲训练3.写作文后自己修改（语法，词汇）-先质后量4.教师批改后自己再次修改5.在复习时候，应该针对话题然后按照题型训练雅思写作的训练方法（1）精读（2）互译（3）改写何为模板？WRITING有用网站1.=01192.://针对社会热点话题的专家观点4.提供大量不同领域的文章5.：TASKII低于Band5的六种技术情况：1.没有完成写作任务2.格式错误3.字迹模糊，难以辨认4.Task1和Task2写反5.攻击考官1.不能缩写2.不能格式混乱3.不能使用口语化词语4.不能英式英语美式英语混用5.while的用法6.字迹模糊，难以辨认7.Task1和Task2写反8.题型判断错误学生常问的问题1.怎样才能得高分？2.分数是怎样得出来的？3.没有观点，不知道怎么展开怎么办？如何训练？4.得分点的分布？5.常考话题有哪些？IELTSWRITING构思----Brainstorming分析1：Childrennowwatchmoretelevisionthanatanytimeinthepast.Writeanessayforauniversitylecturerconsideringitspotentialrisksandbenefits.For:gainknowledgeobtaininformationwiden(broaden,expand)theirvision/horizonswatchitforrelaxation.importanteducationaltool.IELTSWRITINGAgainst:Physical:weakenchildren’seyesight/doharmto/impaircouchpotatoPatientgrowthin/switchthechannelStudy:1.wastetime2.takeuptoomuchofchildren’slimitedprecioustimewhichcanotherwisebeusedformorevaluableactivities,suchassportsorhomework,andthereforeresultinpooracademicperformance.Studentsbecomeaddictiveandtheycannotgetthemselvesawayfromthenegativeinfluenceoftelevision.IELTSWRITINGMind:Alienate/distancetheirrelationshipwithfamiliesadultonlyprogramsConfuse/puzzlechildrenMislead:violence/sexuallyappealingthingsIELTSWRITING1.审题2.构思IELTSWRITING1.审题1）人们现在工作压力越来越大，说说这种现象产生的原因及提出解决这一问题的建议.2）Manypeoplethinkthatnowadayspeoplearebeingsubjectedtomoreandmorepressureintheirwork,andthusarehavinglessandlesstimetorelax.Whatisyouropinion?IELTSWRITING3）最近一项调查表明青少年每周花14小时看电视，而和家庭成员在一起的是时间只有6小时。有人认为这会对他们和其他家庭成员间的关系造成不良的影响。你是否同意这一观点。4）有些父母几乎不和孩子呆在一起，他们让孩子独自安静的看电视。为什么会出现这样的现象，这种现象会导致什么样的后果？IELTSWRITINGBrainstorming分析2：Boardingschool:For：1.Cultivatethespiritofindependence,lookafterthemselves.2.Communicatewiththeirpeers,learntocooperateandtolerate,developasenseofteamworkandcollectivism.3.LesslikelytobespoiledIELTSWRITING1.Lackofadequatecommunicationandemotionalexchangewithparents,thuswideningthegenerationgap.2.Badforphysicaldevelopment3.Psychologicalhealth:homesick,lonely4.Pronetonegativeinfluence5.Expenditure/costAgainst:1.充分利用原题信息改写实例Atpresentitishardforcollegegraduatestofindjobs.Manypeopleclaimthatcollegeteachersshouldgiveprioritytopracticalcourseslikecomputerscienceandbusinessoversuchtraditionalonesashistoryandgeography.Whatdoyouthink?AtpresentThesedays,nowadays,atthepresenttime,currently,inthecontemporarysociety/worldHardFinditdifficulttodo,havedifficultiesind