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读后续写导练2学案“Willyoucomewithus,Susan?”criedseveralgirlstoaschoolmate.“Wearegoingtothewoods;docome,too.”“Ishouldliketogowithyouverymuch,”repliedSusan,withasigh,“butIcan’tfinishthetaskgrandmothersetmetodo.”“Howtiresomeitmustbetostyathometoworkonaholiday!”saidRose,oneofthegirls,shakingherhead.“Susan’sgrandmotheristoostrict.”Susanheardtheremark,and,asshebentherhead,shewipedawayatear,andthoughtofthepleasantafternoonthegirlswouldspendgatheringwildflowersinthewoods.Soonshesaidtoherself,“Whatharmcantherebeinmovingthemarkgrandmotherputinthestocking?Thewoodsmustbeverybeautifultoday,andhowIshouldliketobeinthem!”“Grandmother,”saidshe,afewminutesafterwards,“I’mreadynow.”“What,sosoon,Susan?”Hergrandmothertookthework,andlookedatitveryclosely.“True,Susan,”saidshe,layinggreatstressoneachword,“true,Icounttwentyturnsfromthemark;and,asyouhavenevercheatedme,youmaygoandamuseyourselfasyouliketherestoftheday.”Susan’scheekswerered,andshedidnotsay“Thankyou.”Assheleftthecottage,shewalkedslowlyaway,notsingingasusual.“Why,hereisSusan!”thegirlscried,whenshejoinedtheircompany;“butwhatisthematter?Whyhaveyouleftyourdear,oldgrandmother?”theyasked.“Thereisnothingthematter.”AsSusanrepeatedthesewords,shefeltthatshewastryingtocheatherself.Shehadactedalie.Atthesametimesherememberedhergrandmother’swords,“Youhavenevercheatedme.”“Yes,Ihavecheatedher,”saidshetoherself.“Ifsheknewall,shewouldnevertrustmeagain.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Whenthelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Now,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________导学1：原文内容摘要情节1:Susanwasinvitedtothewoodsfullofflowersbutcouldn’tgo,notfinishtheworkofgrandmother情节2:Susanmovedthemarkinthestocking,cheatedhergrandmother情节3:Susanwasallowedtogo,withredcheeks,feelingguilty导学2：续写情节推理Paragraph1:可能的情节发展从上文情节1和3可推知：othergirlsenjoythemselves,Susannothappy从Paragraph2的段首语可知：theymadeacrown,thecrownwasforSusan合理的细节增加：thereasonwhythecrownwasforSusan可用词汇及篇章技巧1.可用的关键词：flowers,Rose2.其它可用的词语：enjoyoneself,but(Susan和她的伙伴们的心情对比)Paragraph2:可能的情节发展从情节3和Paragraph2的段首语可推出：Susanwouldrefusetowearthecrownandexplainthereasongobackhomeandapologize可以详细描述的情节：Susan拒绝佩戴花冠的情节及情感表现可用词汇及篇章技巧1.可用的关键词：cheated,tears,grandmother,home2.其他的可用词语：notdeserve,placeonthehead,apologize3.在描述Susan的错误时，可以引用原文中的相关语句：removethemarkgrandmotherputinthestocking导学3：续写微作文1.她的伙伴们都在到处跑着，自我娱乐，可Susan却独自坐在草坪上，希望此刻她能在家中，和奶奶诉说自己的过错。（用wishing作伴随状语，注意其后用虚拟语气）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.当大家说着这些话的时候①，花冠戴到了Susan的头上。Susan立刻摘下了花冠，扔到了地上，说：“不要给我花冠，我不配！我欺骗了我的奶奶。”当她说这些的时候，泪水滑过了她的脸颊②。（①中用被动语态；②中用flowdown或rundown,注意down要用介词）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________导学4：根据前面的指导，完成读后续写______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Ⅲ.续写微作文1.Hercompanionswererunningaboutenjoyingthemselves,butSusansataloneonthegrass,wishingshewereathomethismomenttellingherfaulttohergrandmother.2.Asthesewordswerespoken,thecrownwasplacedonherhead.InamomentSusantookitoff,andthrewitontheground,saying,“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit!Ihavecheatedmygrandmother.”Whileshewassaying,tearswereflowingdownhercheeks.Ⅳ.根据前面的指导，完成读后续写Paragraph1:Whenthelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods,hercompanionsranaboutenjoyingthemselves,butSusansatonthegrass,wishingshewereathomeadmittingherfault.AfterawhileRosecriedout,“Letusmakeacrownofflowers,andputitontheheadofthebestgirlhere.”Soonthecrownwasfinished.AllthegirlsagreedSusanwasthebestgirlbothinschoolandathome,sotheydecidedshewastowearit.Paragraph2:“Now,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”Asthesewords