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写作二（满分15分）一、评分原则1.归档原则：本题满分15分，根据短文覆盖内容要点的情况及语言质量分为4个档次。词数少于80，下调一个档次。2.总体要求：内容完整、覆盖要点、行文连贯；语法正确、词汇丰富。3.英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。第四档12分—15分很好的达到总体要求·覆盖所有内容要点；·语言运用得体，词汇丰富,几乎没有语言错误；·有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第三档8分—11分达到总体要求·覆盖所有内容要点；语言运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第二档4分—7分基本达到总体要求·虽漏掉个别内容要点，但覆盖了大部分主要内容；·语言运用基本得体，词汇与语法有一些错误，但不影响理解；·能够使用简单的语句间连接成分。三、各档次给分范围和要求第一档1分—3分未达到总体要求·明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容；·语言错误较多，严重影响理解；·文章不连贯。0分内容太少，无法评判，写的内容均与所要求内容无关；所写内容无法看清等。语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。4联句成文：注意：①主语和谓语②背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）③逻辑关系④开头与结尾⑤语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Practice书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.④Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.Asisindicatedfromthepicture,peopleareunderpressurebecauseoftoomanysocialactivities．Nowadays,ithasbecomearoutineforpeopletobeinvolvedinmanyactivitiesafterwork,suchasdrinkingwithfriends,havingdinnerwithcolleaguesandjoininginparties,whichmeansdullrepetition．Seldomdotheyhavetimetoreflectandimprovethemselves,nottomentionreadingandself-learning．It’stimeforpeopletoslowdownandtobeleftalonetodosomethingthatmakessense．DearJoe,Howareyougoingrecently?I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthewebsite“GivesMeHope”whichisenjoyingitspopularityinyourcountry．It’saboutsharingoptimisticstoriesinplainlanguage,suchaslove,courage,help.Movedandexcited,Ireadeverystory,feelinglifeisfullofhope．ThewebsitewhichIstronglyrecommendtoyouisupdatedfrequently．Hopefully,Icanreadyourstoryonthewebsitesinceyouareanoutgoingperson,goodattellingstories.Thewebsiteis．Lookingforwardtoyourreply．Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负(reducingthelearningload)给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.9分I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkwasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.However,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,Ialso