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真题再现【2013年广东高考分值-15分】请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。志愿者的选拔1.到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星(theMars)的志愿者。志愿者的条件2.至少18岁；3.做好不回地球的准备；4.愿与他人保持良好的关系。专家的观点5.火星生活条件太艰苦；6.面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。志愿者观点7.厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；8.如果成功，就是人类英雄。【写作指导WritingInstruction】1.认真审题CheckInformationCarefully2.整合信息OrganizeInformationLogically1）确定题材新闻报道类news2）确定文章主题第一句3）确定人称/时态根据要点的逻辑关系进行组合：12,3,45,67,83.翻译组句MakeSentenceCorrectly报道客观真实，语言通俗易懂4w---who/whatwhen/where第三人称/一般过去(现在/将来)时1)参考句型和词组：1.到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星(theMars)的志愿者。1.1AboutthirtyvolunteerswhowanttoimmigratetotheMarswillbechosenfromallovertheworldbytheyearof2015.志愿者：选出：全球：choose，select,pickoutvolunteer,person,peopleallovertheworld,thewholeworld,theglobaldifferentpartoftheworld1.2By2015,aboutthirtyvolunteerswillbeselectedfromthewholeworldandsenttotheMars.2)参考句型和词组：志愿者的条件2.至少18岁；3.做好不回地球的准备；4.愿与他人保持良好的关系。2.1Thevolunteersshouldbeatleast18yearsold,bepreparednottoreturntotheEarth,andbewillingtokeepagoodrelationshipwithothers.至少：做好不回地球的准备：愿与...保持良好的关系：bepreparednottoreturn(goback)totheEarthBereadyforlivingontheMarsforeveratleastbewillingtokeepagoodrelationshipwith...Likecontectingwith...2.2Thevolunteersshouldbeatleast18yearsold,bereadyforlivingontheMarsforever,andlikecontectingwithdifferentpeople.3)参考句型和词组：专家的观点5.火星生活条件太艰苦；6.面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。3.1ThelivingconditionsonMarsareveryhardbecausetheyhavetofacetheextremelycoldclimate,lonelinessandfear.火星生活条件太艰苦：面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧：thelivingconditionsonMarsareveryharditisverydifficultforustoliveonMarsfacetheextremely(severe/very)coldclimate,lonelinessandfear(scare)3.2ItisverydifficultforustoliveonMars,becauseoftheseverecoldclimate,lonelinessandscare.4)参考翻译：志愿者观点7.厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；4.1VolunteersareeagertoexperiencedifferentlifeonMars,fortheyfeelboredofthelifeonEarth.4.2BecausevolunteersaretiredoflivingonEarth,theywanttoexperiencedifferentlifeonMars.8.如果成功，就是人类英雄。5)参考翻译：5.1Iftheysucceed,theywillberegardedastheheroesofhumankind.5.2Ifsuccessful,theywillbecomehuman’sheroes.1.到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星(theMars)的志愿者。1.1ItisreportedthataboutthirtyvolunteerswhowanttoimmigratetotheMarswillbechosenfromallovertheworldbytheyearof2015.1.2Asisreported,by2015,aboutthirtyvolunteerswillbeselectedfromthewholeworldandsenttotheMars.4.润色成篇PolishArticleProperly【写作指导】据报道：Itisreportedthat...,Asisreported...,Accordingtothereport...志愿者2.至少18岁；3.做好不回地球的准备；4.愿与他人保持良好的关系。2.1However，thevolunteersshouldbeatleast18yearsold,bepreparednottoreturntotheEarth,andbewillingtokeepagoodrelationshipwithothers.2.2Butthevolunteersshouldbeatleast18yearsold,bereadyforlivingontheMarsforever,andlikecontectingwithdifferentpeople.4.润色成篇However,But然而(可是)，5.火星生活条件太艰苦；6.面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。3.1ExpertsremindedusthatthelivingconditionsonMarsareveryhardbecausetheyhavetofacetheextremelycoldclimate,lonelinessandfear.3.2ScientistspointedoutthatitisverydifficultforustoliveonMarsbecauseoftheseverecoldclimate,lonelinessandscare.4.润色成篇ExpertsremindedusthatScientistspointedoutthat专家提醒我们科学家指出志愿者7.厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；4.1Inspiteofthis,volunteersarestilleagertoexperiencedifferentlifeonMars,fortheyfeelboredofthelifeonEarth.4.2Evenso,volunteersaretiredoflivingonEarth,sotheywanttoexperiencedifferentlifeonMars.8.如果成功，就是人类英雄。5.1What’smoreimportant,someofthemthinkthat,iftheysucceed,theywillberegardedastheheroesofhumankind.5.2Mostimportantly,ifsuccessful,theywillbecomehuman’sheroes.4.润色成篇Inspiteofthis，Evenso,What’smoreimportant,someofthemthinkthat...Mostimportantly,...尽管如此，更重要的是，有人认为...最重要的,...1.1ItisreportedthataboutthirtyvolunteerswhowanttoimmigratetotheMarswillbechosenfromallovertheworldbytheyearof2015.【范文一】15分2.1However，thevolunteersshouldbeatleast18yearsold,bepreparednottoreturntotheEarth,andbewillingtokeepagoodrelationshipwithothers.3.1ExpertsremindedusthatthelivingconditionsonMarsareveryhardbecausetheyhavetofacetheextremelycoldclimate,lonelinessandfear.4.1Inspiteofthat,volunteersarestilleagertoexperiencedifferentlifeonMars,fortheyfeelboredofthelifeonEarth.5.1What’smoreimportant,someofthemthinkthat,iftheysucceed,theywillberegardedastheheroesofhumankind.1.2Asisreported,by2015,aboutthirtyvolunteerswillbeselectedfromthewholeworldandsenttotheMars.【范文二】15分2.2However,thevolunteersshouldbeatleast18yearsold,bereadyforlivingonEarthforever,andbewillingtokeepagoodrelationshipwithothers.3.2ScientistspointedoutthatitisverydifficultforustoliveonMars,becauseoftheseverecoldclimate,lonelinessandscare.4.2Evenso,becausevolunteersaretiredoflivingonEarth,theywanttoexperiencedifferentlifeonMars.5.2Mostimportantly,ifsuccessful,theywillbecomehuman’sheroes.【总结Summary】1.认真审题2.整合信息3.翻译组句4.润色成篇1.据报道：Itisreportedthat...,Asisreported...,2.然而：However3.专家提醒我们：Expertsremindedusthat...科学家指出：Scientistspointedoutthat...4.尽管如此：Inspiteofthis,Evenso,5.更重要的是：What’smoreimportant,...最重要的：Mostimportantly,...1.新闻报道是记叙文的一种,新闻报道的关键在于客观真实，通俗易懂。因此语言可以相对平实一点。不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。2.新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topicsentence),这个句子常包含4W---who/what,when/where；而how和why即事件的过程和细节则在下文交代。3.平时多练习英语从句的翻译及写作，熟能生巧。4.注意收集一些新闻题材类的常用语及文章的连接词PracticeMakesPerfect!【Homework】PracticeMakesPerfect!