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大学英语四级写作Fangfang四级作文类型1现象分析、问题解决型2观点对比型3道理论证型4图表文I.OnExcessivePackaging•1.目前很多商品存在过度包装现象••2.出现这一现象的原因••3.我对这一现象的看法和建议•NooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethatgoodsarewrapped（包装）inflaring（华美的，花哨的）boxesorbags.Takingalookaround，wecanfindexampleswithease：asmallcomputerispackedinathickandheavy（又厚又重）carton，clothesareputtedinawell-designedplasticbags（塑料袋）whichprintedvariouskindsofpatternsandcolorsandsoon.•Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?Ontheonehand,inordertoearnmoreeconomicgains(经济收益),aconsiderablenumberof（很多）manufacturesusuallywraptheirproductswithunnecessarybutappealing(吸引人的)materialsaimingatattractingcustomer’sattention,arousingtheircuriosityandthenstimulatingtheirpurchasingdesire（吸引顾客的注意力，引发他们的好奇心并刺激他们的购买欲望）.•Ontheotherhand,quiteafewcustomersbelievethatthemoredelicatethepackageseems，thesuperiorthequalitywillbe（包装越精美，产品质量就越好）,thenotionhasalsoencouragedthetrendofexcessivepackaging.•Tochangethissituation,Ithinkweshouldtakethefollowingmeasures.First,lawsmustbemadeandimplementedtoimposerestrictionon（实行限制）excessivepackaging.Moreover,apubliceducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoarousecustomers'consciousnessthatpackagingdoesn'tisn’tequaltoquality.Onlyinthiswaycanweputanendtothistrend.★问题（现象）、分析原因、给出建议•1.NooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethat…•Takingalookaround，wecanfindexampleswithease:•2.Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?•Ononehand,….Ontheotherhand,…etc.•3.Tochangethissituation,Ithinkweshouldtakethefollowingmeasures.问题解决型作文模板开头段：1)Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthat---------.(2)Forexample,----------------中间段：(3)Thesehavecausedmuchharm/manyproblems.(4)Firstofall------------.(5)Inaddition/Furthermore,-------(6)Finally/Lastly/Lastbutnotleast/Whatismore--------------------结尾段：(7)Inaword------------.•(7)Therefore,itishightimethatwetakestepstostop------.•(8)Weshouldstartfromtriflesaroundourselves.•(7)AsfarasIamconcerned-------------------.•(7)Foronething------------.Foranother,-----------.•(7)Therefore,Iamsure------------.2.OnlineShopping•1.指出现象:现在网上购物已成为一种时尚•2.说明利弊：网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题•3.提出建议•Withthehelpoftherapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology,onlineshoppingiscomingintofashioninmostofcities.•Itisbeyonddoubt(毫无疑问)thatInternetshoppingenjoys(享有)ahostofvirtues(许多优点).Fromtheperspectiveof(从......的角度看）consumer(消费者),itcansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon’thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.•Fortheretailers(零售商),itcancutsomecosts(减少一些成本)forthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds(流动资金).Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployees(雇员)comparedwiththetraditionaltrademode(贸易方式).•Despitethevariousstrengths(优点)ofInternet-basedshopping,thedarksides(阴暗面，不好的一面)ofitalsoexist,however.Takesomeconcrete(具体的)examples.First,lackoffacetofacedeal(面对面交易)makesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.Second,peoplewilllosethefunofbargaining(讨价还价).•Itisundeniablethat（不可否认）shoppingontheinternethasbecomeanirresistible（不可阻挡的）trendinmodernsociety.It’sofgreaturgencythat(...迫在眉睫)weneedtoregulate(规定)therelativelawsaccordancewith(根据)therapidgrowthofonlineshopping.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoythepleasureandconvenienceofonlineshoppingwithouttheconcernofbeingcheated.★利弊问题总结段模板•Frommyownperspective,thebenefitsofonlineshoppingoutweigh(大于）itsdisadvantages.Simplyput(简单地说),wearesupposedto(应该)capitalizeon(利用)itsmerits(优点)toserveourpurposes（满足我们的需要）anddoallinourpower(尽我们的力量)tominimize（降低）itsadverseimpacts（不利影响）onusmeanwhile(同时）.2013年6月英语四级作文图画作文•图画作文写作思路：•描述图片、阐明观点、给出建议•第一段：描述图片•第二段：阐明观点•第三段：总结观点，给出建议•图画作文：大学生在校从商,创业,好不好?是学业重要,还是社会经历重要?•Beingfacedwithvariousandcomplicatedrequirementsofemploymentmarket,somestudentsbegintoquestionthesignificanceoflearningbasicknowledgeandskills,justaswhatisexposedinthecartoonabove.•However,itisabsolutelywrongtoholdthatidea.Owingtothefactthatwearelivinginacompetitivesociety,thedevelopmentofoursocietydemandsthatwearmourselveswithbasicskillsandup-to-dateknowledgesoastokeepupwiththepaceofoursociety.•Aninvestigationshowsthatmillionsofpeoplespendtimeandenergygraspingskillsandtechnologysothattheycankeepafavorablepositioninjobmarketorenhancetheiropportunities.Whilefocusingoncreativity,innovation,managementandleadershipskills,weshouldneverforgetthefundamentalimportanceofthemorebasic,essentialskills。•••Itisuniversallyknownthatopportunityisimportant,butyoucoulddonothingwithitifyouarenotequippedwithcompetitiveforces,suchbasicreadingandcalculatingskills,toseizeit.TheImportanceofLearningBasicSkills•Whatwecanseefromthecartoonisthattheteacherisinstructingthestudentssomebasicmathematicskills.However,somestudentsarewonderingthatifitwillbeoutdatedinthefuture.Thepictureimplicitlyraisesthequestionoftheimportanceofthefundamentalskillsusstudentslearninourclasses。•Itisworthmentioningthatthoseseeminglybasicandelementaryskillswelearnedinschoolactuallyplayasignificantlyindispensableroleinourfutureworks.Thepervasiveundervaluationonelementaryskillsthatwefindamongcurrentstudentsandevensometeacherscanlargelybeattributedtotheirlackofvisionoffutureandthoroughunderstandingontheknowledge.•Afterall,it’sanobvioustruththatwecouldnotbuildamagnificentmansi