高中英语写作技巧方法

基础写作训练一.基础写作基本要求I.基础写作考我们什么能力?A.信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等]B.组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和合适性]C.连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]A.如何处理或整理信息?1.存在问题Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.…(1)IamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagencyandthelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople….错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并写作(1).docTheBenefitofReadingBooks1.世人都说金银好，而我认为读书才是无价宝。2.读书使人充实、完美，知识使社会进步。3.要坚持活到老，学到老。Somepeoplesaythatmoneyisthebestthingintheworld.ButIconsider（think）readingbooksasthebestandthemostpreciousthingonecaneverhave.Readingbooksisveryimportant.Firstofall,itisknowledgethatmakessocietydevelopandbyreadingbooksyoucangetallkindsofknowledge.Furthermore,readingbooksmakesyouaqualifiedpersonandmakesyourlifeenjoyable.Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.Nomatterwhattimeyourealizetheimportanceofreadingbooks,youcanenjoyitduringtherestofyourlifetime.Lovebooks,fortheyareyourbestfriends.总体信息（主题句）Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.(2)However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofus.Quiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.(Hehadahighfeverandwenttoseethedoctor.)(3)Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiastic,hecouldconcernoldmeninourgroup.错误诊断：‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达多个不同类型的信息内容。Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandhecouldconcernoldmeninourgroup.II.如何处理或整理信息?一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块；whowhatwhywhenwhere二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达；三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并，但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便合并。四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并；五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确表达B.组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和合适性]1.旅行社travelagency2.食物不合味口thefooddidn’tagreewithus3.他讲解清晰,生动。Heexplainedeverythingabouttheplacesinaclearandlivelyway.Hisexplanationaboutthoseplacesofinterestwasveryclearandvivid.4.货真价实的购物场所theshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainstheshopswherewecouldbuynicethingswithreasonableprices1.我表示对旅行社提供的服务总体感到满意。Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravellingcompany.Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelercentre.2.当地导游对游客非常热情，体贴，耐心照顾团中的老人。John,whowasthetravelleader,wasgetalongwitheverybodyandhewastookgoodcareoftheolder.travelagency.travelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.错句修正3.导游对游地讲解清晰、生动，增长了我们的见闻。Theinterviewoftheviewisclearandfunnyandit’sclearlythatweimproveknowledgeforJohn’sdirection.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedusbroadenourhorizons.4.饭馆提供的膳食不合口味。我们有些人不得不自买食物。Thedietprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tfitussomanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。Isuggestyoucanoffermoreandmoreshops.wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.错句修正例：1)Wearedon’tlikethefood.Wearedon’tlikethefood.2)Wedon’tsatisfiedwiththefood.Wedon’tsatisfiedwiththefood.3)Peoplehadtoboughtsomefood.Peoplehadtoboughtsomefood.4)Guide’sspokenisverylively.Guide’sspokenisverylively.weren’tbuyspeechC.连句成文信息内容的完整性和连贯性]存在问题Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,ithelpedusbroadenourhorizons.Thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofus,quiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.错误诊断：内容缺乏连贯•Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedusbroadenourhorizons.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Inaddition,wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.1如何在写作中避免句式单一Rewritethesentences1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudieshard.方法一.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Whentheyarrivedattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.IfIamgivenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.InordertoimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.方法一.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非谓语动词)1.听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错.__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.HearingHavingbeentoldinvitedTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非谓语动词)1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3，