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新年词汇春节SpringFestival拜年payanewyearvisit爆竹鞭炮firecracker除夕EveofChineseNewYear春联Springcouplets辞旧迎新ringouttheoldyearandringinthenewyear饺子Jiaozi庙会templefair鸣钟辞旧岁ringouttheoldyear年画(traditional)NewYearpictures年夜饭theEvefeast;年终大扫除Year-endhouseholdcleaning守岁stayuplateontheNewYear'sEve团圆饭familyreuniondinner压岁luckymoney,giftmoney舞龙dragondance一、Languageerrorsinwriting纠错1.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudyingEnglish.Itbadforourhealth.IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.2.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.Myfavoritesportisrun.Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.3.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.4.副词位置错误Iverythankher.Iverylikefootball.Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.5.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbody.Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.Theyaregoodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.6.缺介词或介词错误IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhometohelpme.Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其他错误It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.(缺主语)(句型错误)Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling(拼写)(others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter(大小写)Punctuation(标点符号)6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense(时态)Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形)10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoGuiyangbyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配)14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords(漏词)18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order(词序)Usingwrongword(选词错误)22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoGuiyangbybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoGuiyangonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish(中式英语)Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)2.是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)3.是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)•主谓是否一致•动词的时态•语态的使用是否正确•词组的搭配是否合乎习惯…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting1.字迹乱,划痕较多,字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大,显得不紧凑;或太小,太密,看不清,占不满格。3字数太多,显得太罗嗦,出格就看不见了。字数太少,空太多格,会被误认为字数不够,不会得高分。规范三写:大小写,拼写,书写以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文,提示如下:1孙老师,25岁,1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽,深受同学欢迎;实战训练Pre-writing1.审:2.定:“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文记叙文,第三人称,一般现在时篇章结构:三段式首段:个人简历正文:教学特色尾段:作者的评价befashionablelovestudents,andcareaboutthestudentsbelivelyandinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列1.打扮入时2.热爱学生,关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽,深受欢迎MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing4.连:连词成句,连句成篇复写Rewriting:5、美——润色丰富要点;6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后,认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。MissSun,ourEnglishteacher,is25yearsold,and1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Sinceshelovesusandcaresaboutourneeds,sheisveryhelpfulinourdailylife,Notonlyissh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