英语基础写作―学会用复合句和非谓语动词

你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。[写作内容]请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。①Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.②Thesport,whichfirstappearedin1896,waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games.③ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOlympic.④However,notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshooting.⑤Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular,ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today.广东08高考基础写作范文：句子表达有何亮点？写作中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句，没有主句Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm.→Thekeeper,whohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,couldkeepcalminthestorm.2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子②Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,tearscamedownfromhisface.①Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,itismadeofglass.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.→OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.①Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,whichismadeofglass.②Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,withtearscomingdownfromhisface.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息②Weweredrivingoutintothecountry,andwesawourEnglishteachertakingabus,andthebuswascrowded.①Itisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing.→Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing.→Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry,wesawourEnglishteachertakingacrowdedbus.MyEnglishLearning①ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.②Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadeprogressinmyEnglish.③NowI’mdoingwellbothinwritingandreadinginEnglish.④ButIstillfindithardtolearnEnglish,suchassomedifficultidioms.⑤Difficultasitis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.请看范例从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实，“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子：A)Simplesentence:Hearingthenews,hewashappy.B)CompoundsentenceA:HegavemeabookbutIforgottobringitbackhome.C)CompoundsentenceB:Whatheisdoinghasnothingtodowithme.=Whenheheardthenews,hewashappy.Hereare3waystomakesentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。LiLi,aboyof19,wasborninGuangdongin1986.2)借助介词短语做定语如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandawhitejacket.如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。WiththehelpofTom,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。Theyarestandingunderthebigtree,waitingforthepresident.3)借助介词短语做状语II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：他给我钱，我不要。IwasjustwalkingdownthestreetcornerwhenIsawyou.如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你了。HegavemealotmoneybutIrefused.III.用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：1)名词性从句如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。ThatWangLicamelatetoschoolmadetheteacherveryangry.2)定语从句如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。China,whichliesintheeastofAsia,isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources.3)状语从句如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。Iwasdeeplymovedbythis,becauseIknowLeiFengisstilllivinginourhearts.学会运用复合句和非谓语动词①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.③Shespeaksadialect.④Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.用一句话表达不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句和非谓语动词第一步：拆分成几个简单句①不是人人都能学好英语。②小学生同时学汉语和英语。③这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句①NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.②ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.③ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.①NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.②ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.③ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.第三步：合并句子ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudybecausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.①NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.②ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.③ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.第三步：合并句子IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy方法2：becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.学会使用复合句和非谓语动词你来试试现象学生作文中出现很多错别字原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters网络语言：weblanguage要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容2.两句话要有连贯性第一句（两个信息点）：1.学生作文中出现很多错别字2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。①Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudents’compositions.Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudents’compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.合并句子：②Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.1.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters第二句:1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。①Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.2.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.3.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.合并句子：②Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.连接两句话：Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudents’compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.Moreover,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.