PET作文

1范文ThisispartofaletteryoureceivefromanEnglishfriend.Anewrestauranthasjutopenedinmytownandit’swonderful.Haveyougotafavoriterestaurant?Tellmeaboutthefoodandwhatyoulikeabouttherestaurant.Nowwritealettertoyourfriendaboutarestaurant.Sampleanswerofquestion7:DearElaine,Manythanksforyourletter;itwasreallynicetohearfromyouagain.It'ssuchalongtimesincewewrotetoeachother.Inyourletter,youaskedmeifIhadafavoriterestaurant.Inmytown,whichiscalledTours,wehavelotsofrestaurants.ButthenameofmyfavoriterestaurantisLaTrattoria.It'sanItalianrestaurant,whichissituatedintheoldestquarterwhereeveryonegoestohaveadrink,butit'smostlyfrequentedbystudents.IlikethisrestaurantbecausewecanhaveItalianfoodbutalsotypicalfoodfrommyarealikecheese,duckpate.Theatmosphereisverypleasantbecausethereisasoftmusicandthepeoplewhoworkthere,areveryfriendly.2IfyoucomeinTours,wewillgotohaveameal.Iamsureyouwilllovethisrestaurant.Givemyregardstoyourfamily.Ilookforwardtoseeingyousoon.Love考官评价：该信函句式变化多样，词汇量大，如theatmosphereisverypleasant,thepeoplewhoworkthereareveryfriendly。另外作者用了简单的关联词如and,but,if等使文章更加连贯，更加完整。当然文中也有几处小错误，如asoftmusic，但是总的说来行文流畅，读者阅读起来很轻松。可以得满分。