高中英语建议信课件

Persuasivewriting----AletterofsuggestionWhatisagoodwritingpassage(group1)1.beautifulsentences2.correctgrammarstructures3.logicalwriting4.nicehandwriting…AgoodpieceofwritingExcellence（优良性）－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道Coherence(连贯性）Accuracy（准确性）－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。—准确无误地表达作者意图—覆盖要求的所有要点—单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误Aletterofsuggestion(group2)1.practicalwriting(应用文).2.fourelements:Salutation(称呼),mainbody(正文),ending(结束语)andsignature(签名).3.tense:present/future4.threeparagraphsFirstPara.IntentionSecondPara.suggestions/reasonsThirdPara.endingUsually-usedexpressions(group3)首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。Iamwritingtoexpressmyideasconcerning...Iamwritingtosuggestthat….(虚拟)主体：提出建议并阐述理由。IfIwereyou,Iwould...Itseemstomethatyoucouldalso...Ontheonehand…Ontheotherhand…结尾：希望收信人接受建议。Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Practice(group4)假如你是第一中学二年级的学生李华，你校就要不要在学校内开办艺术画廊征求全校师生建议，请你给校委员会写一封信，给出自己的建议及理由，内容包括：1.建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。有用词汇：平台Platform开阔眼界broadenone’shorizons丰富enrichPara1.你是第一中学二年级的学生李华,建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；Para2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。有用词汇：平台Platform开阔眼界broadenone’shorizons丰富enrichPara3希望建议被采纳、落款DearCommitteemembers,I’mLiHua,oneofgradetwostudentsinNO.1middleschool.I’mwritingtosuggestthatweshouldopenanartgallerytodisplaystudents’ownworks.Thereasonsareasfollows.First,theartgallerycanprovideaplatformforusstudentstoshowourselves,whichhelpstoimprovestudents’self-confidenceaswellascommunicationskills.Second,Itcanalsohelptobroadenstudents’horizons.Third,itisagoodwaytoenrichschoolcultureaswell.Thanksforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua