关于雅思写作句式-14种句式变换(高分内容)

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关于雅思写作句式:14种句式变换(高分内容)谁都知道写作文句式单调不是好事,但却很少有人能参透到底怎样才能让句子丰富多样。传说中的句式多样化一直高深莫测,让考生们想当郁闷。如果你的写作单项目标是6.5或者7分的话,请把下面这些剑桥范文变化句式的不宣之秘熟练掌握并且积极使用。对于只需要6分的同学,如果今天还不是很累,也不妨很快地看看以便有个印象。考官们,不好意思,是pat出卖了你们“压箱底”的宝贝……A句首状语提前雅思写作里状语提前是一种相当拿分的句式,遗憾的是很多同学却没有意识到:所谓状语提前就是把一个由副词、介词、现在分词或动词不定式形成的小短语放在句首。这种句式最大的好处就是在一堆长句子里突然出现一个短语,让句子产生一种长短结合的节奏感。剑桥考官范文中的状语提前可以用“海量”一词来形容,请大家认真体会下面的剑桥例句中放在句首的状语所产生的效果:Becauseitismorelikely(更有可能的)nowthatbothparentswork,thereislittleopportunityforchildrentostayintheirownhomeuptothatage.instead,theywillprobablygotanurseryschool(幼儿园,与nursinghome不同)whentheyaremuchyounger.Overall,ithinkanabilitytokeepclearperspective(视角)inlifeisamoreessential(重要的,核心的)factorinachievinghappiness.Unfortunately,professionalsfromotherfieldswhomakeamuchgreatercontributiontohumansociety,arepaidsomuchlessthatitishardtodisagreewiththestatement.Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofcomputerskillsforyoungchildrencannotbedenied.Inadditiontothefinancialbenefits,somejobsbringintellectuallyrewards(智力上的回报).(inadditionto…在地道的英式英语中也用apartfrom…来代替)Therearenotmanyjobopportunitiesavailable.Accordingly,thecompetitionforjobsisincreasinglyfierce.Oddlyenough(奇怪的是,类似也可以写strangelyenough),mostpeopleseemtoenjoysayingwhichonesarebad,andthensaysomeareslightlybetter.Surely,fewpeoplewouldseektopreservesuchtraditionsaslivingincaves.Interestingly,areasonableamountofpressureseemstomakethemajorityofemployeesmoreproductive.Theconsumptionoffoodandclothingcamedownafter1980.Similarly,fuelpricesfellquiteconsiderably.Obviously,educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencaneffectivelybetaughttoacquiredifferentskills.Specifically,somelawsprohibit(禁止)actsofthiskind.Intermsof(就……而言)technology,theiradultworldwillbechangingconstantly.Justlikethemoviestars,theyliveextravagant(奢华的)lifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.Likeself-awareness(自我意识),thisisalsodifficulttoachieve,butIthinkthesearethetwofactorsthatmaybethemostimportantforachievinghappiness.Inmanyways,thehistoryofcivilisationisthehistoryoftechnology.Insomecases,anemployeeisworkinginajobthatsuitsneithertheirskillsnortheirpersonality.Asaresultofmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountrybecomestarsandcelebrities(名人).Tobecomesuccessful,moreskillsanddedication(奉献)arerequired.(动词不定式前置)Strugglinginpoverty,peopleinthesecountriesbelieveinternationalaidisessentialandshouldbecontinued.(分词放在句首)Withoutthenaturaltalent,continuoustrainingwouldbeneitherattractivenorproductive.(介词短语前置)Withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ithinkitbynomeans(固定短语,绝对不是)pointless(没有意义的)totrytokeeptraditionsalivewithtechnology.类似的在地道英文中常见的状语前置词还有traditionally,/historically,/essentially,(本质上讲,)/inessence,等。B句中插入短语同样的道理,在雅思作文中,句子中间也经常可以引入一个小短语,让长句子显得更加灵活,请看下面的例句:Thiswillaffectthejobmarket,which,afterall,isakeytargetinanyeconomicplan.Feelingsaboutone'sjobmustreflecthowanindividualfeelsabouthisorherlife,andbecauseofthis,jobsatisfactionisindeedveryimportant.Sportstarsandpopstars,forexample,aresoonreplacedbythenextyounger,moreenergeticgeneration.C句尾用短语结束剑桥范文中有时也会在一句话的结尾安插一个小短语,给过长的句子增添一点“亲和力”。例如:Apersonneedstofeelthattheyaredoingvaluedandvaluablework,sopositivefeedbackfromsuperiorsisveryimportantinthisrespect.(请注意respect在这里不是“尊敬”的意思,而是指“某方面”,也可以用inthisregard来表达)。Somejobsarerepetitiveandboring,andlabourrelationsmaybepoor,whichleadstoresentment(仇恨)andinsecurity(不安全感)ratherthantojobsatisfaction.Asenseoffulfilment(成就感)isalsoencouragedifaworkerfeelsthejobisworthdoingbecauseitcontributestosocietyortheeconomyasawhole.Achildwilllearntointeractwithdifferentpeopleandsomechildrenlearntocommunicateveryearlybecauseofthis.D善用副词副词在英语中可以用来修饰形容词、动词甚至全句。由于其用法的高度灵活性,剑桥考官频频用副词来丰富自己的句式。请看下面的实例:Itoftenseemsthattheamountofmoneytheyareabletoearninashorttimecannotpossiblybejustified(站得住脚的)bytheamountofworktheydo.Thegapbetweentheirearningsandthoseofpeoplewhoworklessselfishlyforthegoodofsocietyhasbeenwidening.Teacherscontinually(持续地)complainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombat(解决)thesituation.Aproduct'ssuccesscannotbesolely(仅仅)attributedtoitsadvertising.Interestingly,technologycanpositivelycontributetothekeepingaliveoftraditionalskillsandwaysoflife.Somepeoplemayarguethatsuchnewtechnologycanhelpchildrentodevelopphysically,intellectuallyandemotionally.Ideally,alltheweaponsofmassdestructionshouldbeeliminated(消除,消灭),butinreality,theeliminationofsuchweaponswouldcauseseriousnationalsecurityconcerns.在雅思作文中涉及讨论某问题的解决方案的时候经常会写“从理论上讲……但事实上……”,对应的地道英文表达有:intheory,/theoretically,/hypothetically.…Butinpractice,/butinactuality,/butrealistically,…E倒装句这种语法现象很多同学都学过,但却往往忘记在雅思作文中使用。不过考官们可从来没忘记:Onlyinthiswaycanthisproblembeeffectivelysolved.Wecanseethatnotonlyarethereverylargedifferencesbetweentheseeconomies,butthatthesegapsarewidening.Strangeasitmayseem,parents'attentionsometimeshinders(阻碍)students'academicdevelopment.Equallyimportanttosuccessinlearningaforeignlanguageisconstantattentiontodetails.BeitClintEastwood,DavidBeckhamorGordonBrown(英国现任首相),oneindividualcannothavedoneallalonewhatseemstohavebeenachievedbyhimself.(这里的beit…是一种很特殊的倒装形式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